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任务四 书面表达
你校英语俱乐部将开展以“How to be a healthy student”为题的演讲比赛。假如你是李华,请根据以下思维导图写一篇演讲稿,谈谈如何保持健康。
注意:
1. 短文必须包含所给要点,可适当发挥;
2. 意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
3. 60个词左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
How to be a healthy student
Hello, everyone! It's a great honour to give a talk here. Health is important for students. Here is my advice about how to be a healthy student.
Thanks for listening!
你校英语俱乐部将开展以“How to be a healthy student”为题的演讲比赛。假如你是李华,请根据以下思维导图写一篇演讲稿,谈谈如何保持健康。
注意:
1. 短文必须包含所给要点,可适当发挥;
2. 意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
3. 60个词左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
How to be a healthy student
Hello, everyone! It's a great honour to give a talk here. Health is important for students. Here is my advice about how to be a healthy student.
Thanks for listening!
答案
How to be a healthy student
Hello, everyone! It's a great honour to give a talk here. Health is important for students. Here is my advice about how to be a healthy student. First of all, it's necessary to keep a balanced diet. We should eat less junk food and eat more vegetables and fruit which contain lots of vitamins. Second, keeping a good mood is also good for our health. We should always have an active attitude towards life. Third, make sure we take regular exercise every day. Running or walking, simple as it is, has a positive effect on our health. Fourth, we should wash our hands often and don't smoke or drink at the same time.
In a word, there is a lot we can do to keep healthy. Let's take action to be healthier. I hope these can help keep us healthy.
Thanks for listening!
Hello, everyone! It's a great honour to give a talk here. Health is important for students. Here is my advice about how to be a healthy student. First of all, it's necessary to keep a balanced diet. We should eat less junk food and eat more vegetables and fruit which contain lots of vitamins. Second, keeping a good mood is also good for our health. We should always have an active attitude towards life. Third, make sure we take regular exercise every day. Running or walking, simple as it is, has a positive effect on our health. Fourth, we should wash our hands often and don't smoke or drink at the same time.
In a word, there is a lot we can do to keep healthy. Let's take action to be healthier. I hope these can help keep us healthy.
Thanks for listening!
解析
【分析】本题要求以“How to be a healthy student”为题写演讲稿，需结合思维导图的四个核心要点（生活习惯、饮食习惯、运动、心情）展开。解题思路：1. 先梳理思维导图各分支的具体内容，将每个要点转化为具体的健康建议；2. 按逻辑顺序（饮食→运动→心情→生活习惯）组织内容，确保涵盖所有要点；3. 注意语言通顺、符合演讲稿语气，结合已给开头结尾完成写作，控制字数要求。
【解析】根据思维导图要点，依次展开健康建议：①饮食习惯：保持均衡饮食，多吃蔬菜水果，少吃垃圾食品；②运动：每天进行规律运动，如跑步、散步；③心情：保持积极乐观，开心生活；④生活习惯：勤洗手，不抽烟喝酒。将这些内容连贯组织，形成符合要求的短文，衔接自然，符合演讲稿格式。
【答案】How to be a healthy student
Hello, everyone! It's a great honour to give a talk here. Health is important for students. Here is my advice about how to be a healthy student. First of all, it's necessary to keep a balanced diet. We should eat less junk food and eat more vegetables and fruit which contain lots of vitamins. Second, keeping a good mood is also good for our health. We should always have an active attitude towards life. Third, make sure we take regular exercise every day. Running or walking, simple as it is, has a positive effect on our health. Fourth, we should wash our hands often and don't smoke or drink at the same time.
In a word, there is a lot we can do to keep healthy. Let's take action to be healthier. I hope these can help keep us healthy.
Thanks for listening!
【知识点】英语书面表达、健康话题写作、思维导图写作
【点评】本题结合思维导图考查学生的英语写作能力，要求整合给定要点完成演讲稿，既考查信息梳理能力，又考查语言组织能力，是常见的英语书面表达题型。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】根据思维导图要点，依次展开健康建议：①饮食习惯：保持均衡饮食，多吃蔬菜水果，少吃垃圾食品；②运动：每天进行规律运动，如跑步、散步；③心情：保持积极乐观，开心生活；④生活习惯：勤洗手，不抽烟喝酒。将这些内容连贯组织，形成符合要求的短文，衔接自然，符合演讲稿格式。
【答案】How to be a healthy student
Hello, everyone! It's a great honour to give a talk here. Health is important for students. Here is my advice about how to be a healthy student. First of all, it's necessary to keep a balanced diet. We should eat less junk food and eat more vegetables and fruit which contain lots of vitamins. Second, keeping a good mood is also good for our health. We should always have an active attitude towards life. Third, make sure we take regular exercise every day. Running or walking, simple as it is, has a positive effect on our health. Fourth, we should wash our hands often and don't smoke or drink at the same time.
In a word, there is a lot we can do to keep healthy. Let's take action to be healthier. I hope these can help keep us healthy.
Thanks for listening!
【知识点】英语书面表达、健康话题写作、思维导图写作
【点评】本题结合思维导图考查学生的英语写作能力，要求整合给定要点完成演讲稿，既考查信息梳理能力，又考查语言组织能力，是常见的英语书面表达题型。
【难度系数】0.5
