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七、书面表达(共1大题,满分20分)
浩瀚的太空充满奥秘,人类从未停止对宇宙的探索。学校英语广播站正在举办“我的太空梦想”征文活动,请你根据以下内容提示,以“My Space Dream”为题写一篇英语短文投稿。
Are you interested in space exploration?
What is your dream about space?
What will you do to make your dream come true?
Please write more about it.
注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息,词数100左右(标题和开头已给出的词不计入总词数)。
My Space Dream
I am truly interested in space exploration.
浩瀚的太空充满奥秘,人类从未停止对宇宙的探索。学校英语广播站正在举办“我的太空梦想”征文活动,请你根据以下内容提示,以“My Space Dream”为题写一篇英语短文投稿。
Are you interested in space exploration?
What is your dream about space?
What will you do to make your dream come true?
Please write more about it.
注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息,词数100左右(标题和开头已给出的词不计入总词数)。
My Space Dream
I am truly interested in space exploration.
答案
[参考范文]
My Space Dream
I am truly interested in space exploration. The mysterious universe and distant planets always excite me a lot. I often watch space news and learn about Mars research in my free time.
My space dream is to become a space researcher in the future. I hope to take part in studying the environment of Mars and help collect more data for scientific research. I really wish humans could live on other planets one day.
To make my dream come true, I will keep working hard at school. I will pay more attention to science and keep reading related books. I believe my dream will come true with continuous effort.
My Space Dream
I am truly interested in space exploration. The mysterious universe and distant planets always excite me a lot. I often watch space news and learn about Mars research in my free time.
My space dream is to become a space researcher in the future. I hope to take part in studying the environment of Mars and help collect more data for scientific research. I really wish humans could live on other planets one day.
To make my dream come true, I will keep working hard at school. I will pay more attention to science and keep reading related books. I believe my dream will come true with continuous effort.
解析
【分析】本题为英语书面表达题，主题是“My Space Dream”，需围绕三个提示问题展开写作：一是表达对太空探索的兴趣，二是明确自己的太空梦想，三是说明实现梦想的具体做法。写作时要注意词数100左右，不得透露个人真实信息，衔接已给开头，确保要点完整、语句通顺。
【解析】根据题目要求，需覆盖所有提示要点，结合太空主题的相关内容，用准确的英语句式完成写作，参考范文如下：
My Space Dream
I am truly interested in space exploration. The mysterious universe and distant planets always excite me a lot. I often watch space news and learn about Mars research in my free time.
My space dream is to become a space researcher in the future. I hope to take part in studying the environment of Mars and help collect more data for scientific research. I really wish humans could live on other planets one day.
To make my dream come true, I will keep working hard at school. I will pay more attention to science and keep reading related books. I believe my dream will come true with continuous effort.
【答案】My Space Dream
I am truly interested in space exploration. The mysterious universe and distant planets always excite me a lot. I often watch space news and learn about Mars research in my free time.
My space dream is to become a space researcher in the future. I hope to take part in studying the environment of Mars and help collect more data for scientific research. I really wish humans could live on other planets one day.
To make my dream come true, I will keep working hard at school. I will pay more attention to science and keep reading related books. I believe my dream will come true with continuous effort.
【知识点】英语书面表达、要点式写作、一般将来时
【点评】本文紧扣“我的太空梦想”主题，完整覆盖题目要求的三个核心要点，内容充实具体，逻辑清晰，语言表达准确流畅，符合初中英语书面表达的规范，为学生提供了此类主题写作的优秀范例，有助于学生掌握要点整合与主题写作的方法。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】根据题目要求，需覆盖所有提示要点，结合太空主题的相关内容，用准确的英语句式完成写作，参考范文如下：
My Space Dream
I am truly interested in space exploration. The mysterious universe and distant planets always excite me a lot. I often watch space news and learn about Mars research in my free time.
My space dream is to become a space researcher in the future. I hope to take part in studying the environment of Mars and help collect more data for scientific research. I really wish humans could live on other planets one day.
To make my dream come true, I will keep working hard at school. I will pay more attention to science and keep reading related books. I believe my dream will come true with continuous effort.
【答案】My Space Dream
I am truly interested in space exploration. The mysterious universe and distant planets always excite me a lot. I often watch space news and learn about Mars research in my free time.
My space dream is to become a space researcher in the future. I hope to take part in studying the environment of Mars and help collect more data for scientific research. I really wish humans could live on other planets one day.
To make my dream come true, I will keep working hard at school. I will pay more attention to science and keep reading related books. I believe my dream will come true with continuous effort.
【知识点】英语书面表达、要点式写作、一般将来时
【点评】本文紧扣“我的太空梦想”主题，完整覆盖题目要求的三个核心要点，内容充实具体，逻辑清晰，语言表达准确流畅，符合初中英语书面表达的规范，为学生提供了此类主题写作的优秀范例，有助于学生掌握要点整合与主题写作的方法。
【难度系数】0.6
