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五、书面表达
假如你想带你的外国朋友去鼋头渚游玩，请根据文字提示写一篇英文短文，向他们介绍一下鼋头渚。
内容要点：1. 位于无锡西南部，紧邻太湖；
2. 春天赏樱，冬天喂鸟，傍晚看日落；
3. 每年都有大批中外游客来旅游观光。
注意事项：1. 短文须包含所有内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；
2. 词数80左右，短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Welcome to Turtle Head Isle. Now I'm going to tell you something about it.
假如你想带你的外国朋友去鼋头渚游玩，请根据文字提示写一篇英文短文，向他们介绍一下鼋头渚。
内容要点：1. 位于无锡西南部，紧邻太湖；
2. 春天赏樱，冬天喂鸟，傍晚看日落；
3. 每年都有大批中外游客来旅游观光。
注意事项：1. 短文须包含所有内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；
2. 词数80左右，短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Welcome to Turtle Head Isle. Now I'm going to tell you something about it.
It lies in the south-west of Wuxi. It is next to Taihu Lake. It is full of cheery blossoms in spring. In winter, many birds fly here to have a rest for about two months. Many visitors come to feed them. If you visit it on the late afternoon, you can enjoy the sunset. It is a really nice place to visit. Every year, thousands of Chinese and foreigners come to visit it. I hope you will have a good time here.
答案
One possible version:
Welcome to Turtle Head Isle. Now I'm going to tell you something about it.
It lies in the south-west of Wuxi. It is next to Taihu Lake. It is full of cheery blossoms in spring. In winter, many birds fly here to have a rest for about two months. Many visitors come to feed them. If you visit it on the late afternoon, you can enjoy the sunset. It is a really nice place to visit. Every year, thousands of Chinese and foreigners come to visit it. I hope you will have a good time here.
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Welcome to Turtle Head Isle. Now I'm going to tell you something about it.
It lies in the south-west of Wuxi. It is next to Taihu Lake. It is full of cheery blossoms in spring. In winter, many birds fly here to have a rest for about two months. Many visitors come to feed them. If you visit it on the late afternoon, you can enjoy the sunset. It is a really nice place to visit. Every year, thousands of Chinese and foreigners come to visit it. I hope you will have a good time here.
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解析
【分析】
首先，这是一篇面向外国朋友的景点介绍类书面表达，需严格覆盖所有给定要点。解题思路如下：
1. 承接已给出的开头，先明确介绍鼋头渚的地理位置，对应要点1，用简洁的方位表达清晰传递位置信息；
2. 分季节、时段展开游玩特色：春天赏樱、冬天喂鸟、傍晚看日落，对应要点2，借助不同时间状语划分场景，让内容条理清晰；
3. 补充景点的受欢迎程度，即每年有大批中外游客前来，对应要点3；
4. 最后添加友好祝愿，使短文完整自然。写作时采用一般现在时（介绍景点常规属性），控制词数在80左右，确保语句通顺连贯。
【解析】
1. 点明地理位置：用“It lies in the south-west of Wuxi. It is next to Taihu Lake.”精准对应“位于无锡西南部，紧邻太湖”的要点；
2. 描述游玩特色：
春天：“It is full of cherry blossoms in spring.”体现春季赏樱的核心特色；
冬天：“In winter, many birds fly here to have a rest for about two months. Many visitors come to feed them.”完整呈现冬季喂鸟的场景；
傍晚：“If you visit it in the late afternoon, you can enjoy the sunset.”满足傍晚看日落的要求；
3. 说明游客情况：“Every year, thousands of Chinese and foreigners come to visit it.”对应“每年都有大批中外游客来旅游观光”的要点；
4. 结尾祝愿：“I hope you will have a good time here.”增强短文的亲和力，让内容更完整。
整篇短文逻辑清晰，覆盖所有要点，词数符合要求，语言简洁地道。
【答案】
One possible version:
Welcome to Turtle Head Isle. Now I'm going to tell you something about it.
It lies in the south-west of Wuxi. It is next to Taihu Lake. It is full of cherry blossoms in spring. In winter, many birds fly here to have a rest for about two months. Many visitors come to feed them. If you visit it in the late afternoon, you can enjoy the sunset. It is a really nice place to visit. Every year, thousands of Chinese and foreigners come to visit it. I hope you will have a good time here.
【知识点】
1. 景点介绍类写作
2. 一般现在时运用
3. 方位介词短语
【点评】
这篇范文紧扣题目全部要点，结构层次分明，从地理位置到游玩特色再到游客情况，逻辑连贯。语言简洁地道，使用符合英语表达习惯的短语和句式，词数控制得当，结尾的祝愿增强了短文的友好感，非常适合向外国朋友介绍景点。
【难度系数】
0.7
首先，这是一篇面向外国朋友的景点介绍类书面表达，需严格覆盖所有给定要点。解题思路如下：
1. 承接已给出的开头，先明确介绍鼋头渚的地理位置，对应要点1，用简洁的方位表达清晰传递位置信息；
2. 分季节、时段展开游玩特色：春天赏樱、冬天喂鸟、傍晚看日落，对应要点2，借助不同时间状语划分场景，让内容条理清晰；
3. 补充景点的受欢迎程度，即每年有大批中外游客前来，对应要点3；
4. 最后添加友好祝愿，使短文完整自然。写作时采用一般现在时（介绍景点常规属性），控制词数在80左右，确保语句通顺连贯。
【解析】
1. 点明地理位置：用“It lies in the south-west of Wuxi. It is next to Taihu Lake.”精准对应“位于无锡西南部，紧邻太湖”的要点；
2. 描述游玩特色：
春天：“It is full of cherry blossoms in spring.”体现春季赏樱的核心特色；
冬天：“In winter, many birds fly here to have a rest for about two months. Many visitors come to feed them.”完整呈现冬季喂鸟的场景；
傍晚：“If you visit it in the late afternoon, you can enjoy the sunset.”满足傍晚看日落的要求；
3. 说明游客情况：“Every year, thousands of Chinese and foreigners come to visit it.”对应“每年都有大批中外游客来旅游观光”的要点；
4. 结尾祝愿：“I hope you will have a good time here.”增强短文的亲和力，让内容更完整。
整篇短文逻辑清晰，覆盖所有要点，词数符合要求，语言简洁地道。
【答案】
One possible version:
Welcome to Turtle Head Isle. Now I'm going to tell you something about it.
It lies in the south-west of Wuxi. It is next to Taihu Lake. It is full of cherry blossoms in spring. In winter, many birds fly here to have a rest for about two months. Many visitors come to feed them. If you visit it in the late afternoon, you can enjoy the sunset. It is a really nice place to visit. Every year, thousands of Chinese and foreigners come to visit it. I hope you will have a good time here.
【知识点】
1. 景点介绍类写作
2. 一般现在时运用
3. 方位介词短语
【点评】
这篇范文紧扣题目全部要点，结构层次分明，从地理位置到游玩特色再到游客情况，逻辑连贯。语言简洁地道，使用符合英语表达习惯的短语和句式，词数控制得当，结尾的祝愿增强了短文的友好感，非常适合向外国朋友介绍景点。
【难度系数】
0.7
