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六、写话练习。
提示:可从生活习惯、饮食习惯、交通行为等方面给Tom一些建议。
要求:语句通顺、意思连贯、书写规范,不少于8句话。
Tom: I want to be a good student. What should I do?
提示:可从生活习惯、饮食习惯、交通行为等方面给Tom一些建议。
要求:语句通顺、意思连贯、书写规范,不少于8句话。
Tom: I want to be a good student. What should I do?
答案
First of all, you should develop a good living habit.
You'd better go to bed early and get up early, and never be late for school.
Second, you need to have a healthy eating habit.
You should eat more vegetables and fruit every day, and don't eat too much fast food which is bad for your health.
Third, you must obey the traffic rules when you are on the way to school or back home.
When you cross the road, wait for the green light, and don't play on the road because it's too dangerous.
At school, you should listen to your teachers carefully in class, and finish your homework on time after school.
You should also be friendly to your classmates, and help them if they meet problems in their study or daily life.
If you have free time after finishing your study tasks, you can do some exercise like playing badminton or running, it can help you keep strong and have a good mood.
If you can keep doing these things, you will be a good student soon.
You'd better go to bed early and get up early, and never be late for school.
Second, you need to have a healthy eating habit.
You should eat more vegetables and fruit every day, and don't eat too much fast food which is bad for your health.
Third, you must obey the traffic rules when you are on the way to school or back home.
When you cross the road, wait for the green light, and don't play on the road because it's too dangerous.
At school, you should listen to your teachers carefully in class, and finish your homework on time after school.
You should also be friendly to your classmates, and help them if they meet problems in their study or daily life.
If you have free time after finishing your study tasks, you can do some exercise like playing badminton or running, it can help you keep strong and have a good mood.
If you can keep doing these things, you will be a good student soon.
解析
【分析】
这道题是情景建议类写话，核心任务是给想要成为好学生的Tom提合理建议，首先要紧扣题目给出的生活习惯、饮食习惯、交通行为三个指定方向，再适当补充校园学习、人际交往相关的合理建议，满足不少于8句话的要求。解题时可以用first、second、third这类逻辑连接词分层梳理内容：第一步先总起点明第一类建议围绕生活习惯展开，给出早睡早起不迟到的具体要求；第二步围绕饮食习惯给出健康饮食的相关提示；第三步围绕交通行为说明遵守交规的注意事项；之后补充校园学习、和同学相处、课余运动的相关建议，最后收尾鼓励Tom，全程用常用的提建议句型（should、you'd better、need to等）表达，保证语句通顺，就能符合所有答题要求。
【解析】
1. 开篇用逻辑词First of all引出第一部分内容，点明要养成良好生活习惯，具体说明早睡早起、上学不迟到的要求，对应生活习惯的提示方向；
2. 用Second引出第二部分内容，点明要养成健康的饮食习惯，说明多吃蔬果、少吃有害快餐的具体要求，对应饮食习惯的提示方向；
3. 用Third引出第三部分内容，点明上下学途中要遵守交通规则，说明过马路等绿灯、不在马路上玩耍的安全要求，对应交通行为的提示方向；
4. 补充校园场景的相关建议，说明上课认真听讲、按时完成作业、和同学友好互助的要求，丰富内容维度；
5. 补充课余安排的相关建议，说明完成学习任务后适当运动可以强身健体、保持好心情；
6. 最后收尾总结，鼓励Tom坚持做到以上内容，很快就能成为好学生，整体内容逻辑连贯，句数远多于8句，完全符合答题要求。
【答案】
First of all, you should develop a good living habit.
You'd better go to bed early and get up early, and never be late for school.
Second, you need to have a healthy eating habit.
You should eat more vegetables and fruit every day, and don't eat too much fast food which is bad for your health.
Third, you must obey the traffic rules when you are on the way to school or back home.
When you cross the road, wait for the green light, and don't play on the road because it's too dangerous.
At school, you should listen to your teachers carefully in class, and finish your homework on time after school.
You should also be friendly to your classmates, and help them if they meet problems in their study or daily life.
If you have free time after finishing your study tasks, you can do some exercise like playing badminton or running, it can help you keep strong and have a good mood.
If you can keep doing these things, you will be a good student soon.
【知识点】
英语建议类表达
情景写话写作
逻辑连接词运用
【点评】
本题属于生活化的英语情景写作题，既考查学生对提建议相关的英语句型的掌握程度，也引导学生梳理正向的行为准则。写作时借助序数词类逻辑连接词分层排布不同维度的建议，既能让内容条理清晰，也能轻松满足不少于8句话的要求，避免出现内容零散、逻辑混乱的问题。
【难度系数】
0.7
这道题是情景建议类写话，核心任务是给想要成为好学生的Tom提合理建议，首先要紧扣题目给出的生活习惯、饮食习惯、交通行为三个指定方向，再适当补充校园学习、人际交往相关的合理建议，满足不少于8句话的要求。解题时可以用first、second、third这类逻辑连接词分层梳理内容：第一步先总起点明第一类建议围绕生活习惯展开，给出早睡早起不迟到的具体要求；第二步围绕饮食习惯给出健康饮食的相关提示；第三步围绕交通行为说明遵守交规的注意事项；之后补充校园学习、和同学相处、课余运动的相关建议，最后收尾鼓励Tom，全程用常用的提建议句型（should、you'd better、need to等）表达，保证语句通顺，就能符合所有答题要求。
【解析】
1. 开篇用逻辑词First of all引出第一部分内容，点明要养成良好生活习惯，具体说明早睡早起、上学不迟到的要求，对应生活习惯的提示方向；
2. 用Second引出第二部分内容，点明要养成健康的饮食习惯，说明多吃蔬果、少吃有害快餐的具体要求，对应饮食习惯的提示方向；
3. 用Third引出第三部分内容，点明上下学途中要遵守交通规则，说明过马路等绿灯、不在马路上玩耍的安全要求，对应交通行为的提示方向；
4. 补充校园场景的相关建议，说明上课认真听讲、按时完成作业、和同学友好互助的要求，丰富内容维度；
5. 补充课余安排的相关建议，说明完成学习任务后适当运动可以强身健体、保持好心情；
6. 最后收尾总结，鼓励Tom坚持做到以上内容，很快就能成为好学生，整体内容逻辑连贯，句数远多于8句，完全符合答题要求。
【答案】
First of all, you should develop a good living habit.
You'd better go to bed early and get up early, and never be late for school.
Second, you need to have a healthy eating habit.
You should eat more vegetables and fruit every day, and don't eat too much fast food which is bad for your health.
Third, you must obey the traffic rules when you are on the way to school or back home.
When you cross the road, wait for the green light, and don't play on the road because it's too dangerous.
At school, you should listen to your teachers carefully in class, and finish your homework on time after school.
You should also be friendly to your classmates, and help them if they meet problems in their study or daily life.
If you have free time after finishing your study tasks, you can do some exercise like playing badminton or running, it can help you keep strong and have a good mood.
If you can keep doing these things, you will be a good student soon.
【知识点】
英语建议类表达
情景写话写作
逻辑连接词运用
【点评】
本题属于生活化的英语情景写作题，既考查学生对提建议相关的英语句型的掌握程度，也引导学生梳理正向的行为准则。写作时借助序数词类逻辑连接词分层排布不同维度的建议，既能让内容条理清晰，也能轻松满足不少于8句话的要求，避免出现内容零散、逻辑混乱的问题。
【难度系数】
0.7
