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七、写话练习。
生活中我们要遵守各种规则。请根据所给提示,以"Classroom rules"为题,写一写你们班级的规则。
要求:语句通顺、意思连贯、书写规范、正确使用标点符号,不少于8句话。
Classroom rules
生活中我们要遵守各种规则。请根据所给提示,以"Classroom rules"为题,写一写你们班级的规则。
要求:语句通顺、意思连贯、书写规范、正确使用标点符号,不少于8句话。
Classroom rules
答案
1. There are many practical rules in our classroom, and all of us need to follow them.
2. First, we must listen to the teachers carefully in class, and we should take notes and answer questions actively.
3. Second, we need to keep the classroom clean and tidy, so we take turns to clean the classroom every day.
4. We can't run or shout loudly in the classroom, or we will disturb other classmates who are studying.
5. We must get to school on time, and we should tell our head teacher in advance if we need to ask for leave.
6. Eating snacks or throwing rubbish everywhere in the classroom is not allowed, to keep our learning environment clean.
7. We also need to be friendly to our classmates, we should help each other and never fight with others.
8. If everyone follows these classroom rules, we will have a comfortable and nice study environment all the time.
2. First, we must listen to the teachers carefully in class, and we should take notes and answer questions actively.
3. Second, we need to keep the classroom clean and tidy, so we take turns to clean the classroom every day.
4. We can't run or shout loudly in the classroom, or we will disturb other classmates who are studying.
5. We must get to school on time, and we should tell our head teacher in advance if we need to ask for leave.
6. Eating snacks or throwing rubbish everywhere in the classroom is not allowed, to keep our learning environment clean.
7. We also need to be friendly to our classmates, we should help each other and never fight with others.
8. If everyone follows these classroom rules, we will have a comfortable and nice study environment all the time.
解析
【分析】
首先拿到这道写作题，先明确核心主题是介绍班级班规，且题目给出了清晰的三段式写作框架：开头、主体、结尾。第一步先完成开头部分，直接开门见山点明我们班级有不少需要全体同学共同遵守的班规，引出主题。第二步填充主体内容，结合自己的真实校园生活，梳理出班级里要求必须做到的事、禁止做的事，比如课堂认真听讲、保持教室整洁、不能追逐喧哗、按时到校、不能乱扔垃圾、和同学友好相处等内容，用通顺的英语句子逐一表述出来，覆盖提示给出的示例要点。最后完成结尾部分，用1-2句话总结遵守班规的好处，收尾全文，同时注意满足不少于8句话的要求，保证语法正确、语句连贯。
【解析】
1. 开篇点题：第一句直接引出主题，说明我们班级有很多实用的班规，所有人都需要遵守，符合开头直接点明介绍主题的要求。
2. 主体部分展开：按照逻辑顺序依次列举多条班规，覆盖要求的必须做、禁止做的内容：
首先说明课堂上要认真听老师讲课，主动记笔记、回答问题
其次说明要保持教室干净整洁，大家每天轮流值日打扫
接着说明不能在教室奔跑、大声喊叫，避免打扰其他学习的同学
之后补充要按时到校，需要请假的话要提前告知班主任
再说明不允许在教室吃零食、乱扔垃圾，维护学习环境整洁
最后说明要和同学友好相处，互相帮助，不能打架
所有内容都贴合校园实际，符合主体部分的写作要求。
3. 结尾总结：最后一句话点明如果所有人都遵守班规，我们就能一直拥有舒适美好的学习环境，完成收尾总结，全文一共8句话，满足不少于8句的要求，语句通顺、语法规范。
【答案】
1. There are many practical rules in our classroom, and all of us need to follow them.
2. First, we must listen to the teachers carefully in class, and we should take notes and answer questions actively.
3. Second, we need to keep the classroom clean and tidy, so we take turns to clean the classroom every day.
4. We can't run or shout loudly in the classroom, or we will disturb other classmates who are studying.
5. We must get to school on time, and we should tell our head teacher in advance if we need to ask for leave.
6. Eating snacks or throwing rubbish everywhere in the classroom is not allowed, to keep our learning environment clean.
7. We also need to be friendly to our classmates, we should help each other and never fight with others.
8. If everyone follows these classroom rules, we will have a comfortable and nice study environment all the time.
【知识点】
规则类英语写作，情态动词用法，校园场景表达
【点评】
本题是贴近校园生活的基础英语写话练习，给出了明确的三段式写作框架，学生只需要结合自身的班级生活经历填充对应内容，正确使用must、can't、should等表达规则的情态动词，就可以写出符合要求的作文，既能锻炼学生的英语语句组织能力，也能帮助学生梳理日常班规的相关英语表达。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先拿到这道写作题，先明确核心主题是介绍班级班规，且题目给出了清晰的三段式写作框架：开头、主体、结尾。第一步先完成开头部分，直接开门见山点明我们班级有不少需要全体同学共同遵守的班规，引出主题。第二步填充主体内容，结合自己的真实校园生活，梳理出班级里要求必须做到的事、禁止做的事，比如课堂认真听讲、保持教室整洁、不能追逐喧哗、按时到校、不能乱扔垃圾、和同学友好相处等内容，用通顺的英语句子逐一表述出来，覆盖提示给出的示例要点。最后完成结尾部分，用1-2句话总结遵守班规的好处，收尾全文，同时注意满足不少于8句话的要求，保证语法正确、语句连贯。
【解析】
1. 开篇点题：第一句直接引出主题，说明我们班级有很多实用的班规，所有人都需要遵守，符合开头直接点明介绍主题的要求。
2. 主体部分展开：按照逻辑顺序依次列举多条班规，覆盖要求的必须做、禁止做的内容：
首先说明课堂上要认真听老师讲课，主动记笔记、回答问题
其次说明要保持教室干净整洁，大家每天轮流值日打扫
接着说明不能在教室奔跑、大声喊叫，避免打扰其他学习的同学
之后补充要按时到校，需要请假的话要提前告知班主任
再说明不允许在教室吃零食、乱扔垃圾，维护学习环境整洁
最后说明要和同学友好相处，互相帮助，不能打架
所有内容都贴合校园实际，符合主体部分的写作要求。
3. 结尾总结：最后一句话点明如果所有人都遵守班规，我们就能一直拥有舒适美好的学习环境，完成收尾总结，全文一共8句话，满足不少于8句的要求，语句通顺、语法规范。
【答案】
1. There are many practical rules in our classroom, and all of us need to follow them.
2. First, we must listen to the teachers carefully in class, and we should take notes and answer questions actively.
3. Second, we need to keep the classroom clean and tidy, so we take turns to clean the classroom every day.
4. We can't run or shout loudly in the classroom, or we will disturb other classmates who are studying.
5. We must get to school on time, and we should tell our head teacher in advance if we need to ask for leave.
6. Eating snacks or throwing rubbish everywhere in the classroom is not allowed, to keep our learning environment clean.
7. We also need to be friendly to our classmates, we should help each other and never fight with others.
8. If everyone follows these classroom rules, we will have a comfortable and nice study environment all the time.
【知识点】
规则类英语写作，情态动词用法，校园场景表达
【点评】
本题是贴近校园生活的基础英语写话练习，给出了明确的三段式写作框架，学生只需要结合自身的班级生活经历填充对应内容，正确使用must、can't、should等表达规则的情态动词，就可以写出符合要求的作文，既能锻炼学生的英语语句组织能力，也能帮助学生梳理日常班规的相关英语表达。
【难度系数】
0.6
