经典例题
(2025·江苏淮安期中)假设你是英语校报编辑李华。校报收到初一新生Ben的来信,他提出了所面临的两个问题。请你根据以下提示写一封回信,说明Ben的问题,提出你的建议并陈述理由。

【要求】词数90左右(信的开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Ben,
I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble getting used to life in middle school. In your letter, you said that
Good luck with everything!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
(2025·江苏淮安期中)假设你是英语校报编辑李华。校报收到初一新生Ben的来信,他提出了所面临的两个问题。请你根据以下提示写一封回信,说明Ben的问题,提出你的建议并陈述理由。
【要求】词数90左右(信的开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Ben,
I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble getting used to life in middle school. In your letter, you said that
Good luck with everything!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
答案
you had few friends and often felt lonely. I think you can join some school clubs to meet more people who share the same hobbies with you. Besides, you can take an active part in class activities and greet your classmates warmly, which helps you make new friends soon.
As for your English study, it's hard for you to remember new words. You can read more English stories and news to learn words in use. Also, you can write new words on small cards and recite them in your free time. Listening to easy English songs is also a great way to memorize words in a relaxing way.
As for your English study, it's hard for you to remember new words. You can read more English stories and news to learn words in use. Also, you can write new words on small cards and recite them in your free time. Listening to easy English songs is also a great way to memorize words in a relaxing way.
解析
【分析】
首先明确题目要求是给初一新生Ben写回信,需先点明他的两个核心问题(朋友少孤独、英语单词难记),再针对每个问题补充合理建议并说明理由,同时要符合书信格式和词数要求。第一步,先将Ben的问题准确填入信的空白处;第二步,针对“朋友少孤独”,除参加社团外,补充积极参与班级活动、主动问候同学的建议,理由是能快速结识新朋友;第三步,针对“英语单词难记”,补充制作单词卡片背诵、听英文歌记单词的建议,理由是方法轻松有效,符合中学生学习特点;最后确保语言通顺,符合书信语气,词数达标。
【解析】
1. 先填写Ben的问题:第一处空白对应“you had few friends and often felt lonely”,第二处对应“it's hard for you to remember new words”;
2. 针对第一个问题补充建议:除参加学校社团外,建议积极参与班级活动,主动热情问候同学,理由是能帮助快速结识新朋友;
3. 针对第二个问题补充建议:一是将新单词写在小卡片上,空闲时背诵,二是听简单的英文歌曲,在轻松的氛围中记忆单词,理由是这些方法实用且易操作,适合初一学生;
4. 整合成通顺的书信内容,确保符合词数要求。
【答案】
you had few friends and often felt lonely. I think you can join some school clubs to meet more people who share the same hobbies with you. Besides, you can take an active part in class activities and greet your classmates warmly, which helps you make new friends soon.
As for your English study, it's hard for you to remember new words. You can read more English stories and news to learn words in use. Also, you can write new words on small cards and recite them in your free time. Listening to easy English songs is also a great way to memorize words in a relaxing way.
【知识点】
英语书信写作、建议表达、英语学习方法
【点评】
本题为英语应用文写作题,紧密结合学生生活实际,考查学生解决问题的能力和英语书面表达能力,要求语言通顺、建议合理,符合初一学生的认知水平。
【难度系数】
0.3
首先明确题目要求是给初一新生Ben写回信,需先点明他的两个核心问题(朋友少孤独、英语单词难记),再针对每个问题补充合理建议并说明理由,同时要符合书信格式和词数要求。第一步,先将Ben的问题准确填入信的空白处;第二步,针对“朋友少孤独”,除参加社团外,补充积极参与班级活动、主动问候同学的建议,理由是能快速结识新朋友;第三步,针对“英语单词难记”,补充制作单词卡片背诵、听英文歌记单词的建议,理由是方法轻松有效,符合中学生学习特点;最后确保语言通顺,符合书信语气,词数达标。
【解析】
1. 先填写Ben的问题:第一处空白对应“you had few friends and often felt lonely”,第二处对应“it's hard for you to remember new words”;
2. 针对第一个问题补充建议:除参加学校社团外,建议积极参与班级活动,主动热情问候同学,理由是能帮助快速结识新朋友;
3. 针对第二个问题补充建议:一是将新单词写在小卡片上,空闲时背诵,二是听简单的英文歌曲,在轻松的氛围中记忆单词,理由是这些方法实用且易操作,适合初一学生;
4. 整合成通顺的书信内容,确保符合词数要求。
【答案】
you had few friends and often felt lonely. I think you can join some school clubs to meet more people who share the same hobbies with you. Besides, you can take an active part in class activities and greet your classmates warmly, which helps you make new friends soon.
As for your English study, it's hard for you to remember new words. You can read more English stories and news to learn words in use. Also, you can write new words on small cards and recite them in your free time. Listening to easy English songs is also a great way to memorize words in a relaxing way.
【知识点】
英语书信写作、建议表达、英语学习方法
【点评】
本题为英语应用文写作题,紧密结合学生生活实际,考查学生解决问题的能力和英语书面表达能力,要求语言通顺、建议合理,符合初一学生的认知水平。
【难度系数】
0.3
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