【书面表达】
生命在于运动,几乎每个人都有自己最喜欢的体育运动。那么你最喜欢的运动是什么?请以“My Favourite Sport”为题,根据结构示意图信息,写一篇英语短文,介绍你最喜欢的运动。

注意:
1. 词数70左右。开头已给出,不计入总词数,可适当发挥;
2. 意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
My Favourite Sport
I like sport very much, such as jumping rope, skating, and playing soccer.
生命在于运动,几乎每个人都有自己最喜欢的体育运动。那么你最喜欢的运动是什么?请以“My Favourite Sport”为题,根据结构示意图信息,写一篇英语短文,介绍你最喜欢的运动。
注意:
1. 词数70左右。开头已给出,不计入总词数,可适当发挥;
2. 意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
My Favourite Sport
I like sport very much, such as jumping rope, skating, and playing soccer.
答案
One possible version:
My Favourite Sport
I like sport very much,such as jumping rope,skating,and playing soccer. My favourite sport is swimming because it makes me strong and healthy.
I began to learn to swim when I was six years old. Now I can swim very well and I spend one hour swimming every Sunday. Swimming is really very interesting. If you swim in the water,you will look like a lovely fish. I'm sure you will feel very happy.
I hope I will be a swimmer when I grow up.
My Favourite Sport
I like sport very much,such as jumping rope,skating,and playing soccer. My favourite sport is swimming because it makes me strong and healthy.
I began to learn to swim when I was six years old. Now I can swim very well and I spend one hour swimming every Sunday. Swimming is really very interesting. If you swim in the water,you will look like a lovely fish. I'm sure you will feel very happy.
I hope I will be a swimmer when I grow up.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语话题书面表达题,要求以“My Favourite Sport”为题,结合给定的五个核心要点(运动是什么、喜欢的原因、运动频率、运动时长、未来目标)写作,开头已给出,需衔接内容,确保意思连贯、符合词数要求,且不能出现真实姓名和学校信息。写作时需紧扣结构,覆盖所有要点,语言通顺自然。
【解析】
1. 承接开头列举的运动,明确最喜欢的运动是游泳;
2. 说明喜欢游泳的原因(让自己强壮健康);
3. 介绍运动频率(每周日)和每次运动时长(一小时);
4. 补充游泳的乐趣,最后表达未来想成为游泳运动员的愿望,控制词数在70左右,语句连贯。
【答案】
One possible version:
My Favourite Sport
I like sport very much,such as jumping rope,skating,and playing soccer. My favourite sport is swimming because it makes me strong and healthy.
I began to learn to swim when I was six years old. Now I can swim very well and I spend one hour swimming every Sunday. Swimming is really very interesting. If you swim in the water,you will look like a lovely fish. I'm sure you will feel very happy.
I hope I will be a swimmer when I grow up.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、运动话题写作、简单句运用
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求,结构清晰,完整覆盖了所有给定要点,语言通顺自然,符合词数要求,情感表达真实,是一篇合格的话题书面表达。
【难度系数】
0.3
本题为英语话题书面表达题,要求以“My Favourite Sport”为题,结合给定的五个核心要点(运动是什么、喜欢的原因、运动频率、运动时长、未来目标)写作,开头已给出,需衔接内容,确保意思连贯、符合词数要求,且不能出现真实姓名和学校信息。写作时需紧扣结构,覆盖所有要点,语言通顺自然。
【解析】
1. 承接开头列举的运动,明确最喜欢的运动是游泳;
2. 说明喜欢游泳的原因(让自己强壮健康);
3. 介绍运动频率(每周日)和每次运动时长(一小时);
4. 补充游泳的乐趣,最后表达未来想成为游泳运动员的愿望,控制词数在70左右,语句连贯。
【答案】
One possible version:
My Favourite Sport
I like sport very much,such as jumping rope,skating,and playing soccer. My favourite sport is swimming because it makes me strong and healthy.
I began to learn to swim when I was six years old. Now I can swim very well and I spend one hour swimming every Sunday. Swimming is really very interesting. If you swim in the water,you will look like a lovely fish. I'm sure you will feel very happy.
I hope I will be a swimmer when I grow up.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、运动话题写作、简单句运用
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求,结构清晰,完整覆盖了所有给定要点,语言通顺自然,符合词数要求,情感表达真实,是一篇合格的话题书面表达。
【难度系数】
0.3
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