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中国以"礼仪之邦"著称于世。假如你是李华,你的笔友杰克将要来中国旅行,给你写信向你询问如何在中国举止得体。请你根据下面的提示,给杰克写一封回信。
要求:
1. 80词左右;
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名;
3. 可适当增加细节,以使条理清楚、行文连贯;
4. 标点正确,书写规范。
思路点拨
1. 人称:第一人称和第二人称
2. 时态:一般现在时
3. 结构:
素材积累
1. 主题词块
①握手
②餐桌礼仪
③相处融洽
④坐直
⑤使不碰到;使避开
⑥公筷
⑦习惯于
⑧得到……消息
⑨帮助很大
⑩嘴里塞满了东西时说话
2. 句型仿写
①... English table manners are so confusing that I'm a little worried.(教材 p.54 3a)
句型:so ... that 引导的结果状语从句
仿写:遵循当地的习俗是如此重要以至于你能给人留下好印象。
②... don't bring food unless the host asks you to.(教材 p.54 3a)
句型:unless 引导的条件状语从句
仿写:你应该等长辈们先开始吃饭,除非你被邀请开始。
③... it's important to bring a gift when you visit someone.(教材 p.56 1b)
句型:when 引导的时间状语从句
仿写:当你遇到某人时,用微笑和握手来问候这个人是礼貌的。
连句成篇
中国以"礼仪之邦"著称于世。假如你是李华,你的笔友杰克将要来中国旅行,给你写信向你询问如何在中国举止得体。请你根据下面的提示,给杰克写一封回信。
要求:
1. 80词左右;
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名;
3. 可适当增加细节,以使条理清楚、行文连贯;
4. 标点正确,书写规范。
思路点拨
1. 人称:第一人称和第二人称
2. 时态:一般现在时
3. 结构:
素材积累
1. 主题词块
①握手
②餐桌礼仪
③相处融洽
④坐直
⑤使不碰到;使避开
⑥公筷
⑦习惯于
⑧得到……消息
⑨帮助很大
⑩嘴里塞满了东西时说话
2. 句型仿写
①... English table manners are so confusing that I'm a little worried.(教材 p.54 3a)
句型:so ... that 引导的结果状语从句
仿写:遵循当地的习俗是如此重要以至于你能给人留下好印象。
②... don't bring food unless the host asks you to.(教材 p.54 3a)
句型:unless 引导的条件状语从句
仿写:你应该等长辈们先开始吃饭,除非你被邀请开始。
③... it's important to bring a gift when you visit someone.(教材 p.56 1b)
句型:when 引导的时间状语从句
仿写:当你遇到某人时,用微笑和握手来问候这个人是礼貌的。
连句成篇
答案
【素材积累】
1. 主题词块
①shake hands ②table manners
③get along ④sit up ⑤keep ... off
⑥serving chopsticks ⑦be used to
⑧hear from ⑨go a long way
⑩talk with your mouth full
2. 句型仿写
① It's so important to follow the local
customs that you can make a good
impression on people.
②You should wait for the elders to start
eating first unless you are invited to
begin.
③When you meet someone, it's polite to
greet the person with a smile and a
handshake.
【连句成篇】
Dear Jack,
I'm glad to know that you are coming to
China. It's so important to follow the local
customs that you can make a good impression
on people. Here are some tips on how to
behave properly.
First, when you meet someone, it's
polite to greet the person with a smile and a
handshake. Second, at table, you should wait
for the elders to start eating first unless you
are invited to begin. Third, you shouldn't
talk with your mouth full. And don't point at
anyone with chopsticks. Besides, you should
stand in a line when you are waiting for
something. And remember to be careful of
your behaviour in public.
I hope these tips will help you. Have a
great time in China!
Yours,
Li Hua
1. 主题词块
①shake hands ②table manners
③get along ④sit up ⑤keep ... off
⑥serving chopsticks ⑦be used to
⑧hear from ⑨go a long way
⑩talk with your mouth full
2. 句型仿写
① It's so important to follow the local
customs that you can make a good
impression on people.
②You should wait for the elders to start
eating first unless you are invited to
begin.
③When you meet someone, it's polite to
greet the person with a smile and a
handshake.
【连句成篇】
Dear Jack,
I'm glad to know that you are coming to
China. It's so important to follow the local
customs that you can make a good impression
on people. Here are some tips on how to
behave properly.
First, when you meet someone, it's
polite to greet the person with a smile and a
handshake. Second, at table, you should wait
for the elders to start eating first unless you
are invited to begin. Third, you shouldn't
talk with your mouth full. And don't point at
anyone with chopsticks. Besides, you should
stand in a line when you are waiting for
something. And remember to be careful of
your behaviour in public.
I hope these tips will help you. Have a
great time in China!
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】
本题要求以李华的身份给笔友杰克写回信，解答时需明确写作核心是告知杰克在中国的得体举止礼仪，需结合给定的主题词块和句型，遵循书信格式，注意使用第一、二人称，一般现在时态，结构清晰，控制词数在80左右，适当补充细节使行文连贯，不得出现真实姓名和校名。
【解析】
首先采用标准书信格式，开头称呼Dear Jack，点明得知杰克来中国后引出礼仪建议；接着分点给出具体礼仪：见面时用微笑和握手问候，餐桌礼仪上要等长辈先开始吃饭（除非被邀请先开始），不能嘴里塞满东西说话；最后结尾表达希望这些建议有帮助，祝杰克在中国玩得愉快，落款Yours, Li Hua。写作中需运用给定的so...that、unless、when引导的句型，使用积累的主题词块，确保符合要求。
【答案】
Dear Jack,
I'm glad to know that you are coming to China. It's so important to follow the local customs that you can make a good impression on people. Here are some tips on how to behave properly.
First, when you meet someone, it's polite to greet the person with a smile and a handshake. Second, at table, you should wait for the elders to start eating first unless you are invited to begin. Third, you shouldn't talk with your mouth full. And don't point at anyone with chopsticks. Besides, you should stand in a line when you are waiting for something. And remember to be careful of your behaviour in public.
I hope these tips will help you. Have a great time in China!
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语书信写作、常用礼仪词汇、状语从句的运用
【点评】
本题结合真实生活情境考查英语应用文写作，要求学生运用积累的词块和指定句型完成写作，既考查语言基础知识，又考查语言的实际运用能力，符合初中英语写作的考查目标。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题要求以李华的身份给笔友杰克写回信，解答时需明确写作核心是告知杰克在中国的得体举止礼仪，需结合给定的主题词块和句型，遵循书信格式，注意使用第一、二人称，一般现在时态，结构清晰，控制词数在80左右，适当补充细节使行文连贯，不得出现真实姓名和校名。
【解析】
首先采用标准书信格式，开头称呼Dear Jack，点明得知杰克来中国后引出礼仪建议；接着分点给出具体礼仪：见面时用微笑和握手问候，餐桌礼仪上要等长辈先开始吃饭（除非被邀请先开始），不能嘴里塞满东西说话；最后结尾表达希望这些建议有帮助，祝杰克在中国玩得愉快，落款Yours, Li Hua。写作中需运用给定的so...that、unless、when引导的句型，使用积累的主题词块，确保符合要求。
【答案】
Dear Jack,
I'm glad to know that you are coming to China. It's so important to follow the local customs that you can make a good impression on people. Here are some tips on how to behave properly.
First, when you meet someone, it's polite to greet the person with a smile and a handshake. Second, at table, you should wait for the elders to start eating first unless you are invited to begin. Third, you shouldn't talk with your mouth full. And don't point at anyone with chopsticks. Besides, you should stand in a line when you are waiting for something. And remember to be careful of your behaviour in public.
I hope these tips will help you. Have a great time in China!
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语书信写作、常用礼仪词汇、状语从句的运用
【点评】
本题结合真实生活情境考查英语应用文写作，要求学生运用积累的词块和指定句型完成写作，既考查语言基础知识，又考查语言的实际运用能力，符合初中英语写作的考查目标。
【难度系数】
0.6
