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六、书面表达
寒假将至，学校为了丰富同学们的寒假生活，将于1月20至22日组织冬令营活动。假如你是负责人李华，请用英语写一封信给学生，谈一谈本次活动的内容和意义。
要求:(1)所写内容必须包括本次活动的内容和意义,可适当发挥;(2)词数:不少于100,开头和结尾不计入总词数;(3)不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等信息。
Dear students,
I am very happy to introduce the winter camp to you.
I hope you can join us soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
寒假将至，学校为了丰富同学们的寒假生活，将于1月20至22日组织冬令营活动。假如你是负责人李华，请用英语写一封信给学生，谈一谈本次活动的内容和意义。
要求:(1)所写内容必须包括本次活动的内容和意义,可适当发挥;(2)词数:不少于100,开头和结尾不计入总词数;(3)不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等信息。
Dear students,
I am very happy to introduce the winter camp to you.
I hope you can join us soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
答案
六、 例文
Dear students,
I am very happy to introduce the winter camp to you. The winter camp is a three-day trip, from January 20 to January 22.
On January 20, we will go to Lizhong Water Forest Park. It is a good place for us to take a boat trip and watch the birds. We can learn about different kinds of plants, birds and animals as well as the importance of the wetlands and protecting birds.
On the following day, we plan to listen to a talk about safety tips in the police station. After the talk, we will learn a lot about keeping ourselves safe from fires, floods, earthquakes and so on. For example, we should use a wet towel to cover our mouth and nose and stay close to the ground when there is a fire.
On the last day, we are going to Zheng Banqiao Museum to do DIY jobs such as paper cutting and New Year cards. It is a good chance to learn about traditional Chinese culture.
I hope you can join us soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear students,
I am very happy to introduce the winter camp to you. The winter camp is a three-day trip, from January 20 to January 22.
On January 20, we will go to Lizhong Water Forest Park. It is a good place for us to take a boat trip and watch the birds. We can learn about different kinds of plants, birds and animals as well as the importance of the wetlands and protecting birds.
On the following day, we plan to listen to a talk about safety tips in the police station. After the talk, we will learn a lot about keeping ourselves safe from fires, floods, earthquakes and so on. For example, we should use a wet towel to cover our mouth and nose and stay close to the ground when there is a fire.
On the last day, we are going to Zheng Banqiao Museum to do DIY jobs such as paper cutting and New Year cards. It is a good chance to learn about traditional Chinese culture.
I hope you can join us soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】本题为英语书面表达题，要求以冬令营负责人李华的身份给学生写一封书信，介绍1月20日至22日的冬令营内容与意义。解题思路：1. 遵循书信格式（开头结尾已给定，补充中间主体内容）；2. 结合流程图的三天活动安排，按时间顺序依次介绍每天的地点、具体活动；3. 补充活动的意义，适当发挥；4. 确保词数达标，语言通顺，符合题目要求。
【解析】首先点明冬令营的时间为1月20日至22日，为期三天；接着按时间顺序介绍：1月20日前往Lizhong Water Forest Park，开展观鸟活动，学习动植物知识及湿地保护的重要性；1月21日到警察局聆听安全讲座，学习火灾、地震等灾害的安全防护技巧；1月22日前往Zheng Banqiao Museum，参与剪纸等DIY活动，了解中国传统文化；最后补充活动能丰富寒假生活，提升安全意识与文化素养，符合要求。
【答案】
Dear students,
I am very happy to introduce the winter camp to you. The winter camp is a three-day trip, from January 20 to January 22.
On January 20, we will go to Lizhong Water Forest Park. It is a good place for us to take a boat trip and watch the birds. We can learn about different kinds of plants, birds and animals as well as the importance of the wetlands and protecting birds.
On the following day, we plan to listen to a talk about safety tips in the police station. After the talk, we will learn a lot about keeping ourselves safe from fires, floods, earthquakes and so on. For example, we should use a wet towel to cover our mouth and nose and stay close to the ground when there is a fire.
On the last day, we are going to Zheng Banqiao Museum to do DIY jobs such as paper cutting and New Year cards. It is a good chance to learn about traditional Chinese culture.
I hope you can join us soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】英语书信写作、活动介绍类书面表达、时间顺序写作
【点评】本题结合流程图信息，考查学生的信息整合与英语书面表达能力，要求学生清晰有条理地介绍活动内容并阐述意义，符合初中英语书面表达的命题特点，注重语言运用的实用性。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】首先点明冬令营的时间为1月20日至22日，为期三天；接着按时间顺序介绍：1月20日前往Lizhong Water Forest Park，开展观鸟活动，学习动植物知识及湿地保护的重要性；1月21日到警察局聆听安全讲座，学习火灾、地震等灾害的安全防护技巧；1月22日前往Zheng Banqiao Museum，参与剪纸等DIY活动，了解中国传统文化；最后补充活动能丰富寒假生活，提升安全意识与文化素养，符合要求。
【答案】
Dear students,
I am very happy to introduce the winter camp to you. The winter camp is a three-day trip, from January 20 to January 22.
On January 20, we will go to Lizhong Water Forest Park. It is a good place for us to take a boat trip and watch the birds. We can learn about different kinds of plants, birds and animals as well as the importance of the wetlands and protecting birds.
On the following day, we plan to listen to a talk about safety tips in the police station. After the talk, we will learn a lot about keeping ourselves safe from fires, floods, earthquakes and so on. For example, we should use a wet towel to cover our mouth and nose and stay close to the ground when there is a fire.
On the last day, we are going to Zheng Banqiao Museum to do DIY jobs such as paper cutting and New Year cards. It is a good chance to learn about traditional Chinese culture.
I hope you can join us soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】英语书信写作、活动介绍类书面表达、时间顺序写作
【点评】本题结合流程图信息，考查学生的信息整合与英语书面表达能力，要求学生清晰有条理地介绍活动内容并阐述意义，符合初中英语书面表达的命题特点，注重语言运用的实用性。
【难度系数】0.5
