写作赏析
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【写作主题】本单元的话题是“如何与他人相处”，要求学生学会运用本单元所学知识及语法写一篇关于相互理解的故事或文章。
【范文赏析】
Lily and Tom are friends with different personalities. They planned a town party but argued about the theme. Lily preferred a magic-themed party to attract kids, while Tom preferred a traditional one. They couldn’t agree with each other.（朋友间产生的分歧）
Lily and Tom then turned to Mrs Green for help. Mrs Green suggested combining the two themes. Lily and Tom took her suggestion and discussed again. Finally they came to an agreement.（解决方法）
While working together at the party, they felt ashamed of their earlier argument. They realised it’s important to understand each other’s views. Different ideas are valuable, and mutual respect helps solve problems and improve relationships.（启示）
☑体裁： ☑人称： ☑时态：
☑佳词佳句积累：
1. 就某事争论 2. 同意某人
3. 向某人寻求帮助 4. 建议做某事
5. 采纳某人的建议 6. 达成一致意见
7. 为……感到羞愧 8. 相互尊重
9. 解决问题 10. 改善关系
11. 莉莉和汤姆采纳了她的建议，又讨论了一遍。
12. 不同的想法是宝贵的，相互尊重才有助于解决问题和改善关系。
☑写作提升：使用所给短语并参考其在范文中的句子，根据中文提示，翻译句子。
1. 当我遇到困难时，我通常会向我的父母寻求帮助。(turn to sb for help)

2. 她因当时没有说出真相而感到羞愧。(feel ashamed of)

体裁：记叙文
人称：第三人称
时态：一般过去时、一般现在时
1. argue about sth
2. agree with sb
3. turn to sb for help
4. suggest doing sth
5. take one's suggestion
6. come to an agreement
7. feel ashamed of
8. mutual respect
9. solve problems
10. improve relationships
11. Lily and Tom took her suggestion and discussed again.
12. Different ideas are valuable, and mutual respect helps solve problems and improve relationships.
1. When I meet difficulties, I usually turn to my parents for help.
2. She felt ashamed of not telling the truth at that time.

【分析】
这道题是围绕单元话题“如何与他人相处”的写作赏析练习，解题思路如下：1. 确定体裁：范文以叙事形式讲述人物故事，属于记叙文；人称：以第三方人物（Lily、Tom等）为叙述主体，用第三人称；时态：叙事过程用一般过去时，最后的启示用一般现在时，需结合语境区分时态。2. 短语积累：根据中文含义匹配本单元固定短语，注意短语的正确搭配形式。3. 句子翻译：使用指定短语，结合中文语境，注意语法结构（如feel ashamed of后接动名词）。
【解析】
1. 体裁：范文为叙事类文体，故为记叙文；人称：叙述主体是第三方人物，为第三人称；时态：叙事部分用一般过去时，启示部分用一般现在时，因此时态为一般过去时、一般现在时。
2. 短语对应：根据中文意思匹配固定短语，如“就某事争论”对应argue about sth，“向某人寻求帮助”对应turn to sb for help等。
3. 句子翻译：① 使用指定短语turn to sb for help，结合语境译为When I meet difficulties, I usually turn to my parents for help；② 使用指定短语feel ashamed of，注意后接动名词，译为She felt ashamed of not telling the truth at that time。
【答案】
体裁：记叙文
人称：第三人称
时态：一般过去时、一般现在时
1. argue about sth
2. agree with sb
3. turn to sb for help
4. suggest doing sth
5. take one's suggestion
6. come to an agreement
7. feel ashamed of
8. mutual respect
9. solve problems
10. improve relationships
11. Lily and Tom took her suggestion and discussed again.
12. Different ideas are valuable, and mutual respect helps solve problems and improve relationships.
1. When I meet difficulties, I usually turn to my parents for help.
2. She felt ashamed of not telling the truth at that time.
【知识点】
记叙文写作、常用短语搭配、汉译英应用
【点评】
本题紧扣单元话题，通过写作赏析的形式考查学生对基础语法、短语的掌握，同时锻炼语言应用能力，帮助学生理解“相互理解”的主题，巩固单元知识。
【难度系数】
0.3

写作创新·看表写作 在人际交往中，有人觉得坦诚直接地表达想法能迅速解决问题，促进关系；也有人认为委婉含蓄的沟通方式更能照顾他人的感受，避免冲突。你校校刊英语专栏
正在以“Should we express our ideas directly or not？”为题开展征文活动。请你从以下表格中的两种沟通方式中任选其一来陈述你的观点，用英文写一篇短文向该专栏投稿。

注意：（1）作文必须包含表格中提到的所有信息，并适当发挥。
（2）不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现真实校名和学生的真实姓名。
（3）语句连贯，词数80左右。作文的标题和开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
【巧列提纲】（以下部分仅供参考，希望同学们可以多开动脑筋、发散思维）

【实战演练】
Should we express our ideas directly or not？
In daily communication，some people like to express their views directly，while others don't.








【写作评价】（评分原则与方法可参考本书最后一页）

In my opinion, expressing ideas directly is a better choice in communication.
Firstly, it saves time. When we express our thoughts directly, there is no need for others to guess, and problems can be solved quickly. Secondly, it avoids misunderstanding. Clear and direct communication leaves no room for misunderstanding. People know exactly what we mean, which is beneficial for building good relationships. Finally, honesty makes relationships stronger. If a friend wears an ugly shirt, saying "It doesn't suit you" kindly is better than lying.
Therefore, I think being direct in expressing ideas can make our communication more efficient.

【分析】
本题要求以“Should we express our ideas directly or not？”为题写英语短文，需从两种沟通方式中选一种陈述观点，包含相关信息、适当发挥，词数80左右。解题思路：1. 确定明确观点（如选直接表达）；2. 分点阐述支撑理由（如节省时间、避免误解、利于关系），每点配简单说明；3. 总结观点，确保语句连贯，符合词数要求，不出现真实信息。
【解析】
In my opinion, expressing ideas directly is a better choice in communication. Firstly, it saves time. When we express our thoughts directly, others don’t need to guess, and problems can be solved quickly. Secondly, it avoids misunderstanding. Clear and direct communication leaves no room for misunderstanding, which is beneficial for building good relationships. Finally, honesty makes relationships stronger. If a friend wears an ugly shirt, saying "It doesn't suit you" kindly is better than lying. Therefore, I think being direct in expressing ideas can make our communication more efficient.
【答案】
In my opinion, expressing ideas directly is a better choice in communication. Firstly, it saves time. When we express our thoughts directly, there is no need for others to guess, and problems can be solved quickly. Secondly, it avoids misunderstanding. Clear and direct communication leaves no room for misunderstanding. People know exactly what we mean, which is beneficial for building good relationships. Finally, honesty makes relationships stronger. If a friend wears an ugly shirt, saying "It doesn't suit you" kindly is better than lying. Therefore, I think being direct in expressing ideas can make our communication more efficient.
【知识点】
英语短文写作、观点表达类写作
【点评】
本题为观点类英语写作题，要求明确，需学生清晰表达选择并给出合理理由，符合校刊征文语境，能考察学生英语运用与逻辑表达能力。
【难度系数】
0.5