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四、书面表达。
假设你叫李明，你们学校的校报将举办以 "Great Changes in My Hometown" 为题的征文活动。请结合内容提示用英文写一篇短文进行投稿，分享你家乡的变化。
内容提示：
1. What did your hometown use to be?
2. What are the changes in your hometown?
3. What are your feelings about the changes?
注意：
（1）短文须包括以上提示信息，可适当发挥；
（2）文中不得出现学生真实的姓名和校名；
（3）词数80个左右（题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
Great Changes in My Hometown
Our hometown has changed a lot in recent years.
假设你叫李明，你们学校的校报将举办以 "Great Changes in My Hometown" 为题的征文活动。请结合内容提示用英文写一篇短文进行投稿，分享你家乡的变化。
内容提示：
1. What did your hometown use to be?
2. What are the changes in your hometown?
3. What are your feelings about the changes?
注意：
（1）短文须包括以上提示信息，可适当发挥；
（2）文中不得出现学生真实的姓名和校名；
（3）词数80个左右（题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
Great Changes in My Hometown
Our hometown has changed a lot in recent years.
答案
范例：
Great Changes in My Hometown
My hometown has changed a lot in recent years.
People used to live in narrow and old houses. Now, people have moved into beautiful and big buildings. In the past, people in my hometown could only take the bus if they traveled. But now they can travel by high-speed train or plane. It's much more convenient for people to travel around. There used to be very dirty rubbish everywhere. But now it has become clean and enjoyable. People can hardly see any rubbish on the streets.
I'm happy with these great changes in our hometown. I hope our hometown will become better and more developed.
Great Changes in My Hometown
My hometown has changed a lot in recent years.
People used to live in narrow and old houses. Now, people have moved into beautiful and big buildings. In the past, people in my hometown could only take the bus if they traveled. But now they can travel by high-speed train or plane. It's much more convenient for people to travel around. There used to be very dirty rubbish everywhere. But now it has become clean and enjoyable. People can hardly see any rubbish on the streets.
I'm happy with these great changes in our hometown. I hope our hometown will become better and more developed.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语书面表达题，要求以李明的身份参加校报“Great Changes in My Hometown”主题征文，需覆盖三个核心提示点：①家乡过去的状态；②家乡的变化；③自己的感受。解题思路为：先承接已给开头，用一般过去时描述家乡过去的住房、交通、环境等情况；再用一般现在时对应写出如今的变化；最后表达对变化的感受，同时需注意词数80左右、无真实信息、语句通顺。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：1. 承接开头，描述家乡过去的状况：人们住窄旧房屋，出行仅靠公交，环境脏乱；2. 对应写现在的变化：人们搬进漂亮高楼，可乘高铁/飞机出行，街道整洁；3. 表达个人感受：为家乡变化感到开心，希望未来更好。需确保覆盖所有提示要点，时态区分正确，符合英语表达规范。
【答案】
Great Changes in My Hometown
Our hometown has changed a lot in recent years.
People used to live in narrow and old houses. Now, people have moved into beautiful and big buildings. In the past, people in my hometown could only take the bus if they traveled. But now they can travel by high-speed train or plane. It's much more convenient for people to travel around. There used to be very dirty rubbish everywhere. But now it has become clean and enjoyable. People can hardly see any rubbish on the streets.
I'm happy with these great changes in our hometown. I hope our hometown will become better and more developed.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、时态对比运用
【点评】
本题为初中英语常见的主题征文写作题，贴近学生生活，要求明确，能考察学生的英语写作能力、时态运用能力及生活观察能力，难度适中，学生易上手。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题为英语书面表达题，要求以李明的身份参加校报“Great Changes in My Hometown”主题征文，需覆盖三个核心提示点：①家乡过去的状态；②家乡的变化；③自己的感受。解题思路为：先承接已给开头，用一般过去时描述家乡过去的住房、交通、环境等情况；再用一般现在时对应写出如今的变化；最后表达对变化的感受，同时需注意词数80左右、无真实信息、语句通顺。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：1. 承接开头，描述家乡过去的状况：人们住窄旧房屋，出行仅靠公交，环境脏乱；2. 对应写现在的变化：人们搬进漂亮高楼，可乘高铁/飞机出行，街道整洁；3. 表达个人感受：为家乡变化感到开心，希望未来更好。需确保覆盖所有提示要点，时态区分正确，符合英语表达规范。
【答案】
Great Changes in My Hometown
Our hometown has changed a lot in recent years.
People used to live in narrow and old houses. Now, people have moved into beautiful and big buildings. In the past, people in my hometown could only take the bus if they traveled. But now they can travel by high-speed train or plane. It's much more convenient for people to travel around. There used to be very dirty rubbish everywhere. But now it has become clean and enjoyable. People can hardly see any rubbish on the streets.
I'm happy with these great changes in our hometown. I hope our hometown will become better and more developed.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、时态对比运用
【点评】
本题为初中英语常见的主题征文写作题，贴近学生生活，要求明确，能考察学生的英语写作能力、时态运用能力及生活观察能力，难度适中，学生易上手。
【难度系数】
0.6
