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假设你是希望中学一名九年级的学生，请以“My Favourite Musician”为题，写一篇英语短文，介绍一位你敬佩的音乐家及其对你产生的影响。
写作提示：
1. 介绍这位音乐家的基本情况，例如其音乐风格、代表作品或重要成就；
2. 讲述这位音乐家的一段关键经历或转折点，描述它为何让你印象深刻；
3. 分享这位音乐家对你的启发或影响，说明他/她如何激励了你的成长或你对音乐的理解。
写作要求：
1. 内容需包含以上所有提示要点，可适当发挥；
2. 条理清晰，语言流畅，不得出现真实校名和人名；
3. 词数80左右。
My Favourite Musician
假设你是希望中学一名九年级的学生，请以“My Favourite Musician”为题，写一篇英语短文，介绍一位你敬佩的音乐家及其对你产生的影响。
写作提示：
1. 介绍这位音乐家的基本情况，例如其音乐风格、代表作品或重要成就；
2. 讲述这位音乐家的一段关键经历或转折点，描述它为何让你印象深刻；
3. 分享这位音乐家对你的启发或影响，说明他/她如何激励了你的成长或你对音乐的理解。
写作要求：
1. 内容需包含以上所有提示要点，可适当发挥；
2. 条理清晰，语言流畅，不得出现真实校名和人名；
3. 词数80左右。
My Favourite Musician
答案
参考范文：
My Favourite Musician
My favourite musician is Ludwig van Beethoven. He was a great musician from Germany. His music still touches many people today.
Beethoven has influenced me a lot. First, he taught me to be brave when facing difficulties. He lost his hearing when he was young, but he never stopped writing music. Surprisingly, some of his best works were written after he became deaf. Second, he told me that hard work can make dreams come true. He practised and created music every day, even when life was hard. He not only changed the world of music, but also encouraged me not to give up easily.
I will always remember his courage and his love for music.
My Favourite Musician
My favourite musician is Ludwig van Beethoven. He was a great musician from Germany. His music still touches many people today.
Beethoven has influenced me a lot. First, he taught me to be brave when facing difficulties. He lost his hearing when he was young, but he never stopped writing music. Surprisingly, some of his best works were written after he became deaf. Second, he told me that hard work can make dreams come true. He practised and created music every day, even when life was hard. He not only changed the world of music, but also encouraged me not to give up easily.
I will always remember his courage and his love for music.
解析
【分析】
本题要求以“My Favourite Musician”为题写英语短文，需包含音乐家基本情况、关键经历、对自己的影响三个要点，词数80左右。解题思路：1. 选择熟悉的音乐家（如贝多芬，符合要求）；2. 第一段介绍音乐家基本信息（国籍、身份）；3. 第二段讲关键经历（失聪后坚持创作）及对自己的启发；4. 第三段总结，呼应主题，确保内容完整、语言流畅。
【解析】
首先确定主题音乐家为贝多芬，第一段介绍其身份（德国伟大音乐家）；第二段围绕关键经历（年轻时失聪仍坚持创作，失聪后写出优秀作品），阐述对自己的影响（面对困难要勇敢、努力实现梦想）；第三段总结，表达对贝多芬的敬佩及受其激励的感悟，符合词数要求，条理清晰。
【答案】
My Favourite Musician
My favourite musician is Ludwig van Beethoven. He was a great musician from Germany. His music still touches many people today.
Beethoven has influenced me a lot. First, he taught me to be brave when facing difficulties. He lost his hearing when he was young, but he never stopped writing music. Surprisingly, some of his best works were written after he became deaf. Second, he told me that hard work can make dreams come true. He practised and created music every day, even when life was hard. He not only changed the world of music, but also encouraged me not to give up easily.
I will always remember his courage and his love for music.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、英语词汇运用、英语句子结构
【点评】
范文紧扣写作提示，内容完整覆盖所有要点，条理清晰，语言流畅自然，通过具体事例体现音乐家的品质及对自身的影响，符合九年级学生的英语写作水平要求。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题要求以“My Favourite Musician”为题写英语短文，需包含音乐家基本情况、关键经历、对自己的影响三个要点，词数80左右。解题思路：1. 选择熟悉的音乐家（如贝多芬，符合要求）；2. 第一段介绍音乐家基本信息（国籍、身份）；3. 第二段讲关键经历（失聪后坚持创作）及对自己的启发；4. 第三段总结，呼应主题，确保内容完整、语言流畅。
【解析】
首先确定主题音乐家为贝多芬，第一段介绍其身份（德国伟大音乐家）；第二段围绕关键经历（年轻时失聪仍坚持创作，失聪后写出优秀作品），阐述对自己的影响（面对困难要勇敢、努力实现梦想）；第三段总结，表达对贝多芬的敬佩及受其激励的感悟，符合词数要求，条理清晰。
【答案】
My Favourite Musician
My favourite musician is Ludwig van Beethoven. He was a great musician from Germany. His music still touches many people today.
Beethoven has influenced me a lot. First, he taught me to be brave when facing difficulties. He lost his hearing when he was young, but he never stopped writing music. Surprisingly, some of his best works were written after he became deaf. Second, he told me that hard work can make dreams come true. He practised and created music every day, even when life was hard. He not only changed the world of music, but also encouraged me not to give up easily.
I will always remember his courage and his love for music.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、英语词汇运用、英语句子结构
【点评】
范文紧扣写作提示，内容完整覆盖所有要点，条理清晰，语言流畅自然，通过具体事例体现音乐家的品质及对自身的影响，符合九年级学生的英语写作水平要求。
【难度系数】
0.6
