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单元写作要求
本单元以“社区环境与邻里关系”为话题，谈论社区概况、邻里关系以及社区服务。其书面表达的命题形式主要是要求学生写一篇发言稿或演讲稿，谈谈如何为社区做志愿服务。
写作方法策略
如何写英文演讲稿
写英文演讲稿时，首先要确定四要素——体裁、时态、人称、结构。演讲稿开篇要问候听众；正文首先要表明演讲的主题和目的；主体部分需要分点阐述具体观点或措施；最后总结或发出呼吁。
思路导引
问候
表明目的
分点阐述
总结呼吁
佳作展示
Hello everyone,
I'm Li Hua. Today, I'm excited to share my ideas about an activity called "Green Life Week" in our community. It aims to make our community a greener and better place to live.
① First, we will organize a community clean - up activity. Volunteers ② will get together to ③ pick up the rubbish in the community. ④ This not only creates a cleaner living space but also helps us realize how much waste we produce in daily life. Second, we are going to hold a charity sale to sell old items given away by residents. The money raised will be used for community greening projects. Third, we will organize lectures for those ⑤ who have trouble sorting their waste, teaching everyone how to deal with their waste in a proper manner.
Let's work together to build a greener and happier community. Thank you!
高分词句
①运用 First, Second, Third 分点提出具体措施，使文章条理清晰。
②运用本单元重要语法点 will do sth 和 be going to do sth 表示一般将来时。
③运用高级词组 pick up, give away, have trouble doing sth, deal with。
④运用 not only... but also...表示：“不仅……还……”。
⑤运用 who 引导定语从句，修饰先行词 those。
话题写作积累
1. 匆忙
2. 为……筹钱
3. 在困境中
4. 乐意做某事
5. 邀请某人做某事
6. 能够/有能力做某事
7. 如果您的电视机、电脑或冰箱出现故障，您可以向史密斯先生寻求帮助，他是一名工程师。
8. 为了鼓励孩子们时不时运动，我们将在社区里建立一个运动俱乐部。
9. 行胜于言。
单元写作要求
本单元以“社区环境与邻里关系”为话题，谈论社区概况、邻里关系以及社区服务。其书面表达的命题形式主要是要求学生写一篇发言稿或演讲稿，谈谈如何为社区做志愿服务。
写作方法策略
如何写英文演讲稿
写英文演讲稿时，首先要确定四要素——体裁、时态、人称、结构。演讲稿开篇要问候听众；正文首先要表明演讲的主题和目的；主体部分需要分点阐述具体观点或措施；最后总结或发出呼吁。
思路导引
问候
表明目的
分点阐述
总结呼吁
佳作展示
Hello everyone,
I'm Li Hua. Today, I'm excited to share my ideas about an activity called "Green Life Week" in our community. It aims to make our community a greener and better place to live.
① First, we will organize a community clean - up activity. Volunteers ② will get together to ③ pick up the rubbish in the community. ④ This not only creates a cleaner living space but also helps us realize how much waste we produce in daily life. Second, we are going to hold a charity sale to sell old items given away by residents. The money raised will be used for community greening projects. Third, we will organize lectures for those ⑤ who have trouble sorting their waste, teaching everyone how to deal with their waste in a proper manner.
Let's work together to build a greener and happier community. Thank you!
高分词句
①运用 First, Second, Third 分点提出具体措施，使文章条理清晰。
②运用本单元重要语法点 will do sth 和 be going to do sth 表示一般将来时。
③运用高级词组 pick up, give away, have trouble doing sth, deal with。
④运用 not only... but also...表示：“不仅……还……”。
⑤运用 who 引导定语从句，修饰先行词 those。
话题写作积累
1. 匆忙
in a hurry
2. 为……筹钱
raise money for
3. 在困境中
in need
4. 乐意做某事
be willing to do sth
5. 邀请某人做某事
invite sb to do sth
6. 能够/有能力做某事
be able to do sth/have the ability to do sth
7. 如果您的电视机、电脑或冰箱出现故障，您可以向史密斯先生寻求帮助，他是一名工程师。
If there is something wrong with your broken TV sets, computers or fridges, you can ask Mr Smith, who is an engineer, for help.
8. 为了鼓励孩子们时不时运动，我们将在社区里建立一个运动俱乐部。
To encourage children to exercise from time to time, we will/are going to set up a sports club in the community.
9. 行胜于言。
Actions speak louder than words.
答案
写作提优
话题写作积累
1. in a hurry
2. raise money for
3. in need
4. be willing to do sth
5. invite sb to do sth
6. be able to do sth/have the ability to do sth
7. If there is something wrong with your broken TV sets, computers or fridges, you can ask Mr Smith, who is an engineer, for help.
8. To encourage children to exercise from time to time, we will/are going to set up a sports club in the community.
9. Actions speak louder than words.
话题写作积累
1. in a hurry
2. raise money for
3. in need
4. be willing to do sth
5. invite sb to do sth
6. be able to do sth/have the ability to do sth
7. If there is something wrong with your broken TV sets, computers or fridges, you can ask Mr Smith, who is an engineer, for help.
8. To encourage children to exercise from time to time, we will/are going to set up a sports club in the community.
9. Actions speak louder than words.
解析
【分析】
这是英语“社区环境与邻里关系”主题的写作基础积累题，解题时首先回忆对应主题的课内核心固定搭配，逐个匹配中文释义写出对应的英文短语；完成短语后处理汉译英句子，先梳理句子的逻辑结构，判断需要用到的从句、时态等语法规则，结合已学的短语组合出符合英语表达习惯的句子，最后直接调用积累的常见英语谚语完成最后一题，全程要注意搭配的准确性，避免语法错误。
【解析】
我们按照题目顺序逐一完成作答：
1. 描述“匆忙”的常用固定介词短语为in a hurry；
2. 表达“为……筹钱”的固定搭配为raise money for；
3. 表示“在困境中、有需要”的常用短语为in need；
4. 表达“乐意做某事”的标准搭配为be willing to do sth；
5. 表示“邀请某人做某事”的固定搭配为invite sb to do sth；
6. 表达“能够/有能力做某事”有两种常用正确表达：be able to do sth 或者 have the ability to do sth；
7. 本句先使用if引导条件状语从句，用there is something wrong with...表达“……出故障”，后半句用who引导非限定性定语从句修饰先行词Mr Smith，结合“向某人求助”的搭配ask sb for help，组合得到完整句子；
8. 本句用不定式结构放在句首作目的状语，用encourage sb to do sth表达“鼓励某人做某事”，from time to time表示“时不时”，set up表示“建立”，结合本单元所学的一般将来时结构will/be going to，得到完整句子；
9. “行胜于言”是通用的经典英语谚语，直接调用对应的标准表达即可。
【答案】
1. in a hurry
2. raise money for
3. in need
4. be willing to do sth
5. invite sb to do sth
6. be able to do sth/have the ability to do sth
7. If there is something wrong with your TV sets, computers or fridges, you can ask Mr Smith, who is an engineer, for help.
8. To encourage children to exercise from time to time, we will/are going to set up a sports club in the community.
9. Actions speak louder than words.
【知识点】
固定短语搭配，汉译英翻译，英语谚语积累
【点评】
本题属于同主题写作的前置基础积累训练，覆盖了该话题下高频使用的核心短语、典型句式和通用谚语，既可以帮助学生巩固课内的词汇搭配记忆，也能直接将积累的内容运用到同主题的演讲稿写作中，有效降低后续写作的表达门槛，提升作文的丰富度和准确度。
【难度系数】
0.7
这是英语“社区环境与邻里关系”主题的写作基础积累题，解题时首先回忆对应主题的课内核心固定搭配，逐个匹配中文释义写出对应的英文短语；完成短语后处理汉译英句子，先梳理句子的逻辑结构，判断需要用到的从句、时态等语法规则，结合已学的短语组合出符合英语表达习惯的句子，最后直接调用积累的常见英语谚语完成最后一题，全程要注意搭配的准确性，避免语法错误。
【解析】
我们按照题目顺序逐一完成作答：
1. 描述“匆忙”的常用固定介词短语为in a hurry；
2. 表达“为……筹钱”的固定搭配为raise money for；
3. 表示“在困境中、有需要”的常用短语为in need；
4. 表达“乐意做某事”的标准搭配为be willing to do sth；
5. 表示“邀请某人做某事”的固定搭配为invite sb to do sth；
6. 表达“能够/有能力做某事”有两种常用正确表达：be able to do sth 或者 have the ability to do sth；
7. 本句先使用if引导条件状语从句，用there is something wrong with...表达“……出故障”，后半句用who引导非限定性定语从句修饰先行词Mr Smith，结合“向某人求助”的搭配ask sb for help，组合得到完整句子；
8. 本句用不定式结构放在句首作目的状语，用encourage sb to do sth表达“鼓励某人做某事”，from time to time表示“时不时”，set up表示“建立”，结合本单元所学的一般将来时结构will/be going to，得到完整句子；
9. “行胜于言”是通用的经典英语谚语，直接调用对应的标准表达即可。
【答案】
1. in a hurry
2. raise money for
3. in need
4. be willing to do sth
5. invite sb to do sth
6. be able to do sth/have the ability to do sth
7. If there is something wrong with your TV sets, computers or fridges, you can ask Mr Smith, who is an engineer, for help.
8. To encourage children to exercise from time to time, we will/are going to set up a sports club in the community.
9. Actions speak louder than words.
【知识点】
固定短语搭配，汉译英翻译，英语谚语积累
【点评】
本题属于同主题写作的前置基础积累训练，覆盖了该话题下高频使用的核心短语、典型句式和通用谚语，既可以帮助学生巩固课内的词汇搭配记忆，也能直接将积累的内容运用到同主题的演讲稿写作中，有效降低后续写作的表达门槛，提升作文的丰富度和准确度。
【难度系数】
0.7
