Ⅶ.【语言能力·语言表达】短文写作。
假设下列图中的人物是你的家人,请以“My family”为题写一篇短文,介绍自己的家人以及他们正在做的事情。
要求:(1)条理清楚,语法正确。
(2)书写规范、认真。
(3)不少于50个单词。

father
mother
sister
I
假设下列图中的人物是你的家人,请以“My family”为题写一篇短文,介绍自己的家人以及他们正在做的事情。
要求:(1)条理清楚,语法正确。
(2)书写规范、认真。
(3)不少于50个单词。
father
mother
sister
I
答案
参考范文:
My family
I have a happy family. There are four people in my family. They are my father, my mother, my sister and me.
Look! My father is reading a newspaper in the armchair. My mother is cooking dinner for us. My sister is singing and dancing happily. I am doing my homework carefully at the desk. I love my family very much.
My family
I have a happy family. There are four people in my family. They are my father, my mother, my sister and me.
Look! My father is reading a newspaper in the armchair. My mother is cooking dinner for us. My sister is singing and dancing happily. I am doing my homework carefully at the desk. I love my family very much.
解析
这道题是看图写作题,核心考察五年级所学的现在进行时(结构为be动词+动词的现在分词)的用法,写作可以按以下思路完成:
1. 开篇点题,先介绍自己有一个幸福的家庭,说明家里的成员总数;
2. 按照顺序依次描述图中四位家庭成员正在做的事:爸爸在扶手椅上看报纸,妈妈正在做饭,妹妹正在唱歌跳舞,自己在书桌前写作业;
3. 最后补充简单的情感表达,保证全文不少于50词,做到语句通顺、语法正确即可。
1. 开篇点题,先介绍自己有一个幸福的家庭,说明家里的成员总数;
2. 按照顺序依次描述图中四位家庭成员正在做的事:爸爸在扶手椅上看报纸,妈妈正在做饭,妹妹正在唱歌跳舞,自己在书桌前写作业;
3. 最后补充简单的情感表达,保证全文不少于50词,做到语句通顺、语法正确即可。
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