登录
四、书面表达
每年的4月23日是"世界读书日"，它提醒我们养成天天读书的好习惯。但如今，不少同学看书的时间少了，取而代之的是看短视频、打游戏。为此，学校将举办主题为 "Growing Up with Books" 的演讲比赛，呼吁同学们重拾阅读，丰盈心灵，收获乐趣。请你根据提示，用英文写一篇演讲稿。
注意事项: 1. 演讲稿须包括提示要点，要求语句通顺，意思连贯；
2. 词数不少于90，演讲稿的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Growing Up with Books
Dear teachers and classmates,
Good morning! Today, my topic is "Growing Up with Books".
Let's pick up a book right away. I believe reading will make our life more colorful and help us grow into better people.
Thank you!
每年的4月23日是"世界读书日"，它提醒我们养成天天读书的好习惯。但如今，不少同学看书的时间少了，取而代之的是看短视频、打游戏。为此，学校将举办主题为 "Growing Up with Books" 的演讲比赛，呼吁同学们重拾阅读，丰盈心灵，收获乐趣。请你根据提示，用英文写一篇演讲稿。
注意事项: 1. 演讲稿须包括提示要点，要求语句通顺，意思连贯；
2. 词数不少于90，演讲稿的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Growing Up with Books
Dear teachers and classmates,
Good morning! Today, my topic is "Growing Up with Books".
April 23 is World Book Day. It reminds us to keep the good habit of reading. But now, many of us read fewer books and spend much time on short videos or computer games instead.
Reading can open our minds. A good read is like a good friend. "Read ten thousand books; travel ten thousand miles." This old saying tells us how powerful reading is.
So here is my advice: First, let's read classics as often as we can. Second, we can share our favorite books with friends and spread traditional Chinese culture together.
Let's pick up a book right away. I believe reading will make our life more colorful and help us grow into better people.
Thank you!
答案
One possible version:
Growing Up with Books
Dear teachers and classmates,
Good morning! Today, my topic is "Growing Up with Books".
April 23 is World Book Day. It reminds us to keep the good habit of reading. But now, many of us read fewer books and spend much time on short videos or computer games instead.
Reading can open our minds. A good read is like a good friend. "Read ten thousand books; travel ten thousand miles." This old saying tells us how powerful reading is.
So here is my advice: First, let's read classics as often as we can. Second, we can share our favorite books with friends and spread traditional Chinese culture together.
Let's pick up a book right away. I believe reading will make our life more colorful and help us grow into better people.
Thank you!
(90 words)
Growing Up with Books
Dear teachers and classmates,
Good morning! Today, my topic is "Growing Up with Books".
April 23 is World Book Day. It reminds us to keep the good habit of reading. But now, many of us read fewer books and spend much time on short videos or computer games instead.
Reading can open our minds. A good read is like a good friend. "Read ten thousand books; travel ten thousand miles." This old saying tells us how powerful reading is.
So here is my advice: First, let's read classics as often as we can. Second, we can share our favorite books with friends and spread traditional Chinese culture together.
Let's pick up a book right away. I believe reading will make our life more colorful and help us grow into better people.
Thank you!
(90 words)
解析
【分析】
首先拿到这道演讲稿写作题，第一步先梳理所有给定的提示要点，按照行文逻辑排序：首先承接已给的开头，先点出世界读书日的背景，再引出当前同学们的不良现状，把提示里“阅读量减少、花大量时间刷短视频/玩电脑游戏”的内容自然引入；接下来论述阅读的益处，除了提示给出的“开阔眼界、拓展思维”，还可以适当补充阅读能帮我们收获知识、获得乐趣，让内容更饱满；最后给出对应建议，覆盖提示里的“阅读经典、传播中国传统文化”的要求，还可以补充少量符合学生实际的合理内容，最后自然衔接题目已经给出的结尾句，保证行文连贯、语气符合演讲的呼吁感，词数达标即可。
【解析】
写作可分为三步完成：
1. 现状引入：承接开头，点明4月23日世界读书日的意义，紧接着描述当下很多同学减少阅读、把大量时间花费在短视频和电脑游戏上的普遍现象，完成Situations板块所有要点的覆盖。
2. 益处论述：点明阅读的价值，说明阅读可以开阔我们的眼界、拓展我们的思维，还可以引用合适的相关俗语增强说服力，让内容更生动。
3. 建议输出：清晰列出给出的相关建议，首先号召大家多阅读经典作品，其次鼓励大家互相分享好书，共同传播中国传统文化，逻辑清晰，符合演讲稿的呼吁属性，最后自然衔接题目给出的结尾内容，整体词数满足要求，语句通顺连贯。
【答案】
One possible version:
Growing Up with Books
Dear teachers and classmates,
Good morning! Today, my topic is "Growing Up with Books".
April 23 is World Book Day. It reminds us to keep the good habit of reading. But now, many of us read fewer books and spend much time on short videos or computer games instead.
Reading can open our minds. A good read is like a good friend. "Read ten thousand books; travel ten thousand miles." This old saying tells us how powerful reading is.
So here is my advice: First, let's read classics as often as we can. Second, we can share our favorite books with friends and spread traditional Chinese culture together.
Let's pick up a book right away. I believe reading will make our life more colorful and help us grow into better people.
Thank you!
【知识点】
英语演讲稿写作
要点类作文整合
英语谚语运用
【点评】
本题是校园主题演讲类书面表达，所有核心写作要点都已给出提示，学生只需要按照“现状-意义-建议”的逻辑把零散要点串联起来，补充少量衔接内容就能完成合格的作品，既考察了学生的英语语句组织能力，也引导学生重视日常阅读，兼具语言考察和思想引导的作用。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先拿到这道演讲稿写作题，第一步先梳理所有给定的提示要点，按照行文逻辑排序：首先承接已给的开头，先点出世界读书日的背景，再引出当前同学们的不良现状，把提示里“阅读量减少、花大量时间刷短视频/玩电脑游戏”的内容自然引入；接下来论述阅读的益处，除了提示给出的“开阔眼界、拓展思维”，还可以适当补充阅读能帮我们收获知识、获得乐趣，让内容更饱满；最后给出对应建议，覆盖提示里的“阅读经典、传播中国传统文化”的要求，还可以补充少量符合学生实际的合理内容，最后自然衔接题目已经给出的结尾句，保证行文连贯、语气符合演讲的呼吁感，词数达标即可。
【解析】
写作可分为三步完成：
1. 现状引入：承接开头，点明4月23日世界读书日的意义，紧接着描述当下很多同学减少阅读、把大量时间花费在短视频和电脑游戏上的普遍现象，完成Situations板块所有要点的覆盖。
2. 益处论述：点明阅读的价值，说明阅读可以开阔我们的眼界、拓展我们的思维，还可以引用合适的相关俗语增强说服力，让内容更生动。
3. 建议输出：清晰列出给出的相关建议，首先号召大家多阅读经典作品，其次鼓励大家互相分享好书，共同传播中国传统文化，逻辑清晰，符合演讲稿的呼吁属性，最后自然衔接题目给出的结尾内容，整体词数满足要求，语句通顺连贯。
【答案】
One possible version:
Growing Up with Books
Dear teachers and classmates,
Good morning! Today, my topic is "Growing Up with Books".
April 23 is World Book Day. It reminds us to keep the good habit of reading. But now, many of us read fewer books and spend much time on short videos or computer games instead.
Reading can open our minds. A good read is like a good friend. "Read ten thousand books; travel ten thousand miles." This old saying tells us how powerful reading is.
So here is my advice: First, let's read classics as often as we can. Second, we can share our favorite books with friends and spread traditional Chinese culture together.
Let's pick up a book right away. I believe reading will make our life more colorful and help us grow into better people.
Thank you!
【知识点】
英语演讲稿写作
要点类作文整合
英语谚语运用
【点评】
本题是校园主题演讲类书面表达，所有核心写作要点都已给出提示，学生只需要按照“现状-意义-建议”的逻辑把零散要点串联起来，补充少量衔接内容就能完成合格的作品，既考察了学生的英语语句组织能力，也引导学生重视日常阅读，兼具语言考察和思想引导的作用。
【难度系数】
0.6
