实战演练
不同的人有不同的爱好,好的爱好能够成就人的一生。请根据自己的实际情况,谈一谈你的爱好。
【要点】1. What's your hobby? Why?
2. What's your dream?
【要求】1. 请以“My hobby”为题,用英语写一篇不少于 60 词的短文,描述自己的爱好。
2. 要求语言流畅、书写规范。
3. 文中不得使用你的真实姓名和校名。
My hobby

One possible version:
My hobby
My name is Simon. I'm tall and strong. I love doing
sport. My favourite sport is football. I'm good at it. I often
play football with my friends at weekends. Playing football
can keep me healthy and it always makes me happy.
I want to be in the school football team. My dream is to
play football in the World Cup in the future. I hope my
dream can come true.

【分析】首先审题，明确写作主题为“My hobby”，需覆盖两个核心要点：说明自己的爱好及原因、阐述个人梦想；其次要遵循写作要求：用英语写短文、不少于60词、不使用真实姓名校名、语言流畅。写作时先确定具体爱好（如足球），再围绕爱好展开描述（参与情况、益处），最后点明梦想，确保内容连贯符合要求。
【解析】按照写作逻辑，先介绍爱好：点明爱好是踢足球，说明参与情况（常和朋友周末踢球）及原因（保持健康、带来快乐）；再阐述梦想（想进校队，未来参加世界杯），组织语言形成连贯短文，满足词数和格式要求。
【答案】My name is Simon. I'm tall and strong. I love doing sport. My favourite sport is football. I'm good at it. I often play football with my friends at weekends. Playing football can keep me healthy and it always makes me happy. I want to be in the school football team. My dream is to play football in the World Cup in the future. I hope my dream can come true.
【知识点】英语写作、个人话题表达
【点评】范文紧扣题目要点，内容具体充实，语言流畅自然，符合英语写作的格式和要求，清晰展现了爱好、原因及梦想，是一篇符合要求的习作。
【难度系数】0.6