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随着互联网和人工智能(AI)的飞速发展,如今旅游有了两种热门选择:"云游(Online tours)"和"亲历(In-person travel)"。"云游"借助网络,让我们足不出户就能饱览世界各地的美景;而"亲历",则是亲身前往旅游目的地,感受当地的风土人情。这两种方式各有特色,你更倾向于哪一种呢? 请以“My Way of Travelling”为题,根据以下要点提示写一篇英语短文。
要点提示:
1. 陈述你的选择并说明原因(至少两点);
2. 分享一次令你印象深刻的旅行;
3. 谈谈你的感悟。
注意:
1. 短文须包含所有提示要点,可以适当发挥;
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3. 词数 80~100。
My Way of Travelling
书面表达
随着互联网和人工智能(AI)的飞速发展,如今旅游有了两种热门选择:"云游(Online tours)"和"亲历(In-person travel)"。"云游"借助网络,让我们足不出户就能饱览世界各地的美景;而"亲历",则是亲身前往旅游目的地,感受当地的风土人情。这两种方式各有特色,你更倾向于哪一种呢? 请以“My Way of Travelling”为题,根据以下要点提示写一篇英语短文。
要点提示:
1. 陈述你的选择并说明原因(至少两点);
2. 分享一次令你印象深刻的旅行;
3. 谈谈你的感悟。
注意:
1. 短文须包含所有提示要点,可以适当发挥;
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3. 词数 80~100。
My Way of Travelling
With the development of the internet and AI, we have two great travel choices: online tours and in-person travel. As for me, I prefer in-person travel without any doubt.
First of all, it allows me to experience local customs face to face, such as tasting traditional snacks and talking with local people. Besides, it gives me a chance to make unforgettable memories with my loved ones. Last summer, I visited my hometown's old town with my parents. We walked along the quiet streets, took photos of ancient buildings and listened to the elders' stories. It was a fantastic time.
In my eyes, in-person travel is more than just seeing scenery. It's about the warmth and surprises along the way.
答案
One possible version:
My Way of Travelling
With the development of the internet and AI, we have two great travel choices: online tours and in-person travel. As for me, I prefer in-person travel without any doubt.
First of all, it allows me to experience local customs face to face, such as tasting traditional snacks and talking with local people. Besides, it gives me a chance to make unforgettable memories with my loved ones. Last summer, I visited my hometown's old town with my parents. We walked along the quiet streets, took photos of ancient buildings and listened to the elders' stories. It was a fantastic time.
In my eyes, in-person travel is more than just seeing scenery. It's about the warmth and surprises along the way.
My Way of Travelling
With the development of the internet and AI, we have two great travel choices: online tours and in-person travel. As for me, I prefer in-person travel without any doubt.
First of all, it allows me to experience local customs face to face, such as tasting traditional snacks and talking with local people. Besides, it gives me a chance to make unforgettable memories with my loved ones. Last summer, I visited my hometown's old town with my parents. We walked along the quiet streets, took photos of ancient buildings and listened to the elders' stories. It was a fantastic time.
In my eyes, in-person travel is more than just seeing scenery. It's about the warmth and surprises along the way.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语话题书面表达题，要求围绕“云游”与“亲历”两种旅行方式，以“My Way of Travelling”为题写作。解题思路：首先审题明确需包含三个要点——陈述选择及至少两点原因、分享印象深刻的旅行、谈感悟；其次确定选择（如选“亲历旅行”），构思贴合主题的原因（体验当地风俗、与亲人留回忆）；再构思具体旅行实例（需简短有细节）；最后升华感悟，同时注意控制词数80-100，避免出现真实信息。
【解析】
1. 开头：引出互联网与AI带来两种旅行选择，明确自己选“亲历旅行”；
2. 主体第一部分：用First of all、Besides连接两点原因，说明亲历旅行可面对面体验当地风俗、和亲人留难忘回忆；
3. 主体第二部分：以Last summer引出具体旅行经历，简述和父母去家乡老城的细节；
4. 结尾：升华感悟，点明亲历旅行的意义不止看风景，还有沿途的温暖与惊喜。
【答案】
One possible version:
My Way of Travelling
With the development of the internet and AI, we have two great travel choices: online tours and in-person travel. As for me, I prefer in-person travel without any doubt.
First of all, it allows me to experience local customs face to face, such as tasting traditional snacks and talking with local people. Besides, it gives me a chance to make unforgettable memories with my loved ones. Last summer, I visited my hometown's old town with my parents. We walked along the quiet streets, took photos of ancient buildings and listened to the elders' stories. It was a fantastic time.
In my eyes, in-person travel is more than just seeing scenery. It's about the warmth and surprises along the way.
【知识点】
英语话题写作、旅行主题表达
【点评】
本文严格覆盖所有写作要点，结构清晰（开头点题、中间述因举例、结尾升华），语言简洁地道，符合初中英语写作要求，细节具体且情感真挚，是一篇符合要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.3
本题为英语话题书面表达题，要求围绕“云游”与“亲历”两种旅行方式，以“My Way of Travelling”为题写作。解题思路：首先审题明确需包含三个要点——陈述选择及至少两点原因、分享印象深刻的旅行、谈感悟；其次确定选择（如选“亲历旅行”），构思贴合主题的原因（体验当地风俗、与亲人留回忆）；再构思具体旅行实例（需简短有细节）；最后升华感悟，同时注意控制词数80-100，避免出现真实信息。
【解析】
1. 开头：引出互联网与AI带来两种旅行选择，明确自己选“亲历旅行”；
2. 主体第一部分：用First of all、Besides连接两点原因，说明亲历旅行可面对面体验当地风俗、和亲人留难忘回忆；
3. 主体第二部分：以Last summer引出具体旅行经历，简述和父母去家乡老城的细节；
4. 结尾：升华感悟，点明亲历旅行的意义不止看风景，还有沿途的温暖与惊喜。
【答案】
One possible version:
My Way of Travelling
With the development of the internet and AI, we have two great travel choices: online tours and in-person travel. As for me, I prefer in-person travel without any doubt.
First of all, it allows me to experience local customs face to face, such as tasting traditional snacks and talking with local people. Besides, it gives me a chance to make unforgettable memories with my loved ones. Last summer, I visited my hometown's old town with my parents. We walked along the quiet streets, took photos of ancient buildings and listened to the elders' stories. It was a fantastic time.
In my eyes, in-person travel is more than just seeing scenery. It's about the warmth and surprises along the way.
【知识点】
英语话题写作、旅行主题表达
【点评】
本文严格覆盖所有写作要点，结构清晰（开头点题、中间述因举例、结尾升华），语言简洁地道，符合初中英语写作要求，细节具体且情感真挚，是一篇符合要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.3
