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假如你是李华，你的澳大利亚笔友Tony即将来中国，他想向你了解一下中国人的生活方式和中国的传统习俗。请你根据下面的要点提示进行适当发挥，用英语给Tony写一封邮件，对此进行简单介绍并对他的到来表示期待和欢迎。
【要点】
【注意】
1. 词数90左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
2. 可适当发挥，使短文连贯通顺。
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
Dear Tony,
Yours,
Li Hua
【要点】
【注意】
1. 词数90左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
2. 可适当发挥，使短文连贯通顺。
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
Dear Tony,
I'm happy to hear that you will come to China. You have asked me about the lifestyle of Chinese people and Chinese traditions. Here are some of my ideas.
First, when we Chinese people meet for the first time, we shake hands or nod heads. Second, we use chopsticks instead of a knife and fork. Don't speak if you have food in your mouth.
Third, on birthdays we usually have a birthday cake and long noodles. When others give us presents, we should accept them with both hands.
Besides, the Spring Festival is the most important festival in China.
People have a traditional family dinner together on the eve of the Spring Festival.
Children get hongbao which means good luck during the Spring Festival.
I am looking forward to seeing you soon.
I hope you will like China.
Yours,
Li Hua
答案
One possible version:
Dear Tony,
I'm happy to hear that you will come to China. You have asked me about the lifestyle of Chinese people and Chinese traditions. Here are some of my ideas.
First, when we Chinese people meet for the first time, we shake hands or nod heads. Second, we use chopsticks instead of a knife and fork. Don't speak if you have food in your mouth. Third, on birthdays we usually have a birthday cake and long noodles. When others give us presents, we should accept them with both hands. Besides, the Spring Festival is the most important festival in China. People have a traditional family dinner together on the eve of the Spring Festival. Children get hongbao which means good luck during the Spring Festival.
I am looking forward to seeing you soon. I hope you will like China.
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Tony,
I'm happy to hear that you will come to China. You have asked me about the lifestyle of Chinese people and Chinese traditions. Here are some of my ideas.
First, when we Chinese people meet for the first time, we shake hands or nod heads. Second, we use chopsticks instead of a knife and fork. Don't speak if you have food in your mouth. Third, on birthdays we usually have a birthday cake and long noodles. When others give us presents, we should accept them with both hands. Besides, the Spring Festival is the most important festival in China. People have a traditional family dinner together on the eve of the Spring Festival. Children get hongbao which means good luck during the Spring Festival.
I am looking forward to seeing you soon. I hope you will like China.
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】
拿到这道写作题，首先先明确核心任务：作为李华给澳大利亚笔友Tony写邮件，介绍中国的生活方式和传统习俗。第一步先梳理所有表格给出的要点，避免遗漏：四个场景分别对应初次见面、用餐、过生日、过春节的相关礼仪习俗。第二步搭建行文逻辑：开篇先回应对方想要了解中国习俗的诉求，接着用逻辑连接词依次把四个场景的习俗清晰说明，最后收尾表达对Tony来访的欢迎和期待。第三步匹配写作要求：词数控制在90左右，给定的开头结尾不计入总词数，语言自然符合邮件的交际语境，不出现真实人名校名，适当补充符合常识的春节相关习俗让内容更饱满通顺。
【解析】
1. 确定体裁与时态：本文是应用文电子邮件，介绍常规习俗统一使用一般现在时，人称以第一人称介绍中国习惯，第二人称向Tony说明注意事项即可。
2. 搭建内容框架：
① 开篇承接：说明得知Tony要来中国，回应他想了解中国习俗的请求，引出下文介绍；
② 分点介绍习俗：用First/Second/Third/Besides这类连接词串联内容，依次覆盖初次见面握手点头、用餐用筷子不边嚼边说话、生日吃蛋糕长寿面双手接礼、春节全家吃年夜饭收红包的全部要点；
③ 收尾：表达对Tony到来的期待，传递欢迎的态度。
3. 调整语句流畅度，检查语法错误，控制总词数符合要求，避免遗漏要点。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Tony,
I'm happy to hear that you will come to China. You have asked me about the lifestyle of Chinese people and Chinese traditions. Here are some of my ideas.
First, when we Chinese people meet for the first time, we shake hands or nod heads. Second, we use chopsticks instead of a knife and fork. Don't speak if you have food in your mouth. Third, on birthdays we usually have a birthday cake and long noodles. When others give us presents, we should accept them with both hands. Besides, the Spring Festival is the most important festival in China. People have a traditional family dinner together on the eve of the Spring Festival. Children get hongbao which means good luck during the Spring Festival.
I am looking forward to seeing you soon. I hope you will like China.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英文邮件写作，情景作文书写，传统习俗英文表达
【点评】
本题属于提示类应用文写作，所有核心要点都已明确给出，写作门槛较低，学生只需要把提示要点用通顺的英文串联，适当补充符合常识的春节相关内容即可，写作时注意统一使用一般现在时，长寿面、红包这类文化相关的专有表达不要出错，覆盖全部要点就可以拿到不错的分数。
【难度系数】
0.7
拿到这道写作题，首先先明确核心任务：作为李华给澳大利亚笔友Tony写邮件，介绍中国的生活方式和传统习俗。第一步先梳理所有表格给出的要点，避免遗漏：四个场景分别对应初次见面、用餐、过生日、过春节的相关礼仪习俗。第二步搭建行文逻辑：开篇先回应对方想要了解中国习俗的诉求，接着用逻辑连接词依次把四个场景的习俗清晰说明，最后收尾表达对Tony来访的欢迎和期待。第三步匹配写作要求：词数控制在90左右，给定的开头结尾不计入总词数，语言自然符合邮件的交际语境，不出现真实人名校名，适当补充符合常识的春节相关习俗让内容更饱满通顺。
【解析】
1. 确定体裁与时态：本文是应用文电子邮件，介绍常规习俗统一使用一般现在时，人称以第一人称介绍中国习惯，第二人称向Tony说明注意事项即可。
2. 搭建内容框架：
① 开篇承接：说明得知Tony要来中国，回应他想了解中国习俗的请求，引出下文介绍；
② 分点介绍习俗：用First/Second/Third/Besides这类连接词串联内容，依次覆盖初次见面握手点头、用餐用筷子不边嚼边说话、生日吃蛋糕长寿面双手接礼、春节全家吃年夜饭收红包的全部要点；
③ 收尾：表达对Tony到来的期待，传递欢迎的态度。
3. 调整语句流畅度，检查语法错误，控制总词数符合要求，避免遗漏要点。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Tony,
I'm happy to hear that you will come to China. You have asked me about the lifestyle of Chinese people and Chinese traditions. Here are some of my ideas.
First, when we Chinese people meet for the first time, we shake hands or nod heads. Second, we use chopsticks instead of a knife and fork. Don't speak if you have food in your mouth. Third, on birthdays we usually have a birthday cake and long noodles. When others give us presents, we should accept them with both hands. Besides, the Spring Festival is the most important festival in China. People have a traditional family dinner together on the eve of the Spring Festival. Children get hongbao which means good luck during the Spring Festival.
I am looking forward to seeing you soon. I hope you will like China.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英文邮件写作，情景作文书写，传统习俗英文表达
【点评】
本题属于提示类应用文写作，所有核心要点都已明确给出，写作门槛较低，学生只需要把提示要点用通顺的英文串联，适当补充符合常识的春节相关内容即可，写作时注意统一使用一般现在时，长寿面、红包这类文化相关的专有表达不要出错，覆盖全部要点就可以拿到不错的分数。
【难度系数】
0.7
