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写作小练笔
用所学知识介绍你最敬佩的人。（词数：50左右）
用所学知识介绍你最敬佩的人。（词数：50左右）
The person I admire the most is my mum. She is busy but she always listens to my problems with patience.
When I don't get good grades, instead of shouting at me, she corrects my mistakes and teaches me how to solve them.
She is the greatest mother.
And I feel so lucky to have such a wonderful mother.
答案
The person I admire the most is my mum. She is busy but she always listens to my problems with patience. When I don't get good grades, instead of shouting at me, she corrects my mistakes and teaches me how to solve them. She is the greatest mother. And I feel so lucky to have such a wonderful mother.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语写作小练笔，要求介绍自己最敬佩的人，需先选定敬佩的对象，再围绕其优秀品质选取1-2个典型小事例，用通顺的英语表达，控制词数在50左右，贴合主题即可。
【解析】
1. 确定写作核心：介绍自己最敬佩的人；2. 选定贴近生活的具体人物（如母亲）；3. 围绕人物的优秀品质（耐心、关爱）选取典型事例；4. 组织语言，确保语句通顺、词数符合要求。
【答案】
The person I admire the most is my mum. She is busy but she always listens to my problems with patience. When I don't get good grades, instead of shouting at me, she corrects my mistakes and teaches me how to solve them. She is the greatest mother. And I feel so lucky to have such a wonderful mother.
【知识点】
英语写作、人物描写、简单句运用
【点评】
本题贴近学生生活，考查基础英语表达与人物介绍的写作能力，难度较低，适合学生巩固写作基础。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题为英语写作小练笔，要求介绍自己最敬佩的人，需先选定敬佩的对象，再围绕其优秀品质选取1-2个典型小事例，用通顺的英语表达，控制词数在50左右，贴合主题即可。
【解析】
1. 确定写作核心：介绍自己最敬佩的人；2. 选定贴近生活的具体人物（如母亲）；3. 围绕人物的优秀品质（耐心、关爱）选取典型事例；4. 组织语言，确保语句通顺、词数符合要求。
【答案】
The person I admire the most is my mum. She is busy but she always listens to my problems with patience. When I don't get good grades, instead of shouting at me, she corrects my mistakes and teaches me how to solve them. She is the greatest mother. And I feel so lucky to have such a wonderful mother.
【知识点】
英语写作、人物描写、简单句运用
【点评】
本题贴近学生生活，考查基础英语表达与人物介绍的写作能力，难度较低，适合学生巩固写作基础。
【难度系数】
0.6
