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假设你是李明,下面是你一天的主要活动,请以“My Day”为题,根据提示用英语向大家介绍你的活动。
写作要求:(1)短文须包含表格中所有信息,并适当拓展;(2)文中不能出现真实的人名和校名;(3)不少于60个词,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
My Day
My name is Li Ming.
假设你是李明,下面是你一天的主要活动,请以“My Day”为题,根据提示用英语向大家介绍你的活动。
写作要求:(1)短文须包含表格中所有信息,并适当拓展;(2)文中不能出现真实的人名和校名;(3)不少于60个词,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
My Day
My name is Li Ming.
答案
My Day
My name is Li Ming. I have a busy but pleasant daily routine. I get up at 7:00 a.m. every morning, and then I have a nice breakfast at home. At 7:30 a.m., I go to school with my friends. Our classes begin at 8:30 a.m. We have different interesting lessons all day. After I finish my dinner at home, I start to do my homework at 7:30 p.m. It takes me about one hour to finish all my homework. Then I can read for a little while. I go to bed at 9:30 p.m. every night. This is my great day.
My name is Li Ming. I have a busy but pleasant daily routine. I get up at 7:00 a.m. every morning, and then I have a nice breakfast at home. At 7:30 a.m., I go to school with my friends. Our classes begin at 8:30 a.m. We have different interesting lessons all day. After I finish my dinner at home, I start to do my homework at 7:30 p.m. It takes me about one hour to finish all my homework. Then I can read for a little while. I go to bed at 9:30 p.m. every night. This is my great day.
解析
这是一篇介绍个人日常作息的命题记叙文，写作要点如下：1. 全文使用一般现在时，符合描述日常习惯性活动的语法规则，贴合七年级上册的相关语法知识点；2. 按照时间先后顺序行文，完整覆盖表格给出的全部活动和对应时间点，可适当补充合理的生活化细节，比如起床后吃早餐、上学的出行方式、课后的小安排等，让内容更流畅自然；3. 严格遵守写作要求，不出现真实人名、校名，保证总词数不少于60即可。
