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【书面表达】
我们都知道孟母三迁的故事，孟子的妈妈在他的成长过程中给予其非常重要的影响。在你的身边，是否也有这样一个人，关爱你、帮助你、提点你，对你有重大的影响呢？学校英语节举办题为“The Person I Want to Thank Most”的英语演讲比赛，请你写一篇不少于80词的英语演讲稿参赛。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
注意:需要写人名时使用 Miss/Mr Li 或 Li Ming/Fu Xing。
Good afternoon,ladies and gentlemen,
Today,I am honoured to speak about the person I want to thank most in my life.
That's all for my speech. Thanks for listening.
我们都知道孟母三迁的故事，孟子的妈妈在他的成长过程中给予其非常重要的影响。在你的身边，是否也有这样一个人，关爱你、帮助你、提点你，对你有重大的影响呢？学校英语节举办题为“The Person I Want to Thank Most”的英语演讲比赛，请你写一篇不少于80词的英语演讲稿参赛。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
注意:需要写人名时使用 Miss/Mr Li 或 Li Ming/Fu Xing。
Good afternoon,ladies and gentlemen,
Today,I am honoured to speak about the person I want to thank most in my life.
He is a middle-aged man with a friendly smile on his face. He has a warm personality and always makes me feel welcome. He is my maths teacher,Mr Li. He always encourages me to study hard and to never give up.
One day,I failed a maths test. I was very sad. Mr Li spent time helping me with the test questions after school. He explained patiently until I finally understood all the questions. I was so thankful for his help during that difficult time.
Mr Li has not only taught me the importance of believing in myself but also shown me that nothing is impossible as long as I try my best.
He has made a big difference in my life,and I am thankful for everything he has done for me. Thank you,Mr Li.
That's all for my speech. Thanks for listening.
答案
One possible version:
Good afternoon,ladies and gentlemen,
Today,I am honoured to speak about the person I want to thank most in my life. He is a middle-aged man with a friendly smile on his face. He has a warm personality and always makes me feel welcome. He is my maths teacher,Mr Li. He always encourages me to study hard and to never give up.
One day,I failed a maths test. I was very sad. Mr Li spent time helping me with the test questions after school. He explained patiently until I finally understood all the questions. I was so thankful for his help during that difficult time.
Mr Li has not only taught me the importance of believing in myself but also shown me that nothing is impossible as long as I try my best. He has made a big difference in my life,and I am thankful for everything he has done for me. Thank you,Mr Li.
That's all for my speech. Thanks for listening.
Good afternoon,ladies and gentlemen,
Today,I am honoured to speak about the person I want to thank most in my life. He is a middle-aged man with a friendly smile on his face. He has a warm personality and always makes me feel welcome. He is my maths teacher,Mr Li. He always encourages me to study hard and to never give up.
One day,I failed a maths test. I was very sad. Mr Li spent time helping me with the test questions after school. He explained patiently until I finally understood all the questions. I was so thankful for his help during that difficult time.
Mr Li has not only taught me the importance of believing in myself but also shown me that nothing is impossible as long as I try my best. He has made a big difference in my life,and I am thankful for everything he has done for me. Thank you,Mr Li.
That's all for my speech. Thanks for listening.
解析
【分析】
首先明确演讲稿主题为“The Person I Want to Thank Most”，需结合给定思维导图结构展开写作：第一步介绍人物，可从外貌、性格等方面入手；第二步讲述具体故事，需包含感谢的原因、事件经过、人物的做法；第三步说明人物对自己的影响并表达感谢。写作时要注意语言通顺，符合演讲语境，字数不少于80词，使用指定人名（如Mr Li）。
【解析】
1. 介绍人物：点明要感谢的人是数学老师Mr Li，描述其外貌（中年，面带友好微笑）和性格（热情，让人感到亲切）；
2. 讲述故事：选取具体事例（数学考试失利），说明事件经过（自己难过，老师课后耐心讲解题目），体现老师的帮助；
3. 表达影响与感谢：说明老师不仅传授知识，还教会自己要自信、不放弃，最后表达对老师的感谢，呼应主题。
【答案】
Good afternoon,ladies and gentlemen,
Today,I am honoured to speak about the person I want to thank most in my life. He is a middle-aged man with a friendly smile on his face. He has a warm personality and always makes me feel welcome. He is my maths teacher,Mr Li. He always encourages me to study hard and to never give up.
One day,I failed a maths test. I was very sad. Mr Li spent time helping me with the test questions after school. He explained patiently until I finally understood all the questions. I was so thankful for his help during that difficult time.
Mr Li has not only taught me the importance of believing in myself but also shown me that nothing is impossible as long as I try my best. He has made a big difference in my life,and I am thankful for everything he has done for me. Thank you,Mr Li.
That's all for my speech. Thanks for listening.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、人物描写、叙事写作
【点评】
该范文严格遵循思维导图结构，内容具体充实，情感真挚自然，符合英语演讲稿的格式与语境要求，准确表达了对老师的感谢，是一篇优秀的书面表达作品。
【难度系数】
0.5
首先明确演讲稿主题为“The Person I Want to Thank Most”，需结合给定思维导图结构展开写作：第一步介绍人物，可从外貌、性格等方面入手；第二步讲述具体故事，需包含感谢的原因、事件经过、人物的做法；第三步说明人物对自己的影响并表达感谢。写作时要注意语言通顺，符合演讲语境，字数不少于80词，使用指定人名（如Mr Li）。
【解析】
1. 介绍人物：点明要感谢的人是数学老师Mr Li，描述其外貌（中年，面带友好微笑）和性格（热情，让人感到亲切）；
2. 讲述故事：选取具体事例（数学考试失利），说明事件经过（自己难过，老师课后耐心讲解题目），体现老师的帮助；
3. 表达影响与感谢：说明老师不仅传授知识，还教会自己要自信、不放弃，最后表达对老师的感谢，呼应主题。
【答案】
Good afternoon,ladies and gentlemen,
Today,I am honoured to speak about the person I want to thank most in my life. He is a middle-aged man with a friendly smile on his face. He has a warm personality and always makes me feel welcome. He is my maths teacher,Mr Li. He always encourages me to study hard and to never give up.
One day,I failed a maths test. I was very sad. Mr Li spent time helping me with the test questions after school. He explained patiently until I finally understood all the questions. I was so thankful for his help during that difficult time.
Mr Li has not only taught me the importance of believing in myself but also shown me that nothing is impossible as long as I try my best. He has made a big difference in my life,and I am thankful for everything he has done for me. Thank you,Mr Li.
That's all for my speech. Thanks for listening.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、人物描写、叙事写作
【点评】
该范文严格遵循思维导图结构，内容具体充实，情感真挚自然，符合英语演讲稿的格式与语境要求，准确表达了对老师的感谢，是一篇优秀的书面表达作品。
【难度系数】
0.5
