八、书面表达
假设你是学校英语广播站的播音员,需要报道近期发生的暴风雪事件。请以“A Terrible Snowstorm”为题准备一篇英文广播稿。

要求:1. 包含所有要点,可适当发挥;2. 运用过去进行时再现情景;3. 表达通顺,衔接自然,词数80左右。
假设你是学校英语广播站的播音员,需要报道近期发生的暴风雪事件。请以“A Terrible Snowstorm”为题准备一篇英文广播稿。
要求:1. 包含所有要点,可适当发挥;2. 运用过去进行时再现情景;3. 表达通顺,衔接自然,词数80左右。
答案
参考范文:
A Terrible Snowstorm
Dear classmates, I'm here to report a terrible snowstorm that hit our city recently. When it happened, we were having dinner at home. Suddenly, the electricity went out. We put on more warm clothes, used candles and stayed together.
The next morning, we saw cars stuck in the snow and broken branches everywhere. I felt worried during the storm, but I learnt how to stay safe.
Now I always check the weather report in winter. Stay safe, everyone!
A Terrible Snowstorm
Dear classmates, I'm here to report a terrible snowstorm that hit our city recently. When it happened, we were having dinner at home. Suddenly, the electricity went out. We put on more warm clothes, used candles and stayed together.
The next morning, we saw cars stuck in the snow and broken branches everywhere. I felt worried during the storm, but I learnt how to stay safe.
Now I always check the weather report in winter. Stay safe, everyone!
为了增强全民防灾减灾意识,推广避灾自救技能,你所在的城市将举行“防灾减灾,守护安全”短视频创作比赛。为增加视频特色,以及照顾到你们片区的外籍居民和留学生,你打算制作中英双语短视频。请你先根据以下流程图为短视频写好脚本,然后再进行剪辑润色,并发布到视频号、抖音等平台积极参加评选。

答案
中英双语短视频参考脚本:
| 英文台词 | 中文台词 |
| ---- | ---- |
| Hello everyone! I'm Li Hua. I am a Grade 8 student from No.1 Middle School of our city. | 大家好!我是李华,是本市第一中学的八年级学生。 |
| Today we will talk about what to do when an earthquake happens. When an earthquake comes, you will feel the ground shake strongly. Things on the shelves will fall off, and the walls may even crack. It will bring great danger if we don't know the right way to keep safe. | 今天我们要分享地震发生时的应对方法。当地震来临,你会感觉到地面剧烈晃动,架子上的物品会掉落,墙体甚至可能开裂,如果我们不知道正确的自保方式,就会面临很大危险。 |
| Here are two useful safety tips for you:
1. If you stay indoors when the earthquake begins, do not rush to run outside immediately. You can hide under a strong table first, use your arms to protect your head, and keep away from windows and heavy furniture.
2. If you are outdoors, move to a wide open place as soon as possible. Stay far away from tall buildings, big trees and power lines, and never go back into the building to take your personal things. | 这里给大家两条实用的安全提示:
1. 如果地震开始时你在室内,不要立刻冲出门外。你可以先躲到结实的桌子下方,用手臂护住头部,远离窗户和沉重的家具。
2. 如果你在室外,尽快前往开阔的空地,远离高楼、大树和电线,绝对不要返回楼内去拿个人物品。 |
| Wish all of us can learn these skills and stay safe all the time. | 希望我们所有人都能学会这些技能,永远平安。 |
| 英文台词 | 中文台词 |
| ---- | ---- |
| Hello everyone! I'm Li Hua. I am a Grade 8 student from No.1 Middle School of our city. | 大家好!我是李华,是本市第一中学的八年级学生。 |
| Today we will talk about what to do when an earthquake happens. When an earthquake comes, you will feel the ground shake strongly. Things on the shelves will fall off, and the walls may even crack. It will bring great danger if we don't know the right way to keep safe. | 今天我们要分享地震发生时的应对方法。当地震来临,你会感觉到地面剧烈晃动,架子上的物品会掉落,墙体甚至可能开裂,如果我们不知道正确的自保方式,就会面临很大危险。 |
| Here are two useful safety tips for you:
1. If you stay indoors when the earthquake begins, do not rush to run outside immediately. You can hide under a strong table first, use your arms to protect your head, and keep away from windows and heavy furniture.
2. If you are outdoors, move to a wide open place as soon as possible. Stay far away from tall buildings, big trees and power lines, and never go back into the building to take your personal things. | 这里给大家两条实用的安全提示:
1. 如果地震开始时你在室内,不要立刻冲出门外。你可以先躲到结实的桌子下方,用手臂护住头部,远离窗户和沉重的家具。
2. 如果你在室外,尽快前往开阔的空地,远离高楼、大树和电线,绝对不要返回楼内去拿个人物品。 |
| Wish all of us can learn these skills and stay safe all the time. | 希望我们所有人都能学会这些技能,永远平安。 |
解析
本题需要按照流程图的三个模块完成中英双语防灾短视频脚本创作,内容面向普通市民和外籍居民,语言难度适配八年级英语水平:
1. 自我介绍部分:清晰交代姓名、年级、所属学校,语气亲切有互动感,适配短视频开场场景;
2. 灾害描述部分:选取大众熟悉的地震作为描述对象,简单还原地震发生时的典型场景,方便不同背景的观众理解代入;
3. 自救提示部分:给出至少2条可落地的实用防灾自救技巧,贴合本次“防灾减灾,守护安全”的活动主题。
1. 自我介绍部分:清晰交代姓名、年级、所属学校,语气亲切有互动感,适配短视频开场场景;
2. 灾害描述部分:选取大众熟悉的地震作为描述对象,简单还原地震发生时的典型场景,方便不同背景的观众理解代入;
3. 自救提示部分:给出至少2条可落地的实用防灾自救技巧,贴合本次“防灾减灾,守护安全”的活动主题。
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