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七、书面表达(满分 25 分)
五一黄金周即将来临，为了促进本地旅游业的发展，吸引更多中外游客来南通游玩，南通市共青团开展了以“我为家乡代言”为主题的演讲活动。请根据提示，以“My charming hometown”为题，写一篇英文演讲稿，简单介绍你的家乡。
写作要求：1. 要点齐全，可作适当发挥；2. 表达清楚，意思连贯，符合逻辑；3. 90 词左右。首尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Good morning, everyone! It's my great honour to introduce my hometown Nantong to you.
That's all! Thanks for listening!
五一黄金周即将来临，为了促进本地旅游业的发展，吸引更多中外游客来南通游玩，南通市共青团开展了以“我为家乡代言”为主题的演讲活动。请根据提示，以“My charming hometown”为题，写一篇英文演讲稿，简单介绍你的家乡。
写作要求：1. 要点齐全，可作适当发挥；2. 表达清楚，意思连贯，符合逻辑；3. 90 词左右。首尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Good morning, everyone! It's my great honour to introduce my hometown Nantong to you.
That's all! Thanks for listening!
答案
七、One possible version:
Good morning, everyone! It's my great honour tointroduce my hometown Nantong to you.
Nantong is a seaside city which is located inthe east of Jiangsu Province. You can hear the birds
sing and smell the flowers when you walk around.Also, there are many places of interest to visit in Nantong, such as the Golden Beach and Qitang City. Don't miss the delicious seafood. You can try some in any local restaurant. What's more,Nantong is rich in traditional culture. For example,we often put up paper-cuts on windows and doors for good luck at the Spring Festival. In addition,people here are friendly enough to help you with all kinds of problems.With its natural beauty, tasty food, lively culture and helpful people, Nantong is a fantastic place to visit.
That's all! Thanks for listening!
Good morning, everyone! It's my great honour tointroduce my hometown Nantong to you.
Nantong is a seaside city which is located inthe east of Jiangsu Province. You can hear the birds
sing and smell the flowers when you walk around.Also, there are many places of interest to visit in Nantong, such as the Golden Beach and Qitang City. Don't miss the delicious seafood. You can try some in any local restaurant. What's more,Nantong is rich in traditional culture. For example,we often put up paper-cuts on windows and doors for good luck at the Spring Festival. In addition,people here are friendly enough to help you with all kinds of problems.With its natural beauty, tasty food, lively culture and helpful people, Nantong is a fantastic place to visit.
That's all! Thanks for listening!
解析
【分析】
本题为英语书面表达（演讲稿），要求介绍家乡南通，需结合给定思维导图的核心要点（地理优势、环境宜人、美食美景、传统文化等）完成90词左右的内容，且首尾已给出。解题思路：① 梳理思维导图要点，转化为英文表达；② 补充合理细节（如黄金海滩、海鲜、剪纸习俗、当地人友好等）充实内容；③ 用连接词（also、what's more等）串联语句，保证逻辑连贯；④ 贴合演讲稿语气，控制词数。
【解析】
1. 主体先介绍地理位置：Nantong is a seaside city which is located in the east of Jiangsu Province.（对应地理优势）
2. 描述环境：You can hear the birds sing and smell the flowers when you walk around.（对应环境宜人）
3. 讲美食美景：There are many places of interest to visit in Nantong, such as the Golden Beach... Don't miss the delicious seafood.（对应美食美景）
4. 介绍传统文化：Nantong is rich in traditional culture. For example, we often put up paper-cuts on windows and doors for good luck at the Spring Festival.（对应传统文化）
5. 补充细节：In addition, people here are friendly enough to help you with all kinds of problems.
6. 总结呼应主题：With its natural beauty, tasty food, lively culture and helpful people, Nantong is a fantastic place to visit.
【答案】
Good morning, everyone! It's my great honour to introduce my hometown Nantong to you.
Nantong is a seaside city which is located in the east of Jiangsu Province. You can hear the birds sing and smell the flowers when you walk around. Also, there are many places of interest to visit in Nantong, such as the Golden Beach and Qitang City. Don't miss the delicious seafood. You can try some in any local restaurant. What's more, Nantong is rich in traditional culture. For example, we often put up paper-cuts on windows and doors for good luck at the Spring Festival. In addition, people here are friendly enough to help you with all kinds of problems. With its natural beauty, tasty food, lively culture and helpful people, Nantong is a fantastic place to visit.
That's all! Thanks for listening!
【知识点】
英语书面表达、家乡介绍话题、演讲稿写作
【点评】
范文紧扣题目要求，要点齐全，涵盖思维导图核心内容，补充细节符合实际，语句通顺、逻辑清晰，连接词使用恰当，语气贴合演讲稿要求，词数符合规定，是优秀的参考范文。
【难度系数】
0.4
本题为英语书面表达（演讲稿），要求介绍家乡南通，需结合给定思维导图的核心要点（地理优势、环境宜人、美食美景、传统文化等）完成90词左右的内容，且首尾已给出。解题思路：① 梳理思维导图要点，转化为英文表达；② 补充合理细节（如黄金海滩、海鲜、剪纸习俗、当地人友好等）充实内容；③ 用连接词（also、what's more等）串联语句，保证逻辑连贯；④ 贴合演讲稿语气，控制词数。
【解析】
1. 主体先介绍地理位置：Nantong is a seaside city which is located in the east of Jiangsu Province.（对应地理优势）
2. 描述环境：You can hear the birds sing and smell the flowers when you walk around.（对应环境宜人）
3. 讲美食美景：There are many places of interest to visit in Nantong, such as the Golden Beach... Don't miss the delicious seafood.（对应美食美景）
4. 介绍传统文化：Nantong is rich in traditional culture. For example, we often put up paper-cuts on windows and doors for good luck at the Spring Festival.（对应传统文化）
5. 补充细节：In addition, people here are friendly enough to help you with all kinds of problems.
6. 总结呼应主题：With its natural beauty, tasty food, lively culture and helpful people, Nantong is a fantastic place to visit.
【答案】
Good morning, everyone! It's my great honour to introduce my hometown Nantong to you.
Nantong is a seaside city which is located in the east of Jiangsu Province. You can hear the birds sing and smell the flowers when you walk around. Also, there are many places of interest to visit in Nantong, such as the Golden Beach and Qitang City. Don't miss the delicious seafood. You can try some in any local restaurant. What's more, Nantong is rich in traditional culture. For example, we often put up paper-cuts on windows and doors for good luck at the Spring Festival. In addition, people here are friendly enough to help you with all kinds of problems. With its natural beauty, tasty food, lively culture and helpful people, Nantong is a fantastic place to visit.
That's all! Thanks for listening!
【知识点】
英语书面表达、家乡介绍话题、演讲稿写作
【点评】
范文紧扣题目要求，要点齐全，涵盖思维导图核心内容，补充细节符合实际，语句通顺、逻辑清晰，连接词使用恰当，语气贴合演讲稿要求，词数符合规定，是优秀的参考范文。
【难度系数】
0.4
