五、假如你是李华,你的英语老师 Mr Li 得知你想当志愿者后,向你分享了一则志愿者招募信息。请你根据下面的图示和写作要求,用英语给 Mr Li 写一封自荐信,内容包含:1. 表明意向,选择一个志愿者项目并说明理由;2. 推介自己,并说明可参与志愿服务的时间。

写作要求:
1. 短文应包含以上所有提示信息,可适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校名称等信息;
3. 词数 90 左右(文中已给出内容不计入总词数)。
Dear Mr Li,
I'm Li Hua from Sunshine School. I'd like to
Thank you for your time and consideration.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
写作要求:
1. 短文应包含以上所有提示信息,可适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校名称等信息;
3. 词数 90 左右(文中已给出内容不计入总词数)。
Dear Mr Li,
I'm Li Hua from Sunshine School. I'd like to
help out as a guide in the history museum.
I am a 14-year-old boy. I'm patient and always
ready to help others. I have always been interested in
history. I love learning about ancient civilizations,
important events, and cultural traditions. Being a
museum guide would give me the chance to explore
these topics more deeply while helping others
understand history. I also enjoy talking with people and
can explain things clearly, which I think is helpful for
guiding visitors.
I am outgoing, cheerful, and always willing to
help. I am free on weekends and during school
holidays, so I can easily manage the volunteering
hours. I believe I can do a good job in the history
museum. I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon.
I am a 14-year-old boy. I'm patient and always
ready to help others. I have always been interested in
history. I love learning about ancient civilizations,
important events, and cultural traditions. Being a
museum guide would give me the chance to explore
these topics more deeply while helping others
understand history. I also enjoy talking with people and
can explain things clearly, which I think is helpful for
guiding visitors.
I am outgoing, cheerful, and always willing to
help. I am free on weekends and during school
holidays, so I can easily manage the volunteering
hours. I believe I can do a good job in the history
museum. I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Thank you for your time and consideration.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
答案
One possible version:
Dear Mr Li,
I'm Li Hua from Sunshine School. I'd like to help
out as a guide in the history museum.
I am a 14-year-old boy. I'm patient and always
ready to help others. I have always been interested in
history. I love learning about ancient civilizations,
important events, and cultural traditions. Being a
museum guide would give me the chance to explore
these topics more deeply while helping others
understand history. I also enjoy talking with people and
can explain things clearly, which I think is helpful for
guiding visitors.
I am outgoing, cheerful, and always willing to
help. I am free on weekends and during school
holidays, so I can easily manage the volunteering
hours. I believe I can do a good job in the history
museum. I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Thank you for your time and consideration.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
Dear Mr Li,
I'm Li Hua from Sunshine School. I'd like to help
out as a guide in the history museum.
I am a 14-year-old boy. I'm patient and always
ready to help others. I have always been interested in
history. I love learning about ancient civilizations,
important events, and cultural traditions. Being a
museum guide would give me the chance to explore
these topics more deeply while helping others
understand history. I also enjoy talking with people and
can explain things clearly, which I think is helpful for
guiding visitors.
I am outgoing, cheerful, and always willing to
help. I am free on weekends and during school
holidays, so I can easily manage the volunteering
hours. I believe I can do a good job in the history
museum. I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Thank you for your time and consideration.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】
首先拿到这道题,先明确核心要求:这是写给老师的志愿自荐信,需要覆盖两个必写要点:一是选定图示里的一个志愿项目、说明选择理由,二是介绍自身优势、说明可参与服务的时间。首先第一步,先从四个志愿选项里挑选自己最容易展开描述的项目,比如历史博物馆向导,很容易结合个人兴趣来写理由。接下来梳理行文逻辑:开篇直接点明自己想要参与的志愿岗位,接着讲自己和这个岗位匹配的特质,比如对历史的兴趣、擅长沟通的性格,这就是选择该项目的理由,之后介绍自己的空余时间,说明自己可以保障志愿服务时长,最后表达自己能做好的信心,全程注意语气礼貌,符合给老师写信的语境,不要出现真实个人信息,控制词数在要求范围内即可。
【解析】
这篇自荐信可以按照3个部分完成写作:
1. 开篇承接题干给出的开头句,直接点明自己的意向:选择历史博物馆向导的志愿岗位。
2. 主体部分第一块说明选择理由+自我推介:介绍自己的性格耐心外向,一直对历史很感兴趣,了解很多历史相关的知识,擅长清晰地给他人讲解内容,完全适配向导的工作要求。
3. 主体部分第二块说明可参与的时间:说明自己周末和学校假期都有空,可以轻松安排出足够的志愿时长,最后表达自己有信心胜任这份工作,收尾礼貌即可。
【答案】
Dear Mr Li,
I'm Li Hua from Sunshine School. I'd like to help out as a guide in the history museum.
I am a 14-year-old boy. I'm patient and always ready to help others. I have always been interested in history. I love learning about ancient civilizations, important events, and cultural traditions. Being a museum guide would give me the chance to explore these topics more deeply while helping others understand history. I also enjoy talking with people and can explain things clearly, which I think is helpful for guiding visitors.
I am outgoing, cheerful, and always willing to help. I am free on weekends and during school holidays, so I can easily manage the volunteering hours. I believe I can do a good job in the history museum. I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Thank you for your time and consideration.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语自荐信写作,志愿话题表达,应用文格式规范
【点评】
本题是贴近学生生活的应用文写作,给出的提示要点清晰,可选的志愿项目多,学生可以结合自身熟悉的内容展开,只要覆盖所有要求的信息点,逻辑通顺,用词准确,就能拿到不错的分数,注意不要遗漏说明可参与服务的时间这个要点即可。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先拿到这道题,先明确核心要求:这是写给老师的志愿自荐信,需要覆盖两个必写要点:一是选定图示里的一个志愿项目、说明选择理由,二是介绍自身优势、说明可参与服务的时间。首先第一步,先从四个志愿选项里挑选自己最容易展开描述的项目,比如历史博物馆向导,很容易结合个人兴趣来写理由。接下来梳理行文逻辑:开篇直接点明自己想要参与的志愿岗位,接着讲自己和这个岗位匹配的特质,比如对历史的兴趣、擅长沟通的性格,这就是选择该项目的理由,之后介绍自己的空余时间,说明自己可以保障志愿服务时长,最后表达自己能做好的信心,全程注意语气礼貌,符合给老师写信的语境,不要出现真实个人信息,控制词数在要求范围内即可。
【解析】
这篇自荐信可以按照3个部分完成写作:
1. 开篇承接题干给出的开头句,直接点明自己的意向:选择历史博物馆向导的志愿岗位。
2. 主体部分第一块说明选择理由+自我推介:介绍自己的性格耐心外向,一直对历史很感兴趣,了解很多历史相关的知识,擅长清晰地给他人讲解内容,完全适配向导的工作要求。
3. 主体部分第二块说明可参与的时间:说明自己周末和学校假期都有空,可以轻松安排出足够的志愿时长,最后表达自己有信心胜任这份工作,收尾礼貌即可。
【答案】
Dear Mr Li,
I'm Li Hua from Sunshine School. I'd like to help out as a guide in the history museum.
I am a 14-year-old boy. I'm patient and always ready to help others. I have always been interested in history. I love learning about ancient civilizations, important events, and cultural traditions. Being a museum guide would give me the chance to explore these topics more deeply while helping others understand history. I also enjoy talking with people and can explain things clearly, which I think is helpful for guiding visitors.
I am outgoing, cheerful, and always willing to help. I am free on weekends and during school holidays, so I can easily manage the volunteering hours. I believe I can do a good job in the history museum. I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Thank you for your time and consideration.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语自荐信写作,志愿话题表达,应用文格式规范
【点评】
本题是贴近学生生活的应用文写作,给出的提示要点清晰,可选的志愿项目多,学生可以结合自身熟悉的内容展开,只要覆盖所有要求的信息点,逻辑通顺,用词准确,就能拿到不错的分数,注意不要遗漏说明可参与服务的时间这个要点即可。
【难度系数】
0.6
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