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根据下面的提示写一篇英语短文,介绍一下北京动物园Beijing Zoo。内容包括:
(1)北京动物园在北京西城区Xicheng District,每天7:30开放；
(2)园内大约有15,000只动物,有来自南非的狮子、澳大利亚的树袋熊、中国的大熊猫等；
(3)每年大约有600万名游客到此参观。
注意:
(1)文中不得出现人名和校名等真实信息；
(2)写作词数为80词左右。
写作点拨:
审题
介绍北京动物园,包含名字、地址、开放时间、园内动物及游客。文章体裁为说明文,人称使用第三人称,时态为一般现在时。
提纲
参考句型
1. It opens at+时间点
2. You can see different animals from different countries.
3. There is/are...from...in the zoo.
4. If you have time,please come and visit the zoo.
规范作文:
(1)北京动物园在北京西城区Xicheng District,每天7:30开放；
(2)园内大约有15,000只动物,有来自南非的狮子、澳大利亚的树袋熊、中国的大熊猫等；
(3)每年大约有600万名游客到此参观。
注意:
(1)文中不得出现人名和校名等真实信息；
(2)写作词数为80词左右。
Beijing Zoo is a very big zoo. It's in the Xicheng
District. It opens at 7:30 every morning. The tickets
sell at a good price. There are about 15,000 animals
in the zoo. So you can see different animals from
different countries, like lions from South Africa,
koalas from Australia, pandas from China and so on. They
are very cute. Every year, about 6,000,000 people visit
the zoo. If you have time, please come and visit it. You'll
have a good time.
District. It opens at 7:30 every morning. The tickets
sell at a good price. There are about 15,000 animals
in the zoo. So you can see different animals from
different countries, like lions from South Africa,
koalas from Australia, pandas from China and so on. They
are very cute. Every year, about 6,000,000 people visit
the zoo. If you have time, please come and visit it. You'll
have a good time.
写作点拨:
审题
介绍北京动物园,包含名字、地址、开放时间、园内动物及游客。文章体裁为说明文,人称使用第三人称,时态为一般现在时。
提纲
参考句型
1. It opens at+时间点
2. You can see different animals from different countries.
3. There is/are...from...in the zoo.
4. If you have time,please come and visit the zoo.
规范作文:
Beijing Zoo is a very big zoo. It's in the Xicheng
District. It opens at 7:30 every morning. The tickets
sell at a good price. There are about 15,000 animals
in the zoo. So you can see different animals from
different countries, like lions from South Africa,
koalas from Australia, pandas from China and so on. They
are very cute. Every year, about 6,000,000 people visit
the zoo. If you have time, please come and visit it. You'll
have a good time.
District. It opens at 7:30 every morning. The tickets
sell at a good price. There are about 15,000 animals
in the zoo. So you can see different animals from
different countries, like lions from South Africa,
koalas from Australia, pandas from China and so on. They
are very cute. Every year, about 6,000,000 people visit
the zoo. If you have time, please come and visit it. You'll
have a good time.
答案
Beijing Zoo is a very big zoo. It's in the Xicheng
District. It opens at 7:30 every morning. The tickets
sell at a good price. There are about 15,000 animals
in the zoo. So you can see different animals from
different countries, like lions from South Africa,
koalas from Australia, pandas from China and so on. They
are very cute. Every year, about 6,000,000 people visit
the zoo. If you have time, please come and visit it. You'll
have a good time.
District. It opens at 7:30 every morning. The tickets
sell at a good price. There are about 15,000 animals
in the zoo. So you can see different animals from
different countries, like lions from South Africa,
koalas from Australia, pandas from China and so on. They
are very cute. Every year, about 6,000,000 people visit
the zoo. If you have time, please come and visit it. You'll
have a good time.
解析
【分析】
本题要求根据给定信息写一篇介绍北京动物园的英语短文，属于说明文写作。解题思路：1. 确定时态为一般现在时，人称用第三人称；2. 梳理所有要点：动物园名称、位置（西城区）、开放时间（早7:30）、动物情况（约15000只，含南非狮子、澳大利亚树袋熊、中国大熊猫等）、年游客量（约600万）；3. 运用参考句型串联要点，注意词数80左右，不出现真实人名校名，语言通顺自然。
【解析】
按照审题确定的要点，依次组织语言：开头点明北京动物园的基本信息（名称、位置、开放时间）；接着介绍园内动物的数量和种类及来源；然后说明年游客数量；最后发出参观邀请，使用合适的句型（如It opens at...; There are...; from...等），确保符合词数要求，无违规信息。
【答案】
Beijing Zoo is a very big zoo. It's in the Xicheng District. It opens at 7:30 every morning. The tickets sell at a good price. There are about 15,000 animals in the zoo. So you can see different animals from different countries, like lions from South Africa, koalas from Australia, pandas from China and so on. They are very cute. Every year, about 6,000,000 people visit the zoo. If you have time, please come and visit it. You'll have a good time.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作，一般现在时，there be句型
【点评】
本文完整覆盖题目要求的所有要点，时态正确，语言流畅，运用了参考句型，符合词数要求，无违规信息，是一篇优秀的介绍类短文。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题要求根据给定信息写一篇介绍北京动物园的英语短文，属于说明文写作。解题思路：1. 确定时态为一般现在时，人称用第三人称；2. 梳理所有要点：动物园名称、位置（西城区）、开放时间（早7:30）、动物情况（约15000只，含南非狮子、澳大利亚树袋熊、中国大熊猫等）、年游客量（约600万）；3. 运用参考句型串联要点，注意词数80左右，不出现真实人名校名，语言通顺自然。
【解析】
按照审题确定的要点，依次组织语言：开头点明北京动物园的基本信息（名称、位置、开放时间）；接着介绍园内动物的数量和种类及来源；然后说明年游客数量；最后发出参观邀请，使用合适的句型（如It opens at...; There are...; from...等），确保符合词数要求，无违规信息。
【答案】
Beijing Zoo is a very big zoo. It's in the Xicheng District. It opens at 7:30 every morning. The tickets sell at a good price. There are about 15,000 animals in the zoo. So you can see different animals from different countries, like lions from South Africa, koalas from Australia, pandas from China and so on. They are very cute. Every year, about 6,000,000 people visit the zoo. If you have time, please come and visit it. You'll have a good time.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作，一般现在时，there be句型
【点评】
本文完整覆盖题目要求的所有要点，时态正确，语言流畅，运用了参考句型，符合词数要求，无违规信息，是一篇优秀的介绍类短文。
【难度系数】
0.6
