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学校英语社团将举办“我心中的榜样”主题分享会，请你写一篇短文，介绍一位你心中最鼓舞人心的人物，分享他/她的故事与精神，向同学们传递榜样的力量。
要求:(1)需包含人物简介、突出事迹、个人感悟,可适当补充,以使语句通顺,行文连贯;(2)文中不得出现个人姓名、校名等真实信息;(3)词数100左右。
【写作思路指导】
【实战演练】
My Inspiring Person
学校英语社团将举办“我心中的榜样”主题分享会，请你写一篇短文，介绍一位你心中最鼓舞人心的人物，分享他/她的故事与精神，向同学们传递榜样的力量。
要求:(1)需包含人物简介、突出事迹、个人感悟,可适当补充,以使语句通顺,行文连贯;(2)文中不得出现个人姓名、校名等真实信息;(3)词数100左右。
【写作思路指导】
【实战演练】
My Inspiring Person
Yuan Longping is one of the most inspiring people I know. He was a great scientist.
Yuan Longping is famous for developing hybrid rice. At that time, many people in China didn't have enough food to eat. To solve this problem, he spent all his life doing research in the fields day after day. He overcame countless difficulties and finally developed a new type of rice that greatly increased production, helping millions of people around the world get enough food.
I admire him because he devoted his whole life to helping others. From him, I learn that we should work hard and never give up. His spirit encourages me to study hard and try my best to help people in need in the future.
（124 words）
Yuan Longping is famous for developing hybrid rice. At that time, many people in China didn't have enough food to eat. To solve this problem, he spent all his life doing research in the fields day after day. He overcame countless difficulties and finally developed a new type of rice that greatly increased production, helping millions of people around the world get enough food.
I admire him because he devoted his whole life to helping others. From him, I learn that we should work hard and never give up. His spirit encourages me to study hard and try my best to help people in need in the future.
（124 words）
答案
One possible version：
My Inspiring Person
Yuan Longping is one of the most inspiring people I know. He was a great scientist.
Yuan Longping is famous for developing hybrid rice. At that time, many people in China didn't have enough food to eat. To solve this problem, he spent all his life doing research in the fields day after day. He overcame countless difficulties and finally developed a new type of rice that greatly increased production, helping millions of people around the world get enough food.
I admire him because he devoted his whole life to helping others. From him, I learn that we should work hard and never give up. His spirit encourages me to study hard and try my best to help people in need in the future.
（124 words）
My Inspiring Person
Yuan Longping is one of the most inspiring people I know. He was a great scientist.
Yuan Longping is famous for developing hybrid rice. At that time, many people in China didn't have enough food to eat. To solve this problem, he spent all his life doing research in the fields day after day. He overcame countless difficulties and finally developed a new type of rice that greatly increased production, helping millions of people around the world get enough food.
I admire him because he devoted his whole life to helping others. From him, I learn that we should work hard and never give up. His spirit encourages me to study hard and try my best to help people in need in the future.
（124 words）
解析
【分析】首先确定积极且熟知的榜样人物（如袁隆平，避免真实个人信息），按题目要求的三部分结构展开：第一部分介绍人物基本信息（身份、领域）；第二部分突出核心事迹（如研究杂交水稻解决饥饿问题）；第三部分阐述敬佩原因及对自己的影响。写作时注意语句连贯，词数100左右，内容积极传递榜样力量，不出现真实个人、校名信息。
【解析】1. 开篇点题：介绍人物身份，如“Yuan Longping is one of the most inspiring people I know. He was a great scientist.”；2. 中间写事迹：说明他因当时缺粮问题，一生在田间研究，克服困难培育杂交水稻，帮助全球很多人；3. 结尾写感悟：表达敬佩他的奉献精神，鼓励自己努力学习帮助他人。
【答案】One possible version：
My Inspiring Person
Yuan Longping is one of the most inspiring people I know. He was a great scientist.
Yuan Longping is famous for developing hybrid rice. At that time, many people in China didn't have enough food to eat. To solve this problem, he spent all his life doing research in the fields day after day. He overcame countless difficulties and finally developed a new type of rice that greatly increased production, helping millions of people around the world get enough food.
I admire him because he devoted his whole life to helping others. From him, I learn that we should work hard and never give up. His spirit encourages me to study hard and try my best to help people in need in the future.
（124 words）
【知识点】英语书面表达、人物介绍类写作
【点评】范文紧扣主题，涵盖人物简介、突出事迹、个人感悟，内容充实积极，传递正能量，语言通顺连贯，符合词数要求，适配主题分享会的语境。
【难度系数】0.3
【解析】1. 开篇点题：介绍人物身份，如“Yuan Longping is one of the most inspiring people I know. He was a great scientist.”；2. 中间写事迹：说明他因当时缺粮问题，一生在田间研究，克服困难培育杂交水稻，帮助全球很多人；3. 结尾写感悟：表达敬佩他的奉献精神，鼓励自己努力学习帮助他人。
【答案】One possible version：
My Inspiring Person
Yuan Longping is one of the most inspiring people I know. He was a great scientist.
Yuan Longping is famous for developing hybrid rice. At that time, many people in China didn't have enough food to eat. To solve this problem, he spent all his life doing research in the fields day after day. He overcame countless difficulties and finally developed a new type of rice that greatly increased production, helping millions of people around the world get enough food.
I admire him because he devoted his whole life to helping others. From him, I learn that we should work hard and never give up. His spirit encourages me to study hard and try my best to help people in need in the future.
（124 words）
【知识点】英语书面表达、人物介绍类写作
【点评】范文紧扣主题，涵盖人物简介、突出事迹、个人感悟，内容充实积极，传递正能量，语言通顺连贯，符合词数要求，适配主题分享会的语境。
【难度系数】0.3
