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◆典型例题
以"Free-Time Activities in My Family"为题,写一篇短文,介绍自己和家人的业余活动,包括家人各自的业余活动及喜欢的原因,以及你对这些活动的看法。80-100词。
◆写作思路
1.时态:整体使用一般现在时,因为描述的是家人日常的业余活动,属于常态情况。
2.人称:以第一人称(I)和第三人称(my family members)为主,介绍自己和家人的业余活动。
3.结构:
◆写作模板
开头句:
There are many free-time activities in my family.
我家有很多休闲活动。
过渡句:
1. He often plays chess with his friends on weekends because he thinks it can make his mind sharp.
他经常在周末和朋友们下棋,因为他认为这能让他的思维保持敏锐。
2. My mother enjoys gardening.
我的妈妈喜欢园艺。
3. She thinks being close to nature makes her relaxed.
她认为亲近大自然能让她放松。
4. As for me, I love reading storybooks.
至于我,我喜欢读故事书。
结尾句:
These free-time activities make our family life colourful and happy.
这些休闲活动让我们的家庭生活丰富多彩且充满快乐。
◆范文欣赏
Free-Time Activities in My Family
There are many free-time activities in my family. Let me tell you about them.
My father likes playing chess. He often plays chess with his friends on weekends because he thinks it can make his mind sharp.
My mother enjoys gardening. She spends a lot of time taking care of the flowers in our garden. She thinks being close to nature makes her relaxed.
As for me, I love reading storybooks. It not only brings me fun but also helps me learn new words and knowledge.
These free-time activities make our family life colourful and happy.
请你围绕"业余活动",写一篇80词左右的英语短文,介绍你最喜欢的业余放松活动(如阅读、运动、听音乐等),说明该活动能让你放松的原因,并谈谈你从中学到的收获。开头已给出,不计入总词数。
After a busy week at school,
请做: 单元检测(一) 勤演练,汇真知
以"Free-Time Activities in My Family"为题,写一篇短文,介绍自己和家人的业余活动,包括家人各自的业余活动及喜欢的原因,以及你对这些活动的看法。80-100词。
◆写作思路
1.时态:整体使用一般现在时,因为描述的是家人日常的业余活动,属于常态情况。
2.人称:以第一人称(I)和第三人称(my family members)为主,介绍自己和家人的业余活动。
3.结构:
◆写作模板
开头句:
There are many free-time activities in my family.
我家有很多休闲活动。
过渡句:
1. He often plays chess with his friends on weekends because he thinks it can make his mind sharp.
他经常在周末和朋友们下棋,因为他认为这能让他的思维保持敏锐。
2. My mother enjoys gardening.
我的妈妈喜欢园艺。
3. She thinks being close to nature makes her relaxed.
她认为亲近大自然能让她放松。
4. As for me, I love reading storybooks.
至于我,我喜欢读故事书。
结尾句:
These free-time activities make our family life colourful and happy.
这些休闲活动让我们的家庭生活丰富多彩且充满快乐。
◆范文欣赏
Free-Time Activities in My Family
There are many free-time activities in my family. Let me tell you about them.
My father likes playing chess. He often plays chess with his friends on weekends because he thinks it can make his mind sharp.
My mother enjoys gardening. She spends a lot of time taking care of the flowers in our garden. She thinks being close to nature makes her relaxed.
As for me, I love reading storybooks. It not only brings me fun but also helps me learn new words and knowledge.
These free-time activities make our family life colourful and happy.
B写作实战
请你围绕"业余活动",写一篇80词左右的英语短文,介绍你最喜欢的业余放松活动(如阅读、运动、听音乐等),说明该活动能让你放松的原因,并谈谈你从中学到的收获。开头已给出,不计入总词数。
After a busy week at school,
I always
choose reading to relax myself. My favourite
books are storybooks and science fictions. When
I read, I can forget all my worries and enter
different wonderful worlds. It not only makes
me feel calm but also opens my eyes to new
knowledge. Sometimes, I share interesting
stories with my friends, which brings us closer.
Reading is a great way to relax and grow. I think
everyone should find their own way to relax in
daily life.
choose reading to relax myself. My favourite
books are storybooks and science fictions. When
I read, I can forget all my worries and enter
different wonderful worlds. It not only makes
me feel calm but also opens my eyes to new
knowledge. Sometimes, I share interesting
stories with my friends, which brings us closer.
Reading is a great way to relax and grow. I think
everyone should find their own way to relax in
daily life.
请做: 单元检测(一) 勤演练,汇真知
答案
After a busy week at school, I need a good way to relax. I like listening to music best in my free time. When I feel tired or stressed from study, soft music helps me calm down quickly. I also love English songs; they let me learn new words and improve my English. This hobby not only makes me relaxed but also brings me much fun. It’s really a nice activity for me.
解析
【分析】
本题要求围绕“业余活动”写英语短文，需承接给定开头，先点明自己喜欢的业余活动，再说明该活动能放松的原因，最后谈谈从中的收获。写作时要使用一般现在时，以第一人称叙述，控制词数在80左右，语言简洁流畅，符合日常表达习惯。
【解析】
1. 承接开头句“After a busy week at school”，点明自己的业余放松活动（选择听音乐，贴近学生生活）；
2. 说明喜欢该活动的原因，结合学习后的压力，体现放松的作用；
3. 阐述从该活动中获得的收获，比如学习知识、获得乐趣等；
4. 收尾总结，呼应主题，确保词数符合要求，语句通顺。
【答案】
After a busy week at school, I need a good way to relax. I like listening to music best in my free time. When I feel tired or stressed from study, soft music helps me calm down quickly. I also love English songs; they let me learn new words and improve my English. This hobby not only makes me relaxed but also brings me much fun. It’s really a nice activity for me.
【知识点】
英语写作、业余活动话题、一般现在时
【点评】
短文紧扣主题，结构清晰，依次点明活动、说明原因、阐述收获，符合题目要求，语言简单流畅，适合初中阶段的写作要求。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题要求围绕“业余活动”写英语短文，需承接给定开头，先点明自己喜欢的业余活动，再说明该活动能放松的原因，最后谈谈从中的收获。写作时要使用一般现在时，以第一人称叙述，控制词数在80左右，语言简洁流畅，符合日常表达习惯。
【解析】
1. 承接开头句“After a busy week at school”，点明自己的业余放松活动（选择听音乐，贴近学生生活）；
2. 说明喜欢该活动的原因，结合学习后的压力，体现放松的作用；
3. 阐述从该活动中获得的收获，比如学习知识、获得乐趣等；
4. 收尾总结，呼应主题，确保词数符合要求，语句通顺。
【答案】
After a busy week at school, I need a good way to relax. I like listening to music best in my free time. When I feel tired or stressed from study, soft music helps me calm down quickly. I also love English songs; they let me learn new words and improve my English. This hobby not only makes me relaxed but also brings me much fun. It’s really a nice activity for me.
【知识点】
英语写作、业余活动话题、一般现在时
【点评】
短文紧扣主题，结构清晰，依次点明活动、说明原因、阐述收获，符合题目要求，语言简单流畅，适合初中阶段的写作要求。
【难度系数】
0.5
