Ⅸ. 书面表达。
根据下面图片的信息,猜一猜小猪Danny将会去哪些地方,他会遇到哪些有趣的事情,做什么事情可以让他开心起来。请你展开想象,把Danny的出行计划用英语写下来。
提示词:will go to..., visit friends, make new friends, play games...

Danny is a little pig. He is unhappy because he wants to leave home to see the world.
根据下面图片的信息,猜一猜小猪Danny将会去哪些地方,他会遇到哪些有趣的事情,做什么事情可以让他开心起来。请你展开想象,把Danny的出行计划用英语写下来。
提示词:will go to..., visit friends, make new friends, play games...
Danny is a little pig. He is unhappy because he wants to leave home to see the world.
Danny is going to visit his best friend Tiaotiao. They are going to the forest together. They are going to make lots of new friends and play games. After that, they are going to have some vegetables and fruits for dinner. The food will be nice and they will have a good time.
答案
参考范文:
Danny is a little pig. He is unhappy because he wants to leave home to see the world. Danny is going to visit his best friend Tiaotiao. They are going to the forest together. They are going to make lots of new friends and play games. After that, they are going to have some vegetables and fruits for dinner. The food will be nice and they will have a good time.
Danny is a little pig. He is unhappy because he wants to leave home to see the world. Danny is going to visit his best friend Tiaotiao. They are going to the forest together. They are going to make lots of new friends and play games. After that, they are going to have some vegetables and fruits for dinner. The food will be nice and they will have a good time.
解析
【解析】
首先结合图片中小猪的想法和提示词,确定写作方向:围绕小猪Danny的出行计划展开,用一般将来时(be going to/will结构)描述行程:先拜访好友,一同前往森林,在森林里结交新朋友、玩游戏,最后享用美味晚餐,让Danny获得快乐。写作时注意语句连贯,贴合提示内容。
【答案】
Danny is a little pig. He is unhappy because he wants to leave home to see the world. Danny is going to visit his best friend Tiaotiao. They are going to the forest together. They are going to make lots of new friends and play games. After that, they are going to have some vegetables and fruits for dinner. The food will be nice and they will have a good time.
【知识点】
一般将来时运用,英语情景写作,语篇连贯表达
【点评】
本文围绕小猪的出行计划展开,合理运用一般将来时,内容贴合图片与提示词,情节连贯自然,清晰展现了让Danny开心起来的具体活动,符合书面表达的要求。
【难度系数】
0.7
首先结合图片中小猪的想法和提示词,确定写作方向:围绕小猪Danny的出行计划展开,用一般将来时(be going to/will结构)描述行程:先拜访好友,一同前往森林,在森林里结交新朋友、玩游戏,最后享用美味晚餐,让Danny获得快乐。写作时注意语句连贯,贴合提示内容。
【答案】
Danny is a little pig. He is unhappy because he wants to leave home to see the world. Danny is going to visit his best friend Tiaotiao. They are going to the forest together. They are going to make lots of new friends and play games. After that, they are going to have some vegetables and fruits for dinner. The food will be nice and they will have a good time.
【知识点】
一般将来时运用,英语情景写作,语篇连贯表达
【点评】
本文围绕小猪的出行计划展开,合理运用一般将来时,内容贴合图片与提示词,情节连贯自然,清晰展现了让Danny开心起来的具体活动,符合书面表达的要求。
【难度系数】
0.7
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