七、书面表达
友谊是人生的无价之宝。某英语报正在举办主题为“Great friendship”的征文比赛，请你写一篇短文参赛。须包含以下要点，80词左右。
• What do you like about your best friend?
• How did you become good friends?
• What do you think of friendship?
Great friendship
Friendship is an important part of my life.

One possible version:
Great friendship
Friendship is an important part of my life. My best friend is Li Jin. I like him because he is cheerful and kind. We became good friends when we were at primary school. One day, I forgot to bring my lunch and Li Jin shared his food with me. Since then, we have always helped each other. He is not good at English, so I often help him with it.
I think friendship is one of the most important relationships in our lives. When in trouble, we need friends to offer us help. When we are happy, we need friends to share our joy.

【分析】
本题为英语书面表达征文题，主题为“Great friendship”，需覆盖三个指定要点：①喜欢好友的特质；②成为好友的经历；③对友谊的认知。解题时需搭建“总-分-总”结构，开头点题，中间分述要点，结尾升华，确保要点齐全、词数控制在80左右、语言通顺自然。
【解析】
首先点明最好的朋友是Li Jin，说明喜欢他开朗善良的特质；接着讲述成为好友的契机：小学时“我”忘带午饭，Li Jin分享食物，此后两人互相帮助；最后表达对友谊的看法：友谊是生活中重要的关系，患难时需帮助，快乐时需分享，完整覆盖所有要求要点，符合词数要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Great friendship
Friendship is an important part of my life. My best friend is Li Jin. I like him because he is cheerful and kind. We became good friends when we were at primary school. One day, I forgot to bring my lunch and Li Jin shared his food with me. Since then, we have always helped each other. He is not good at English, so I often help him with it.
I think friendship is one of the most important relationships in our lives. When in trouble, we need friends to offer us help. When we are happy, we need friends to share our joy.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、话题作文写作、要点式写作
【点评】
本文紧扣征文主题，完整覆盖题目要求的三个要点，叙事具体，观点明确，语言简洁流畅，符合80词左右的要求，是一篇符合参赛要求的优秀短文。
【难度系数】
0.4