Ⅳ. 书面表达。
你的英语老师要求每位同学在班级做一次课前英文汇报,介绍自己家庭的环境保护习惯,并给出改进建议。请你将汇报内容写成一篇文章,内容包括:
1. 你家目前存在的环境问题及其危害;
2. 你的具体改进建议;
3. 你对家庭环保的看法和呼吁。
要求:
1. 要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当拓展;
2. 语法正确,书写规范;
3. 不少于80词(文章开头已经给出,不计入总词数)。
Hello everyone.
Today I'm going to report on my family's environmental habits ...
你的英语老师要求每位同学在班级做一次课前英文汇报,介绍自己家庭的环境保护习惯,并给出改进建议。请你将汇报内容写成一篇文章,内容包括:
1. 你家目前存在的环境问题及其危害;
2. 你的具体改进建议;
3. 你对家庭环保的看法和呼吁。
要求:
1. 要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当拓展;
2. 语法正确,书写规范;
3. 不少于80词(文章开头已经给出,不计入总词数)。
Hello everyone.
Today I'm going to report on my family's environmental habits ...
答案
One possible version:
Hello everyone,
Today I'm going to report on my family's environmental habits. My family uses too many plastic bags and bottles. Plastic waste is a danger to sea animals. It takes thousands of years to break down, and even humans are eating plastic.
So I suggest we go plastic-free. Let's use reusable shopping bags and water bottles. Also, we should avoid buying products with too much packaging—that's a smart way to stop waste before it starts.
Small changes matter. There is no Planet B. Let's go plastic-free and save our planet together.
Thank you!
Hello everyone,
Today I'm going to report on my family's environmental habits. My family uses too many plastic bags and bottles. Plastic waste is a danger to sea animals. It takes thousands of years to break down, and even humans are eating plastic.
So I suggest we go plastic-free. Let's use reusable shopping bags and water bottles. Also, we should avoid buying products with too much packaging—that's a smart way to stop waste before it starts.
Small changes matter. There is no Planet B. Let's go plastic-free and save our planet together.
Thank you!
解析
【分析】
本题要求完成一篇课前英文汇报的英语书面表达,需涵盖三个核心内容:一是家庭现存的环境问题(如过度使用塑料制品)及其危害;二是具体的环保改进建议;三是对家庭环保的看法与呼吁。需结合给定开头,行文连贯,符合汇报语气,确保要点齐全、词数达标。
【解析】
首先承接给定开头,点明家庭的环保现状问题:使用过多塑料袋和塑料瓶,说明其危害(塑料需数千年降解,危害海洋生物,人类也会摄入塑料);接着提出具体改进建议:改用可重复使用的购物袋和水瓶,减少购买过度包装的产品;最后表达看法,强调小改变的重要性,发出呼吁保护地球,结尾添加礼貌语“Thank you”,符合汇报的正式性与礼貌性。
【答案】
One possible version:
Hello everyone,
Today I'm going to report on my family's environmental habits. My family uses too many plastic bags and bottles. Plastic waste is a danger to sea animals. It takes thousands of years to break down, and even humans are eating plastic.
So I suggest we go plastic-free. Let's use reusable shopping bags and water bottles. Also, we should avoid buying products with too much packaging—that's a smart way to stop waste before it starts.
Small changes matter. There is no Planet B. Let's go plastic-free and save our planet together.
Thank you!
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、环保主题书面表达
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求,要点齐全,逻辑清晰,语言连贯自然,符合课前汇报的语气,既明确了家庭存在的环境问题及危害,又给出了切实可行的改进建议,最后发出呼吁,是一篇符合要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题要求完成一篇课前英文汇报的英语书面表达,需涵盖三个核心内容:一是家庭现存的环境问题(如过度使用塑料制品)及其危害;二是具体的环保改进建议;三是对家庭环保的看法与呼吁。需结合给定开头,行文连贯,符合汇报语气,确保要点齐全、词数达标。
【解析】
首先承接给定开头,点明家庭的环保现状问题:使用过多塑料袋和塑料瓶,说明其危害(塑料需数千年降解,危害海洋生物,人类也会摄入塑料);接着提出具体改进建议:改用可重复使用的购物袋和水瓶,减少购买过度包装的产品;最后表达看法,强调小改变的重要性,发出呼吁保护地球,结尾添加礼貌语“Thank you”,符合汇报的正式性与礼貌性。
【答案】
One possible version:
Hello everyone,
Today I'm going to report on my family's environmental habits. My family uses too many plastic bags and bottles. Plastic waste is a danger to sea animals. It takes thousands of years to break down, and even humans are eating plastic.
So I suggest we go plastic-free. Let's use reusable shopping bags and water bottles. Also, we should avoid buying products with too much packaging—that's a smart way to stop waste before it starts.
Small changes matter. There is no Planet B. Let's go plastic-free and save our planet together.
Thank you!
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、环保主题书面表达
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求,要点齐全,逻辑清晰,语言连贯自然,符合课前汇报的语气,既明确了家庭存在的环境问题及危害,又给出了切实可行的改进建议,最后发出呼吁,是一篇符合要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
登录