【主题写作实践】
为了丰富学生们的课余生活,你们学校开设了许多俱乐部。假如你是李明,请根据你的兴趣爱好,选择一个你喜欢的俱乐部并用英语写一份申请书。
要点提示:
1. What do you usually do after school?
2. Which club do you want to join? Why?
3. What can you get from it?
要求:
1. 申请书必须包含以上所有要点;
2. 不少于60词(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Sir or Madam,
Yours,
Li Ming
写作提纲:

规范作文:
Dear Sir or Madam,
Yours,
Li Ming
为了丰富学生们的课余生活,你们学校开设了许多俱乐部。假如你是李明,请根据你的兴趣爱好,选择一个你喜欢的俱乐部并用英语写一份申请书。
要点提示:
1. What do you usually do after school?
2. Which club do you want to join? Why?
3. What can you get from it?
要求:
1. 申请书必须包含以上所有要点;
2. 不少于60词(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Sir or Madam,
I usually do my homework and listen to music after school, but I feel very bored.
I would like to try something different. I want to join the music club, because I like playing the guitar and I can play it well. I think playing the guitar is very interesting. If I join the music club, I can learn something about music.
And I can also make some friends.
Yours,
Li Ming
写作提纲:
规范作文:
Dear Sir or Madam,
I usually do my homework and listen to music after school, but I feel very bored.
I would like to try something different.
I want to join the music club, because I like playing the guitar and I can play it well.
I think playing the guitar is very interesting.
If I join the music club, I can learn something about music.
And I can also make some friends. I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Ming
答案
参考范文:
Dear Sir or Madam,
I usually do my homework and listen to music after school, but I feel very bored.
I would like to try something different. I want to join the music club, because I like playing the guitar and I can play it well. I think playing the guitar is very interesting. If I join the music club, I can learn something about music. And I can also make some friends.
I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Ming
Dear Sir or Madam,
I usually do my homework and listen to music after school, but I feel very bored.
I would like to try something different. I want to join the music club, because I like playing the guitar and I can play it well. I think playing the guitar is very interesting. If I join the music club, I can learn something about music. And I can also make some friends.
I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Ming
解析
【分析】本题要求以李明的身份写一份加入俱乐部的英语申请书,需覆盖三个核心要点:课后日常活动、想加入的俱乐部及原因、加入俱乐部的收获。写作时需结合思维导图提供的信息,遵循申请书格式,将要点自然串联,保证语句通顺、词数达标。
【解析】1. 先说明课后活动:“I usually do my homework and listen to music after school, but I feel very bored.” 2. 再表达想加入音乐俱乐部的意愿及理由:“I want to join the music club, because I like playing the guitar and I can play it well. I think playing the guitar is very interesting.” 3. 最后阐述加入后的收获:“If I join the music club, I can learn something about music. And I can also make some friends.” 4. 补充期待回复的句子完善作文:“I am looking forward to your reply.” 确保所有要求的要点都包含,语言符合英语表达习惯。
【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,
I usually do my homework and listen to music after school, but I feel very bored.
I would like to try something different. I want to join the music club, because I like playing the guitar and I can play it well. I think playing the guitar is very interesting. If I join the music club, I can learn something about music. And I can also make some friends.
I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Ming
【知识点】英语应用文写作、英语要点整合
【点评】该作文紧扣题目所有要求,格式正确,逻辑清晰,语言通顺,完整覆盖了三个要点,是符合要求的优秀参考范文,适合学生学习借鉴。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】1. 先说明课后活动:“I usually do my homework and listen to music after school, but I feel very bored.” 2. 再表达想加入音乐俱乐部的意愿及理由:“I want to join the music club, because I like playing the guitar and I can play it well. I think playing the guitar is very interesting.” 3. 最后阐述加入后的收获:“If I join the music club, I can learn something about music. And I can also make some friends.” 4. 补充期待回复的句子完善作文:“I am looking forward to your reply.” 确保所有要求的要点都包含,语言符合英语表达习惯。
【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,
I usually do my homework and listen to music after school, but I feel very bored.
I would like to try something different. I want to join the music club, because I like playing the guitar and I can play it well. I think playing the guitar is very interesting. If I join the music club, I can learn something about music. And I can also make some friends.
I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Ming
【知识点】英语应用文写作、英语要点整合
【点评】该作文紧扣题目所有要求,格式正确,逻辑清晰,语言通顺,完整覆盖了三个要点,是符合要求的优秀参考范文,适合学生学习借鉴。
【难度系数】0.5
【主题实践探究】
请你做一个采访,询问班上已报名参加社团的同学的感受和收获。最后以文字形式分享给大家。
Example(以湘绣社团为例):
A: Hi, Li Hua. Can I ask you some questions about your club?
B: Sure.
A: What club are you in?
B: I am in the Xiang Embroidery(湘绣) Club.
A: What can you learn there?
B: I can learn to embroider(刺绣) flowers and birds. It is a traditional(传统的) art of Hunan.
A: What else?
B: I feel I can do things better than before. And I really love our Hunan culture.
Report: Li Hua joins the Xiang Embroidery Club. With the help of the teacher, he learns to embroider traditional patterns like flowers and birds. Now he can do things better than before and loves Hunan culture very much. The club is not only fun but also meaningful.
请你做一个采访,询问班上已报名参加社团的同学的感受和收获。最后以文字形式分享给大家。
Example(以湘绣社团为例):
A: Hi, Li Hua. Can I ask you some questions about your club?
B: Sure.
A: What club are you in?
B: I am in the Xiang Embroidery(湘绣) Club.
A: What can you learn there?
B: I can learn to embroider(刺绣) flowers and birds. It is a traditional(传统的) art of Hunan.
A: What else?
B: I feel I can do things better than before. And I really love our Hunan culture.
Report: Li Hua joins the Xiang Embroidery Club. With the help of the teacher, he learns to embroider traditional patterns like flowers and birds. Now he can do things better than before and loves Hunan culture very much. The club is not only fun but also meaningful.
答案
参考内容如下:
采访对话
A: Hi, Zhang Ming. Can I ask you some questions about your club?
B: Sure.
A: What club are you in?
B: I am in the English Club.
A: What can you learn there?
B: I can learn to sing English songs and tell easy English stories. It helps me improve my spoken English a lot.
A: What else do you get from the club?
B: I make many new friends here, and I am not afraid to speak English in front of my classmates any more.
采访报告
Zhang Ming joins the English Club. With the help of the club teacher, he learns to sing English songs and tell different easy English stories. His spoken English becomes much better than before. Now he makes lots of new friends in the club, and he is not afraid to speak English in public any more. He thinks the English club is not only interesting but also very helpful.
采访对话
A: Hi, Zhang Ming. Can I ask you some questions about your club?
B: Sure.
A: What club are you in?
B: I am in the English Club.
A: What can you learn there?
B: I can learn to sing English songs and tell easy English stories. It helps me improve my spoken English a lot.
A: What else do you get from the club?
B: I make many new friends here, and I am not afraid to speak English in front of my classmates any more.
采访报告
Zhang Ming joins the English Club. With the help of the club teacher, he learns to sing English songs and tell different easy English stories. His spoken English becomes much better than before. Now he makes lots of new friends in the club, and he is not afraid to speak English in public any more. He thinks the English club is not only interesting but also very helpful.
解析
【分析】
本题是主题实践类英语任务,需模仿示例的结构完成采访与报告。解题思路为:1. 选择一个班级社团(如英语社团);2. 设计自然的采访问题,依次询问对方所在社团、在社团学习的内容、获得的收获(如能力提升、交友等);3. 将采访对话整理成通顺的报告,提炼核心信息,体现社团的意义。
【解析】
采访对话
A: Hi, Zhang Ming. Can I ask you some questions about your club?
B: Sure.
A: What club are you in?
B: I am in the English Club.
A: What can you learn there?
B: I can learn to sing English songs and tell easy English stories. It helps me improve my spoken English a lot.
A: What else do you get from the club?
B: I make many new friends here, and I am not afraid to speak English in front of my classmates any more.
采访报告
Zhang Ming joins the English Club. With the help of the club teacher, he learns to sing English songs and tell different easy English stories. His spoken English becomes much better than before. Now he makes lots of new friends in the club, and he is not afraid to speak English in public any more. He thinks the English club is not only interesting but also very helpful.
【答案】
采访对话
A: Hi, Zhang Ming. Can I ask you some questions about your club?
B: Sure.
A: What club are you in?
B: I am in the English Club.
A: What can you learn there?
B: I can learn to sing English songs and tell easy English stories. It helps me improve my spoken English a lot.
A: What else do you get from the club?
B: I make many new friends here, and I am not afraid to speak English in front of my classmates any more.
采访报告
Zhang Ming joins the English Club. With the help of the club teacher, he learns to sing English songs and tell different easy English stories. His spoken English becomes much better than before. Now he makes lots of new friends in the club, and he is not afraid to speak English in public any more. He thinks the English club is not only interesting but also very helpful.
【知识点】
英语日常交际、实践探究任务
【点评】
本题为贴近学生校园生活的主题实践类英语任务,考查学生的英语对话运用能力与信息整合能力,要求模仿示例完成采访及报告,结构清晰易上手。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题是主题实践类英语任务,需模仿示例的结构完成采访与报告。解题思路为:1. 选择一个班级社团(如英语社团);2. 设计自然的采访问题,依次询问对方所在社团、在社团学习的内容、获得的收获(如能力提升、交友等);3. 将采访对话整理成通顺的报告,提炼核心信息,体现社团的意义。
【解析】
采访对话
A: Hi, Zhang Ming. Can I ask you some questions about your club?
B: Sure.
A: What club are you in?
B: I am in the English Club.
A: What can you learn there?
B: I can learn to sing English songs and tell easy English stories. It helps me improve my spoken English a lot.
A: What else do you get from the club?
B: I make many new friends here, and I am not afraid to speak English in front of my classmates any more.
采访报告
Zhang Ming joins the English Club. With the help of the club teacher, he learns to sing English songs and tell different easy English stories. His spoken English becomes much better than before. Now he makes lots of new friends in the club, and he is not afraid to speak English in public any more. He thinks the English club is not only interesting but also very helpful.
【答案】
采访对话
A: Hi, Zhang Ming. Can I ask you some questions about your club?
B: Sure.
A: What club are you in?
B: I am in the English Club.
A: What can you learn there?
B: I can learn to sing English songs and tell easy English stories. It helps me improve my spoken English a lot.
A: What else do you get from the club?
B: I make many new friends here, and I am not afraid to speak English in front of my classmates any more.
采访报告
Zhang Ming joins the English Club. With the help of the club teacher, he learns to sing English songs and tell different easy English stories. His spoken English becomes much better than before. Now he makes lots of new friends in the club, and he is not afraid to speak English in public any more. He thinks the English club is not only interesting but also very helpful.
【知识点】
英语日常交际、实践探究任务
【点评】
本题为贴近学生校园生活的主题实践类英语任务,考查学生的英语对话运用能力与信息整合能力,要求模仿示例完成采访及报告,结构清晰易上手。
【难度系数】
0.6
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