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话题综述 本单元的话题是“学校生活”，讨论校园内的各种实践活动，是第三单元话题的延续。本单元话题贴近学生的生活实际，通过学习，我们可以了解丰富多彩的校园活动。学生应学会运用所学的词汇、短语、句型以及语法（表示时间的介词和频度副词）从不同方面介绍自己的校园生活。
典型例题 （2026·扬州市广陵区月考）亲爱的同学们，初中生活开启了我们人生的新旅程。请结合图片，以“My wonderful school life”为题，写一篇70词左右的英语短文，介绍你的学校生活。
话题综述 本单元的话题是“学校生活”，讨论校园内的各种实践活动，是第三单元话题的延续。本单元话题贴近学生的生活实际，通过学习，我们可以了解丰富多彩的校园活动。学生应学会运用所学的词汇、短语、句型以及语法（表示时间的介词和频度副词）从不同方面介绍自己的校园生活。
典型例题 （2026·扬州市广陵区月考）亲爱的同学们，初中生活开启了我们人生的新旅程。请结合图片，以“My wonderful school life”为题，写一篇70词左右的英语短文，介绍你的学校生活。
答案
My wonderful school life
My school is very beautiful. All my teachers and classmates are kind to me, and I get on well with them. My favourite subject is Art, and I think it is great fun. I am in the Art Club, I often draw pictures with my friends there after class. Sometimes I play ball games with my classmates after school. I always have a good time at school. My school life is really wonderful!
My school is very beautiful. All my teachers and classmates are kind to me, and I get on well with them. My favourite subject is Art, and I think it is great fun. I am in the Art Club, I often draw pictures with my friends there after class. Sometimes I play ball games with my classmates after school. I always have a good time at school. My school life is really wonderful!
解析
【分析】首先审题，明确题目要求：以“My wonderful school life”为题，结合图片介绍校园生活，词数约70词，需运用频度副词和时间介词。观察图片可知，校园生活可分为美丽校园、友善师生、最爱学科、快乐社团、精彩运动五个方面，写作时需涵盖核心要点，用所学词汇和句型连贯表达，最后总结感受。
【解析】1. 开篇总述：描述校园美丽，师生友善，点明校园生活的整体氛围；2. 介绍学科与社团：说明最喜欢的学科是美术，加入美术社团，课后和朋友画画；3. 补充运动活动：提及课后有时和同学打球；4. 结尾总结：表达校园生活很美好，运用频度副词（often, sometimes, always）和时间介词（after class, after school），控制词数符合要求。
【答案】My wonderful school life
My school is very beautiful. All my teachers and classmates are kind to me, and I get on well with them. My favourite subject is Art, and I think it is great fun. I am in the Art Club, I often draw pictures with my friends there after class. Sometimes I play ball games with my classmates after school. I always have a good time at school. My school life is really wonderful!
【知识点】英语应用文写作、频度副词运用、时间介词运用
【点评】本文紧扣话题，结合图片中的校园生活场景，内容具体充实，语言流畅自然，准确运用了要求的频度副词和时间介词，结构清晰，符合初中英语写作的要求，很好地展现了精彩的校园生活。
【难度系数】0.4
【解析】1. 开篇总述：描述校园美丽，师生友善，点明校园生活的整体氛围；2. 介绍学科与社团：说明最喜欢的学科是美术，加入美术社团，课后和朋友画画；3. 补充运动活动：提及课后有时和同学打球；4. 结尾总结：表达校园生活很美好，运用频度副词（often, sometimes, always）和时间介词（after class, after school），控制词数符合要求。
【答案】My wonderful school life
My school is very beautiful. All my teachers and classmates are kind to me, and I get on well with them. My favourite subject is Art, and I think it is great fun. I am in the Art Club, I often draw pictures with my friends there after class. Sometimes I play ball games with my classmates after school. I always have a good time at school. My school life is really wonderful!
【知识点】英语应用文写作、频度副词运用、时间介词运用
【点评】本文紧扣话题，结合图片中的校园生活场景，内容具体充实，语言流畅自然，准确运用了要求的频度副词和时间介词，结构清晰，符合初中英语写作的要求，很好地展现了精彩的校园生活。
【难度系数】0.4
