典例分析
假如你是李华,最近你设计了一款智能书包。请你根据下表内容向大家介绍它,并谈谈自己的发明理由以及对发明的看法。80词左右。
An Intelligent Schoolbag
Reason The traditional schoolbag is heavy.
Weight About 500 g
Size Change its s
meet different needs
Function(功能) 1. GPS system, able to find the schoolbag
2. Use fingerprint(指纹)to open
Your opinion ...
【审题要领】
主题 人称
时态
______ ______ ______
【写作框架】
列提纲
1. 开篇说明现存的问题,并介绍自己解决该问题的新发明 → (1) Nowadays, the traditional schoolbag is...
(2) I spent some time studying and inventing...
2. 介绍新发明的相关信息和功能特点 → (1) It weighs...
(2) Besides, it can... meet different needs...

(3) With a GPS system...
(4) What’s more...
3. 总结全文,并表达自己的想法 → (1) Inventions show...
(2) In my opinion...
【素材积累】
重点句子
开头句: 1. Here is a report about the invention. 这是一份关于这项发明的报告。2. As we all know, there are many inventions in our life. 众所周知,在我们的生活中有很多发明。
中间句: 1. It is... tall and it weighs... 它有……高,而且重达……2. To make it easy to carry, he... 为了让它容易拿,他……
结尾句: 1. How useful the invention is! 多么有用的发明呀!
32 英语 W
【美文欣赏】
An Intelligent Schoolbag
Nowadays, the traditional schoolbag is very heavy and it is tiring for students to carry it for a long time. So I decided to do something to help. I spent some time studying and inventing a new type of schoolbag — an intelligent schoolbag.
My intelligent schoolbag is different from the common one. It weighs only about 500 g. It is much lighter than the common one. Besides, it can change its size, so it can meet different needs of students. With a GPS system, parents are able to find the schoolbag through a mobile phone. What’s more, students have to use their fingerprints to open the schoolbag. It is much safer for students. What a helping schoolbag!
Inventions show people’s creativity. They help to solve problems and meet needs in people’s daily life. In my opinion, with a strong sense of curiosity and the courage to try, common people may create useful inventions.
假如你是李华,最近你设计了一款智能书包。请你根据下表内容向大家介绍它,并谈谈自己的发明理由以及对发明的看法。80词左右。
An Intelligent Schoolbag
Reason The traditional schoolbag is heavy.
Weight About 500 g
Size Change its s
Function(功能) 1. GPS system, able to find the schoolbag
2. Use fingerprint(指纹)to open
Your opinion ...
【审题要领】
主题 人称
______ ______ ______
【写作框架】
列提纲
1. 开篇说明现存的问题,并介绍自己解决该问题的新发明 → (1) Nowadays, the traditional schoolbag is...
(2) I spent some time studying and inventing...
2. 介绍新发明的相关信息和功能特点 → (1) It weighs...
(2) Besides, it can... meet different needs...
(3) With a GPS system...
(4) What’s more...
3. 总结全文,并表达自己的想法 → (1) Inventions show...
(2) In my opinion...
【素材积累】
重点句子
开头句: 1. Here is a report about the invention. 这是一份关于这项发明的报告。2. As we all know, there are many inventions in our life. 众所周知,在我们的生活中有很多发明。
中间句: 1. It is... tall and it weighs... 它有……高,而且重达……2. To make it easy to carry, he... 为了让它容易拿,他……
结尾句: 1. How useful the invention is! 多么有用的发明呀!
32 英语 W
【美文欣赏】
An Intelligent Schoolbag
Nowadays, the traditional schoolbag is very heavy and it is tiring for students to carry it for a long time. So I decided to do something to help. I spent some time studying and inventing a new type of schoolbag — an intelligent schoolbag.
My intelligent schoolbag is different from the common one. It weighs only about 500 g. It is much lighter than the common one. Besides, it can change its size, so it can meet different needs of students. With a GPS system, parents are able to find the schoolbag through a mobile phone. What’s more, students have to use their fingerprints to open the schoolbag. It is much safer for students. What a helping schoolbag!
Inventions show people’s creativity. They help to solve problems and meet needs in people’s daily life. In my opinion, with a strong sense of curiosity and the courage to try, common people may create useful inventions.
答案
发明创造
; 第三人称
; 一般现在时
; 第三人称
; 一般现在时
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