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[2026 江苏南京期末]近年来 DIY 盛行,DIY 源于人们为节省费用在闲暇时自行整修房屋的行为,渐渐地 DIY 的概念被扩充到所有可以自己动手做的事物上。请以“My View on DIY”为题写一篇英语短文。
要求:1. 词数 90 左右,书写工整,语句通顺,意思连贯;
2. 文中不得提及真实的人名和校名等个人信息。
要点: * What do you think of DIY?
What DIY job did you once do?
What tools and materials did you use?
Was your work well done?
What do you learn from DIY?
[2026 江苏南京期末]近年来 DIY 盛行,DIY 源于人们为节省费用在闲暇时自行整修房屋的行为,渐渐地 DIY 的概念被扩充到所有可以自己动手做的事物上。请以“My View on DIY”为题写一篇英语短文。
要求:1. 词数 90 左右,书写工整,语句通顺,意思连贯;
2. 文中不得提及真实的人名和校名等个人信息。
要点: * What do you think of DIY?
What DIY job did you once do?
What tools and materials did you use?
Was your work well done?
What do you learn from DIY?
My View on DIY
DIY is very popular now. I think DIY can help improve our abilities to do something and it can make us use less money.
My parents never let me do anything. But on last Mother’s Day, I wanted to make my mother surprised. I planned to make a card for her by myself.
I used some tools and materials, such as paper, glue, scissors and so on. Although I didn’t do it well, my mother was still happy. It is very important for me and I am sure DIY will help me more.
From DIY, I have become more patient and got more skills. I like it very much.
DIY is very popular now. I think DIY can help improve our abilities to do something and it can make us use less money.
My parents never let me do anything. But on last Mother’s Day, I wanted to make my mother surprised. I planned to make a card for her by myself.
I used some tools and materials, such as paper, glue, scissors and so on. Although I didn’t do it well, my mother was still happy. It is very important for me and I am sure DIY will help me more.
From DIY, I have become more patient and got more skills. I like it very much.
答案
【参考范文】
My View on DIY
DIY is very popular now. I think DIY can help improve our abilities to do something and it can make us use less money.
My parents never let me do anything. But on last Mother’s Day, I wanted to make my mother surprised. I planned to make a card for her by myself.
I used some tools and materials, such as paper, glue, scissors and so on. Although I didn’t do it well, my mother was still happy. It is very important for me and I am sure DIY will help me more.
From DIY, I have become more patient and got more skills. I like it very much.
链接狂K
“not only... but also...”的详细讲解见狂K重点P23。
知识拓展
patient adj. 有耐心的；能忍耐的 n. 病人
My View on DIY
DIY is very popular now. I think DIY can help improve our abilities to do something and it can make us use less money.
My parents never let me do anything. But on last Mother’s Day, I wanted to make my mother surprised. I planned to make a card for her by myself.
I used some tools and materials, such as paper, glue, scissors and so on. Although I didn’t do it well, my mother was still happy. It is very important for me and I am sure DIY will help me more.
From DIY, I have become more patient and got more skills. I like it very much.
链接狂K
“not only... but also...”的详细讲解见狂K重点P23。
知识拓展
patient adj. 有耐心的；能忍耐的 n. 病人
解析
【分析】
这是一篇英语话题作文，主题为“My View on DIY”，需覆盖题目指定的5个要点：①表达对DIY的看法；②讲述自己做过的DIY事例；③说明使用的工具和材料；④评价DIY成果；⑤总结从DIY中获得的收获。写作时要控制词数在90左右，语句通顺，避免提及真实个人信息，采用“总-分-总”结构更清晰，先点明对DIY的整体认知，再结合自身经历展开，最后总结感悟。
【解析】
写作时按要点依次展开：1. 开篇点明DIY的流行，表达自己的看法（既省钱又能提升动手能力）；2. 举例：母亲节为妈妈自制卡片，说明使用的工具（剪刀、胶水）和材料（纸）；3. 说明成果：虽做得不够好，但妈妈很开心；4. 结尾总结：从DIY中变得更有耐心，学到技能，表达喜爱。注意语言简洁，符合英语表达习惯，控制词数。
【答案】
My View on DIY
DIY is very popular now. I think DIY can help improve our abilities to do something and it can make us use less money.
My parents never let me do anything. But on last Mother’s Day, I wanted to make my mother surprised. I planned to make a card for her by myself.
I used some tools and materials, such as paper, glue, scissors and so on. Although I didn’t do it well, my mother was still happy. It is very important for me and I am sure DIY will help me more.
From DIY, I have become more patient and got more skills. I like it very much.
【知识点】
英语话题作文、DIY词汇运用、英语叙事写作
【点评】
本文紧扣题目所有要点，结构清晰，语言通顺，符合词数要求，通过具体事例自然表达对DIY的看法与感悟，是一篇符合要求的英语习作。
【难度系数】
0.6
这是一篇英语话题作文，主题为“My View on DIY”，需覆盖题目指定的5个要点：①表达对DIY的看法；②讲述自己做过的DIY事例；③说明使用的工具和材料；④评价DIY成果；⑤总结从DIY中获得的收获。写作时要控制词数在90左右，语句通顺，避免提及真实个人信息，采用“总-分-总”结构更清晰，先点明对DIY的整体认知，再结合自身经历展开，最后总结感悟。
【解析】
写作时按要点依次展开：1. 开篇点明DIY的流行，表达自己的看法（既省钱又能提升动手能力）；2. 举例：母亲节为妈妈自制卡片，说明使用的工具（剪刀、胶水）和材料（纸）；3. 说明成果：虽做得不够好，但妈妈很开心；4. 结尾总结：从DIY中变得更有耐心，学到技能，表达喜爱。注意语言简洁，符合英语表达习惯，控制词数。
【答案】
My View on DIY
DIY is very popular now. I think DIY can help improve our abilities to do something and it can make us use less money.
My parents never let me do anything. But on last Mother’s Day, I wanted to make my mother surprised. I planned to make a card for her by myself.
I used some tools and materials, such as paper, glue, scissors and so on. Although I didn’t do it well, my mother was still happy. It is very important for me and I am sure DIY will help me more.
From DIY, I have become more patient and got more skills. I like it very much.
【知识点】
英语话题作文、DIY词汇运用、英语叙事写作
【点评】
本文紧扣题目所有要点，结构清晰，语言通顺，符合词数要求，通过具体事例自然表达对DIY的看法与感悟，是一篇符合要求的英语习作。
【难度系数】
0.6
