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最近，你校开展了名为“巧手制书签，书香满校园”的主题活动，请你以“A DIY Bookmark for My Favourite Book”为题，根据表格中的内容提示写一篇英语短文，向学校英文报的读书专栏投稿，介绍制作书签的目的和过程，并分享制作心得。
| Why you made it | help enjoy reading your favourite book (name, type of book, what you like most) |
| --- | --- |
| How you made it | Materials & Tools • card
• scissors, glue... |
| | Steps • cut the card into...
• draw a picture of...
• write (your favourite sentence from the book or a famous saying or... )
• ... |
| How you felt | ... |
要求：
1. 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2. 必须包括提示中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥；
3. 词数100左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
4. 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
A DIY Bookmark for My Favourite Book
Last week I took part in our school's Reading & Bookmark-making activity.
最近，你校开展了名为“巧手制书签，书香满校园”的主题活动，请你以“A DIY Bookmark for My Favourite Book”为题，根据表格中的内容提示写一篇英语短文，向学校英文报的读书专栏投稿，介绍制作书签的目的和过程，并分享制作心得。
| Why you made it | help enjoy reading your favourite book (name, type of book, what you like most) |
| --- | --- |
| How you made it | Materials & Tools • card
• scissors, glue... |
| | Steps • cut the card into...
• draw a picture of...
• write (your favourite sentence from the book or a famous saying or... )
• ... |
| How you felt | ... |
要求：
1. 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2. 必须包括提示中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥；
3. 词数100左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
4. 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
A DIY Bookmark for My Favourite Book
Last week I took part in our school's Reading & Bookmark-making activity.
答案
One possible version:
A DIY Bookmark for My Favourite Book
Last week I took part in our school's Reading & Bookmark-making activity. Its purpose was to help us enjoy reading our favourite book. My favourite book is the classic novel Journey to the West—one of the Four Great Classical Novels. I like the Monkey King best because he helps the weak and never gives up.
In order to make a bookmark, I prepared a card, scissors, glue and so on. First, I cut the card into long strips. And then I drew a picture of a monkey on the left and wrote a famous saying "Nothing is impossible if you put your heart into it." on the right to encourage myself not to give up when facing difficulties. At last, I glued it to a thin piece of wood.
Although I met some difficulties in this process. I am proud of myself because I never gave up and made it at last.
A DIY Bookmark for My Favourite Book
Last week I took part in our school's Reading & Bookmark-making activity. Its purpose was to help us enjoy reading our favourite book. My favourite book is the classic novel Journey to the West—one of the Four Great Classical Novels. I like the Monkey King best because he helps the weak and never gives up.
In order to make a bookmark, I prepared a card, scissors, glue and so on. First, I cut the card into long strips. And then I drew a picture of a monkey on the left and wrote a famous saying "Nothing is impossible if you put your heart into it." on the right to encourage myself not to give up when facing difficulties. At last, I glued it to a thin piece of wood.
Although I met some difficulties in this process. I am proud of myself because I never gave up and made it at last.
解析
【分析】
本题要求以“A DIY Bookmark for My Favourite Book”为题写英语短文，需结合表格提示完成三部分核心内容：一是制作书签的目的（需说明喜爱书籍的名称、类型、最爱的点）；二是制作过程（材料工具、具体步骤）；三是制作感受。解题思路：1. 先选定熟悉的书籍，对应“why you made it”部分，明确书的信息与制作书签的初衷；2. 梳理材料工具和步骤，按顺序清晰描述制作流程；3. 最后表达制作后的感受，确保内容连贯、语法正确，符合词数要求。
【解析】
首先承接开头，说明制作书签的目的：介绍自己最喜欢的书是经典小说《西游记》（四大名著之一），喜爱孙悟空的原因；接着描述制作材料（卡片、剪刀、胶水等），按步骤说明：先将卡片剪成细条，再画孙悟空的图案，写励志语句，最后粘贴；最后表达制作感受，虽遇小困难但很自豪。
【答案】
One possible version:
A DIY Bookmark for My Favourite Book
Last week I took part in our school's Reading & Bookmark-making activity. Its purpose was to help us enjoy reading our favourite book. My favourite book is the classic novel Journey to the West—one of the Four Great Classical Novels. I like the Monkey King best because he helps the weak and never gives up.
In order to make a bookmark, I prepared a card, scissors, glue and so on. First, I cut the card into long strips. And then I drew a picture of a monkey on the left and wrote a famous saying "Nothing is impossible if you put your heart into it." on the right to encourage myself not to give up when facing difficulties. At last, I glued it to a thin piece of wood.
Although I met some difficulties in this process. I am proud of myself because I never gave up and made it at last.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、实用写作、DIY英语表达
【点评】
该作文紧扣题目要求，完整涵盖表格所有提示信息，内容连贯，语法正确，有合理的个人发挥，符合校园英文报读书专栏的投稿要求，适合初中学生完成。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题要求以“A DIY Bookmark for My Favourite Book”为题写英语短文，需结合表格提示完成三部分核心内容：一是制作书签的目的（需说明喜爱书籍的名称、类型、最爱的点）；二是制作过程（材料工具、具体步骤）；三是制作感受。解题思路：1. 先选定熟悉的书籍，对应“why you made it”部分，明确书的信息与制作书签的初衷；2. 梳理材料工具和步骤，按顺序清晰描述制作流程；3. 最后表达制作后的感受，确保内容连贯、语法正确，符合词数要求。
【解析】
首先承接开头，说明制作书签的目的：介绍自己最喜欢的书是经典小说《西游记》（四大名著之一），喜爱孙悟空的原因；接着描述制作材料（卡片、剪刀、胶水等），按步骤说明：先将卡片剪成细条，再画孙悟空的图案，写励志语句，最后粘贴；最后表达制作感受，虽遇小困难但很自豪。
【答案】
One possible version:
A DIY Bookmark for My Favourite Book
Last week I took part in our school's Reading & Bookmark-making activity. Its purpose was to help us enjoy reading our favourite book. My favourite book is the classic novel Journey to the West—one of the Four Great Classical Novels. I like the Monkey King best because he helps the weak and never gives up.
In order to make a bookmark, I prepared a card, scissors, glue and so on. First, I cut the card into long strips. And then I drew a picture of a monkey on the left and wrote a famous saying "Nothing is impossible if you put your heart into it." on the right to encourage myself not to give up when facing difficulties. At last, I glued it to a thin piece of wood.
Although I met some difficulties in this process. I am proud of myself because I never gave up and made it at last.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、实用写作、DIY英语表达
【点评】
该作文紧扣题目要求，完整涵盖表格所有提示信息，内容连贯，语法正确，有合理的个人发挥，符合校园英文报读书专栏的投稿要求，适合初中学生完成。
【难度系数】
0.6
