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假设你是李辉,下周日社区将举办植树节活动,请给你的英国朋友Peter写一封信,邀请他参加。
内容包括:
1. 提出邀请并说明活动目的;
2. 阐述树的重要性及如何保护树木;
3. 表达期待。
注意:
1. 词数60~70,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 信件中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Dear Peter,
Our community will organise a tree-planting activity next Sunday. So I am writing the letter to invite you to join in this activity.
Come and join us! I am looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hui
假设你是李辉,下周日社区将举办植树节活动,请给你的英国朋友Peter写一封信,邀请他参加。
内容包括:
1. 提出邀请并说明活动目的;
2. 阐述树的重要性及如何保护树木;
3. 表达期待。
注意:
1. 词数60~70,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 信件中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Dear Peter,
Our community will organise a tree-planting activity next Sunday. So I am writing the letter to invite you to join in this activity.
We hope that through the activity, more people can take action to protect our environment.
It is no secret that trees mean a lot to us humans. For one thing, they can clean the air and make our world beautiful.
For another, lots of useful products come from trees for our basic needs. Without them, the world would be different.
As trees are so important, we must do our best to protect them. For example, cut down fewer trees and plant as many trees as possible.
Also, it is a good idea to share knowledge of protecting trees with others.
Come and join us! I am looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hui
答案
One possible version:
Dear Peter,
Our community will organise a tree-planting activity next Sunday. So I am writing the letter to invite you to join in this activity. We hope that through the activity, more people can take action to protect our environment.
It is no secret that trees mean a lot to us humans. For one thing, they can clean the air and make our world beautiful. For another, lots of useful products come from trees for our basic needs. Without them, the world would be different.
As trees are so important, we must do our best to protect them. For example, cut down fewer trees and plant as many trees as possible. Also, it is a good idea to share knowledge of protecting trees with others.
Come and join us! I am looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hui
Dear Peter,
Our community will organise a tree-planting activity next Sunday. So I am writing the letter to invite you to join in this activity. We hope that through the activity, more people can take action to protect our environment.
It is no secret that trees mean a lot to us humans. For one thing, they can clean the air and make our world beautiful. For another, lots of useful products come from trees for our basic needs. Without them, the world would be different.
As trees are so important, we must do our best to protect them. For example, cut down fewer trees and plant as many trees as possible. Also, it is a good idea to share knowledge of protecting trees with others.
Come and join us! I am looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hui
解析
【分析】首先承接开头的邀请,需先说明活动目的(呼吁大家参与环保),接着阐述树的重要性(净化空气、提供生活物资),再说明保护树木的方法(少砍多种、宣传护树知识),最后衔接结尾的期待,确保内容覆盖所有要点,语言连贯,符合词数要求。
【解析】We hope that through the activity, more people can take action to protect our environment. It is no secret that trees mean a lot to us humans. For one thing, they can clean the air and make our world beautiful. For another, lots of useful products come from trees for our basic needs. Without them, the world would be different. As trees are so important, we must do our best to protect them. For example, cut down fewer trees and plant as many trees as possible. Also, it is a good idea to share knowledge of protecting trees with others.
【答案】We hope that through the activity, more people can take action to protect our environment. It is no secret that trees mean a lot to us humans. For one thing, they can clean the air and make our world beautiful. For another, lots of useful products come from trees for our basic needs. Without them, the world would be different. As trees are so important, we must do our best to protect them. For example, cut down fewer trees and plant as many trees as possible. Also, it is a good idea to share knowledge of protecting trees with others.
【知识点】英语书信写作;环保话题表达;英语应用文写作
【点评】本题为英语提纲式书信写作题,要求学生根据给定要点补全邀请信,需涵盖活动目的、树木重要性及保护方法,考查学生的书面表达能力,需注意语言准确连贯,符合信件格式要求。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】We hope that through the activity, more people can take action to protect our environment. It is no secret that trees mean a lot to us humans. For one thing, they can clean the air and make our world beautiful. For another, lots of useful products come from trees for our basic needs. Without them, the world would be different. As trees are so important, we must do our best to protect them. For example, cut down fewer trees and plant as many trees as possible. Also, it is a good idea to share knowledge of protecting trees with others.
【答案】We hope that through the activity, more people can take action to protect our environment. It is no secret that trees mean a lot to us humans. For one thing, they can clean the air and make our world beautiful. For another, lots of useful products come from trees for our basic needs. Without them, the world would be different. As trees are so important, we must do our best to protect them. For example, cut down fewer trees and plant as many trees as possible. Also, it is a good idea to share knowledge of protecting trees with others.
【知识点】英语书信写作;环保话题表达;英语应用文写作
【点评】本题为英语提纲式书信写作题,要求学生根据给定要点补全邀请信,需涵盖活动目的、树木重要性及保护方法,考查学生的书面表达能力,需注意语言准确连贯,符合信件格式要求。
【难度系数】0.5
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