Ⅵ. 书面表达(满分20分)
41. 动物和人类共同生活在地球上,它们是人类的好朋友,请你以"My favourite animal"为题,根据以下思维导图用英语写一篇短文谈谈自己的观点。

注意:
(1)可在思维导图的基础上适当拓展信息。
(2)不要逐条翻译;不得在作文中出现真实校名、地名和姓名。
(3)语句连贯,词数70左右,作文的开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:Asia 亚洲,claw 爪子,sharp 锋利的
My favourite animal
My favourite animal is
41. 动物和人类共同生活在地球上,它们是人类的好朋友,请你以"My favourite animal"为题,根据以下思维导图用英语写一篇短文谈谈自己的观点。
注意:
(1)可在思维导图的基础上适当拓展信息。
(2)不要逐条翻译;不得在作文中出现真实校名、地名和姓名。
(3)语句连贯,词数70左右,作文的开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:Asia 亚洲,claw 爪子,sharp 锋利的
My favourite animal
My favourite animal is
tigers because
they are very strong and cool. Tigers are light yellow or brown and they look like large cats. They live in Asia and they usually live alone. Their teeth and claws are sharp in order to catch small animals. They like eating meat, so they often catch small animals for food. They are good at swimming and they can run very fast. Animals are our friends. Without them, we would feel very lonely. So we should try our best to protect them.
they are very strong and cool. Tigers are light yellow or brown and they look like large cats. They live in Asia and they usually live alone. Their teeth and claws are sharp in order to catch small animals. They like eating meat, so they often catch small animals for food. They are good at swimming and they can run very fast. Animals are our friends. Without them, we would feel very lonely. So we should try our best to protect them.
答案
41. One possible version:
My favourite animal
My favourite animal is tigers because
they are very strong and cool. Tigers are light yellow or brown and they look like large cats. They live in Asia and they usually live alone. Their teeth and claws are sharp in order to catch small animals. They like eating meat, so they often catch small animals for food. They are good at swimming and they can run very fast. Animals are our friends. Without them, we would feel very lonely. So we should try our best to protect them.
My favourite animal
My favourite animal is tigers because
they are very strong and cool. Tigers are light yellow or brown and they look like large cats. They live in Asia and they usually live alone. Their teeth and claws are sharp in order to catch small animals. They like eating meat, so they often catch small animals for food. They are good at swimming and they can run very fast. Animals are our friends. Without them, we would feel very lonely. So we should try our best to protect them.
解析
【解析】
这篇书面表达需紧扣思维导图要点展开:首先点明最喜欢的动物及喜爱原因,接着介绍该动物的栖息地、外形特征、生活习性等内容,最后发出爱护动物的号召。写作时需注意语句连贯,适当拓展内容,控制词数,避免出现真实信息。
【答案】
One possible version:
My favourite animal
My favourite animal is tigers because
they are very strong and cool. Tigers are light yellow or brown and they look like large cats. They live in Asia and they usually live alone. Their teeth and claws are sharp in order to catch small animals. They like eating meat, so they often catch small animals for food. They are good at swimming and they can run very fast. Animals are our friends. Without them, we would feel very lonely. So we should try our best to protect them.
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作、动物类词汇运用、观点表达句型
【点评】
本文紧扣写作要求,内容完整,涵盖了思维导图的所有要点并适当拓展,语言流畅自然,句式多样,清晰传达了喜爱老虎的原因及爱护动物的理念,符合词数要求,是一篇优秀的范文。
这篇书面表达需紧扣思维导图要点展开:首先点明最喜欢的动物及喜爱原因,接着介绍该动物的栖息地、外形特征、生活习性等内容,最后发出爱护动物的号召。写作时需注意语句连贯,适当拓展内容,控制词数,避免出现真实信息。
【答案】
One possible version:
My favourite animal
My favourite animal is tigers because
they are very strong and cool. Tigers are light yellow or brown and they look like large cats. They live in Asia and they usually live alone. Their teeth and claws are sharp in order to catch small animals. They like eating meat, so they often catch small animals for food. They are good at swimming and they can run very fast. Animals are our friends. Without them, we would feel very lonely. So we should try our best to protect them.
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作、动物类词汇运用、观点表达句型
【点评】
本文紧扣写作要求,内容完整,涵盖了思维导图的所有要点并适当拓展,语言流畅自然,句式多样,清晰传达了喜爱老虎的原因及爱护动物的理念,符合词数要求,是一篇优秀的范文。
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