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七、书面表达(满分 25 分)
暑期将至，同学们都准备利用假期广泛阅读，开阔视野，提高阅读能力，养成阅读习惯。推荐书目有 Journey to the West，Little Women，Treasure Island，The Adventures of Tom Sawyer，Alice’s Adventures in Wonderland……假如你是李华，请根据下面提示，给你的好朋友 Jake 写封邮件，向他推荐你最喜欢的一本书。
要求：1. 包含所有提示内容，可适当发挥；2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；3. 不少于 90 词。(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)
Dear Jake，
The summer vacation is coming soon. It is the best time for us to read books.
Yours，
Li Hua
暑期将至，同学们都准备利用假期广泛阅读，开阔视野，提高阅读能力，养成阅读习惯。推荐书目有 Journey to the West，Little Women，Treasure Island，The Adventures of Tom Sawyer，Alice’s Adventures in Wonderland……假如你是李华，请根据下面提示，给你的好朋友 Jake 写封邮件，向他推荐你最喜欢的一本书。
要求：1. 包含所有提示内容，可适当发挥；2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；3. 不少于 90 词。(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)
Dear Jake，
The summer vacation is coming soon. It is the best time for us to read books.
Yours，
Li Hua
答案
七、One possible version:
Dear Jake,
The summer vacation is coming soon. It is the best time for us to read books. I have read and kept many books from childhood. Among them, my favourite book is *The Adventures of Tom Sawyer*.
The book is about Tom Sawyer, and his unusual childhood. Tom lives in a small town on the Mississippi River in America. He takes some unbelievable adventures with his friends. However, he doesn't fear in the face of difficulties.
My father gave the book to me on my 11th birthday. I learned a lot from Tom Sawyer. His story encourages me to try hard to achieve my dream and never give up. It also tells me that we should always be honest in life. I will keep the book forever.
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Jake,
The summer vacation is coming soon. It is the best time for us to read books. I have read and kept many books from childhood. Among them, my favourite book is *The Adventures of Tom Sawyer*.
The book is about Tom Sawyer, and his unusual childhood. Tom lives in a small town on the Mississippi River in America. He takes some unbelievable adventures with his friends. However, he doesn't fear in the face of difficulties.
My father gave the book to me on my 11th birthday. I learned a lot from Tom Sawyer. His story encourages me to try hard to achieve my dream and never give up. It also tells me that we should always be honest in life. I will keep the book forever.
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】
本题为英语书面表达中的邮件写作题，要求以李华的身份给好友Jake写邮件推荐最喜欢的书。解题思路：1. 遵循邮件格式，利用已给出的开头和结尾补充正文；2. 紧扣题目提示的四个核心要点：最喜欢的书名称、书的内容、获得该书的方式、喜欢的原因；3. 组织语言时保证语句通顺、意思连贯，满足不少于90词的要求，适当发挥让内容更自然。
【解析】
写作时，先点明自己最喜欢的书是《汤姆·索亚历险记》；接着介绍书的内容：讲述汤姆·索亚在美国密西西比河畔小镇的不平凡童年，他和朋友经历诸多冒险，面对困难从不畏惧；然后说明获得方式：这本书是爸爸在自己11岁生日时赠送的；最后阐述喜欢的原因：从汤姆身上学到要努力实现梦想、永不放弃，还要保持诚实，这本书激励自己，会永远珍藏。整体语言符合邮件语气，结构清晰，要点齐全。
【答案】
Dear Jake,
The summer vacation is coming soon. It is the best time for us to read books. I have read and kept many books from childhood. Among them, my favourite book is *The Adventures of Tom Sawyer*.
The book is about Tom Sawyer, and his unusual childhood. Tom lives in a small town on the Mississippi River in America. He takes some unbelievable adventures with his friends. However, he doesn't fear in the face of difficulties.
My father gave the book to me on my 11th birthday. I learned a lot from Tom Sawyer. His story encourages me to try hard to achieve my dream and never give up. It also tells me that we should always be honest in life. I will keep the book forever.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语邮件写作、话题写作（推荐书籍）、英语常用表达
【点评】
范文紧扣题目要求，完整覆盖所有提示要点，内容连贯自然，情感真实，符合邮件的格式与语气，语言准确流畅，是一篇优秀的书面表达范文。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题为英语书面表达中的邮件写作题，要求以李华的身份给好友Jake写邮件推荐最喜欢的书。解题思路：1. 遵循邮件格式，利用已给出的开头和结尾补充正文；2. 紧扣题目提示的四个核心要点：最喜欢的书名称、书的内容、获得该书的方式、喜欢的原因；3. 组织语言时保证语句通顺、意思连贯，满足不少于90词的要求，适当发挥让内容更自然。
【解析】
写作时，先点明自己最喜欢的书是《汤姆·索亚历险记》；接着介绍书的内容：讲述汤姆·索亚在美国密西西比河畔小镇的不平凡童年，他和朋友经历诸多冒险，面对困难从不畏惧；然后说明获得方式：这本书是爸爸在自己11岁生日时赠送的；最后阐述喜欢的原因：从汤姆身上学到要努力实现梦想、永不放弃，还要保持诚实，这本书激励自己，会永远珍藏。整体语言符合邮件语气，结构清晰，要点齐全。
【答案】
Dear Jake,
The summer vacation is coming soon. It is the best time for us to read books. I have read and kept many books from childhood. Among them, my favourite book is *The Adventures of Tom Sawyer*.
The book is about Tom Sawyer, and his unusual childhood. Tom lives in a small town on the Mississippi River in America. He takes some unbelievable adventures with his friends. However, he doesn't fear in the face of difficulties.
My father gave the book to me on my 11th birthday. I learned a lot from Tom Sawyer. His story encourages me to try hard to achieve my dream and never give up. It also tells me that we should always be honest in life. I will keep the book forever.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语邮件写作、话题写作（推荐书籍）、英语常用表达
【点评】
范文紧扣题目要求，完整覆盖所有提示要点，内容连贯自然，情感真实，符合邮件的格式与语气，语言准确流畅，是一篇优秀的书面表达范文。
【难度系数】
0.5
