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五、书面表达
假设你校正在进行主题为“What do you want to be in the future?”的英语征文活动，请你根据提示及要求写一篇英语短文参与投稿。
提示:(1) What do you want to be in the future? Why? (2) How are you going to do that?
要求:(1)包含提示信息，语言通顺，行文连贯，内容充实;(2)80词左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
I want to be a(n) when I grow up.
All in all, I'm going to do my best to make my dream come true.
假设你校正在进行主题为“What do you want to be in the future?”的英语征文活动，请你根据提示及要求写一篇英语短文参与投稿。
提示:(1) What do you want to be in the future? Why? (2) How are you going to do that?
要求:(1)包含提示信息，语言通顺，行文连贯，内容充实;(2)80词左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
I want to be a(n) when I grow up.
All in all, I'm going to do my best to make my dream come true.
答案
One possible version:
I want to be a(n) writer when I grow up.
Writing is an important part of my life. I always write down what I see and what I think.
Why do I enjoy writing so much? When I was young, I read a book by Mark Twain. The words in the book were so interesting and beautiful that they touched my heart deeply. Then I decided to be a writer like him.
To make my dream come true, I am going to read more books at first. Second, I think it's best to learn from successful people. It's a good way to watch some talk shows. Third, I am going to keep on writing stories and send them to magazines.
All in all, I'm going to do my best to make my dream come true.
(111 words)
I want to be a(n) writer when I grow up.
Writing is an important part of my life. I always write down what I see and what I think.
Why do I enjoy writing so much? When I was young, I read a book by Mark Twain. The words in the book were so interesting and beautiful that they touched my heart deeply. Then I decided to be a writer like him.
To make my dream come true, I am going to read more books at first. Second, I think it's best to learn from successful people. It's a good way to watch some talk shows. Third, I am going to keep on writing stories and send them to magazines.
All in all, I'm going to do my best to make my dream come true.
(111 words)
解析
【分析】
本题为英语主题征文写作题，要求围绕“未来想做什么”展开，需包含两个核心要点：未来想从事的职业及原因、实现该职业的具体计划，且开头结尾已给出，需补写中间内容，要求语言通顺、行文连贯、内容充实，字数约80词。解题思路：1. 确定合适的职业（如作家）；2. 结合个人经历阐述选择该职业的原因；3. 分点说明实现梦想的具体措施；4. 用恰当连接词串联内容，确保符合要求。
【解析】
1. 确定职业：选择writer（作家）作为未来职业，引出主题；
2. 阐述原因：结合童年经历，如读马克·吐温的书被打动，从而立志成为作家；
3. 制定计划：用first、second、third等连接词，说明具体做法：多读书、向成功人士学习、坚持写作投稿；
4. 确保语言通顺，行文连贯，符合字数要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
I want to be a(n) writer when I grow up.
Writing is an important part of my life. I always write down what I see and what I think.
Why do I enjoy writing so much? When I was young, I read a book by Mark Twain. The words in the book were so interesting and beautiful that they touched my heart deeply. Then I decided to be a writer like him.
To make my dream come true, I am going to read more books at first. Second, I think it's best to learn from successful people. It's a good way to watch some talk shows. Third, I am going to keep on writing stories and send them to magazines.
All in all, I'm going to do my best to make my dream come true.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、一般将来时、主题写作
【点评】
本文紧扣征文主题，完整覆盖所有提示要求，原因阐述真实具体，实现计划条理清晰，语言流畅自然，衔接合理，是符合要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.3
本题为英语主题征文写作题，要求围绕“未来想做什么”展开，需包含两个核心要点：未来想从事的职业及原因、实现该职业的具体计划，且开头结尾已给出，需补写中间内容，要求语言通顺、行文连贯、内容充实，字数约80词。解题思路：1. 确定合适的职业（如作家）；2. 结合个人经历阐述选择该职业的原因；3. 分点说明实现梦想的具体措施；4. 用恰当连接词串联内容，确保符合要求。
【解析】
1. 确定职业：选择writer（作家）作为未来职业，引出主题；
2. 阐述原因：结合童年经历，如读马克·吐温的书被打动，从而立志成为作家；
3. 制定计划：用first、second、third等连接词，说明具体做法：多读书、向成功人士学习、坚持写作投稿；
4. 确保语言通顺，行文连贯，符合字数要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
I want to be a(n) writer when I grow up.
Writing is an important part of my life. I always write down what I see and what I think.
Why do I enjoy writing so much? When I was young, I read a book by Mark Twain. The words in the book were so interesting and beautiful that they touched my heart deeply. Then I decided to be a writer like him.
To make my dream come true, I am going to read more books at first. Second, I think it's best to learn from successful people. It's a good way to watch some talk shows. Third, I am going to keep on writing stories and send them to magazines.
All in all, I'm going to do my best to make my dream come true.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、一般将来时、主题写作
【点评】
本文紧扣征文主题，完整覆盖所有提示要求，原因阐述真实具体，实现计划条理清晰，语言流畅自然，衔接合理，是符合要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.3
