四、书面表达
假设你是骑行俱乐部的成员,请根据表格内容写一篇英语短文,记录俱乐部组织的一次骑行活动。要求如下:

1. 短文须包括表格内所有内容,可以适当增加细节,使内容连贯;
2. 省略号处可适当发挥1~2句话;
3. 词数90左右,文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。
I'm a member of the Cycling Club. We planned to take a cycling trip last week.
假设你是骑行俱乐部的成员,请根据表格内容写一篇英语短文,记录俱乐部组织的一次骑行活动。要求如下:
1. 短文须包括表格内所有内容,可以适当增加细节,使内容连贯;
2. 省略号处可适当发挥1~2句话;
3. 词数90左右,文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。
I'm a member of the Cycling Club. We planned to take a cycling trip last week.
答案
I'm a member of the Cycling Club. We planned to take a cycling trip last week.
We spent last Friday preparing food and drinks, and we also looked up much detailed information about the farm 10 kilometers south of our school.
We set off very early last Saturday. However, we left our map at home and lost our way. A warm-hearted driver saw us and showed us the correct direction.
Soon after, one of our bikes broke down. All of us tried our best to repair it together.
When we finally arrived at the farm, we had a good rest and took lots of beautiful photos.
We all had a wonderful day. This special trip made us realize that mutual help can bring us lots of warmth and power.
We spent last Friday preparing food and drinks, and we also looked up much detailed information about the farm 10 kilometers south of our school.
We set off very early last Saturday. However, we left our map at home and lost our way. A warm-hearted driver saw us and showed us the correct direction.
Soon after, one of our bikes broke down. All of us tried our best to repair it together.
When we finally arrived at the farm, we had a good rest and took lots of beautiful photos.
We all had a wonderful day. This special trip made us realize that mutual help can bring us lots of warmth and power.
解析
本题为七年级叙事类英语书面表达,要求记录骑行俱乐部的出行活动,写作要求如下:
1. 体裁为记叙文,使用第一人称叙事,整体时态以一般过去时为主,符合七年级写作能力要求;
2. 需完整覆盖表格全部要点:周五准备饮食、查阅农场相关资料,周六清晨出发、忘带地图迷路得到好心司机指路,途中车辆故障众人协力修车,抵达农场后休息拍照,最后补充1-2句合理的活动感悟作为总结;
3. 适当补充细节保证行文连贯,控制总词数在90左右,不使用超纲词汇。
1. 体裁为记叙文,使用第一人称叙事,整体时态以一般过去时为主,符合七年级写作能力要求;
2. 需完整覆盖表格全部要点:周五准备饮食、查阅农场相关资料,周六清晨出发、忘带地图迷路得到好心司机指路,途中车辆故障众人协力修车,抵达农场后休息拍照,最后补充1-2句合理的活动感悟作为总结;
3. 适当补充细节保证行文连贯,控制总词数在90左右,不使用超纲词汇。
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