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学会接纳自己，才能收获快乐与从容。在生活中，你是否拥有许多闪光的优点？是否愿意耐心倾听他人、主动伸出援手？是否为了心中的目标与热爱，始终认真追求、不断前行？请结合自身经历，根据
中的要点，以“I’m proud of myself”为题，写一篇英语短文。
【注意】1. 不少于80词，短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
2. 文中请勿提及真实姓名、校名、地名等信息。
I’m proud of myself
Everyone is special in the world. We should be proud that we each have our own good qualities or talents. And I’m proud that
Be proud of ourselves and accept what we already have, and we’ll stay happier and healthier.
中的要点，以“I’m proud of myself”为题，写一篇英语短文。【注意】1. 不少于80词，短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
2. 文中请勿提及真实姓名、校名、地名等信息。
I’m proud of myself
Everyone is special in the world. We should be proud that we each have our own good qualities or talents. And I’m proud that
I'm a patient and helpful person.
Last year, my classmate Lily struggled with English. She often failed exams and felt sad. I decided to help her. Every afternoon, I explained grammar to her and shared my notes. At first, she made little progress, but I never gave up. I encouraged her to keep trying and reminded her that learning takes time. We practised speaking together, and I helped her write short essays. Slowly, her confidence grew. After two months, she got an A in the final exam! Her smile made me feel proud. I realized that helping others not only brings joy but also strengthens my own understanding of knowledge.
To improve myself, I'll learn to manage time better. I'll make a daily plan and stick to it. Also, I want to develop a habit of reading more books to broaden my horizons. I believe these small steps will make a big difference in my life.
Be proud of ourselves and accept what we already have, and we’ll stay happier and healthier.
答案
One possible version
I'm proud of myself
Everyone is special in the world. We should be proud that we each have our own good qualities or talents. And I'm proud that I'm a patient and helpful person.
Last year, my classmate Lily struggled with English. She often failed exams and felt sad. I decided to help her. Every afternoon, I explained grammar to her and shared my notes. At first, she made little progress, but I never gave up. I encouraged her to keep trying and reminded her that learning takes time. We practised speaking together, and I helped her write short essays. Slowly, her confidence grew. After two months, she got an A in the final exam! Her smile made me feel proud. I realized that helping others not only brings joy but also strengthens my own understanding of knowledge.
To improve myself, I'll learn to manage time better. I'll make a daily plan and stick to it. Also, I want to develop a habit of reading more books to broaden my horizons. I believe these small steps will make a big difference in my life.
Be proud of ourselves and accept what we already have, and we'll stay happier and healthier.
I'm proud of myself
Everyone is special in the world. We should be proud that we each have our own good qualities or talents. And I'm proud that I'm a patient and helpful person.
Last year, my classmate Lily struggled with English. She often failed exams and felt sad. I decided to help her. Every afternoon, I explained grammar to her and shared my notes. At first, she made little progress, but I never gave up. I encouraged her to keep trying and reminded her that learning takes time. We practised speaking together, and I helped her write short essays. Slowly, her confidence grew. After two months, she got an A in the final exam! Her smile made me feel proud. I realized that helping others not only brings joy but also strengthens my own understanding of knowledge.
To improve myself, I'll learn to manage time better. I'll make a daily plan and stick to it. Also, I want to develop a habit of reading more books to broaden my horizons. I believe these small steps will make a big difference in my life.
Be proud of ourselves and accept what we already have, and we'll stay happier and healthier.
解析
【分析】
本题为半开放性英语写作题，需围绕“I’m proud of myself”的主题，结合三个核心要点展开：1. 自身优点；2. 让自己骄傲的亲身故事；3. 自我提升的建议。解题思路为：先衔接给定开头，明确自身优点；再通过具体事例支撑“骄傲”的原因，体现优点的价值；最后提出合理的自我提升计划，使文章结构完整、内容充实，同时注意词数要求和隐私禁忌。
【解析】
1. 衔接开头：承接给定开头，点明自身优点（如耐心、乐于助人），对应第一个要点；
2. 讲述骄傲的故事：选取贴近学生生活的事例（帮助同学提升英语），详细描述过程（帮助的具体行动、遇到的小困难、最终结果），体现优点带来的积极影响，对应第二个要点；
3. 提出自我提升建议：结合自身实际，给出具体可行的计划（时间管理、多读书），对应第三个要点；
4. 收尾衔接：自然过渡到给定结尾，确保文章逻辑连贯、语言通顺，满足词数要求。
【答案】
One possible version
I'm proud of myself
Everyone is special in the world. We should be proud that we each have our own good qualities or talents. And I'm proud that I'm a patient and helpful person.
Last year, my classmate Lily struggled with English. She often failed exams and felt sad. I decided to help her. Every afternoon, I explained grammar to her and shared my notes. At first, she made little progress, but I never gave up. I encouraged her to keep trying and reminded her that learning takes time. We practised speaking together, and I helped her write short essays. Slowly, her confidence grew. After two months, she got an A in the final exam! Her smile made me feel proud. I realized that helping others not only brings joy but also strengthens my own understanding of knowledge.
To improve myself, I'll learn to manage time better. I'll make a daily plan and stick to it. Also, I want to develop a habit of reading more books to broaden my horizons. I believe these small steps will make a big difference in my life.
Be proud of ourselves and accept what we already have, and we'll stay happier and healthier.
【知识点】
英语写作、要点式表达、记叙文写作
【点评】
本题结合学生生活实际，考查半开放性英语写作能力，要求围绕指定要点构思内容，既贴近学生生活易上手，又能引导学生树立积极的自我认知，符合英语学科核心素养的培养要求。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题为半开放性英语写作题，需围绕“I’m proud of myself”的主题，结合三个核心要点展开：1. 自身优点；2. 让自己骄傲的亲身故事；3. 自我提升的建议。解题思路为：先衔接给定开头，明确自身优点；再通过具体事例支撑“骄傲”的原因，体现优点的价值；最后提出合理的自我提升计划，使文章结构完整、内容充实，同时注意词数要求和隐私禁忌。
【解析】
1. 衔接开头：承接给定开头，点明自身优点（如耐心、乐于助人），对应第一个要点；
2. 讲述骄傲的故事：选取贴近学生生活的事例（帮助同学提升英语），详细描述过程（帮助的具体行动、遇到的小困难、最终结果），体现优点带来的积极影响，对应第二个要点；
3. 提出自我提升建议：结合自身实际，给出具体可行的计划（时间管理、多读书），对应第三个要点；
4. 收尾衔接：自然过渡到给定结尾，确保文章逻辑连贯、语言通顺，满足词数要求。
【答案】
One possible version
I'm proud of myself
Everyone is special in the world. We should be proud that we each have our own good qualities or talents. And I'm proud that I'm a patient and helpful person.
Last year, my classmate Lily struggled with English. She often failed exams and felt sad. I decided to help her. Every afternoon, I explained grammar to her and shared my notes. At first, she made little progress, but I never gave up. I encouraged her to keep trying and reminded her that learning takes time. We practised speaking together, and I helped her write short essays. Slowly, her confidence grew. After two months, she got an A in the final exam! Her smile made me feel proud. I realized that helping others not only brings joy but also strengthens my own understanding of knowledge.
To improve myself, I'll learn to manage time better. I'll make a daily plan and stick to it. Also, I want to develop a habit of reading more books to broaden my horizons. I believe these small steps will make a big difference in my life.
Be proud of ourselves and accept what we already have, and we'll stay happier and healthier.
【知识点】
英语写作、要点式表达、记叙文写作
【点评】
本题结合学生生活实际，考查半开放性英语写作能力，要求围绕指定要点构思内容，既贴近学生生活易上手，又能引导学生树立积极的自我认知，符合英语学科核心素养的培养要求。
【难度系数】
0.5
