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任务二:请对课文和语篇中的佳句进行仿写。
1. 课文佳句:This made it difficult for locals to bring products to the market or to develop industry.
仿写:这使得学习对我来说有趣了。
2. 课文佳句:Food used to take hundreds of lorries to carry between the two cities, but now it takes only two or three trains.
仿写:年轻人以往在大城市工作,但是如今很多人回到了家乡。
3. 课文佳句:The way I study is also different.
仿写:人们度过闲暇时光的方式也不一样了。
4. 语篇佳句:Great changes have taken place in my hometown in recent years.
仿写:我的社区在近十年发生了许多变化。
1. 课文佳句:This made it difficult for locals to bring products to the market or to develop industry.
仿写:这使得学习对我来说有趣了。
This made it fun for me to study.
2. 课文佳句:Food used to take hundreds of lorries to carry between the two cities, but now it takes only two or three trains.
仿写:年轻人以往在大城市工作,但是如今很多人回到了家乡。
Young people used to work in big cities,but now many have returned to their hometowns.
3. 课文佳句:The way I study is also different.
仿写:人们度过闲暇时光的方式也不一样了。
The way people spend their free time is also different.
4. 语篇佳句:Great changes have taken place in my hometown in recent years.
仿写:我的社区在近十年发生了许多变化。
Many changes have taken place in my neighbourhood in/over the past ten years.
答案
1. This made it fun for me to study.
2. Young people used to work in big cities, but now many have returned to their hometowns.
3. The way people spend their free time is also different.
4. Many changes have taken place in my neighbourhood in/over the past ten years.
2. Young people used to work in big cities, but now many have returned to their hometowns.
3. The way people spend their free time is also different.
4. Many changes have taken place in my neighbourhood in/over the past ten years.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语句子仿写题，需依据课文给出的固定句型结构，将中文内容准确转化为符合英语表达习惯的句子。解题时要对应每个仿写句的核心句型：第一题对应“make it + adj + for sb to do sth”结构，第二题对应“used to... but now...”的对比结构，第三题对应“The way sb do sth is different”结构，第四题对应“Great changes have taken place in... in/over the past... years”的现在完成时结构，确保句式匹配、语义准确。
【解析】
1. 对应原句“make it + adj + for sb to do sth”结构，将中文“这使得学习对我来说有趣了”译为：This made it fun for me to study.
2. 对应原句“used to... but now...”的对比结构，将中文“年轻人以往在大城市工作，但是如今很多人回到了家乡”译为：Young people used to work in big cities, but now many have returned to their hometowns.
3. 对应原句“The way sb do sth is different”结构，将中文“人们度过闲暇时光的方式也不一样了”译为：The way people spend their free time is also different.
4. 对应原句“Great changes have taken place in... in/over the past... years”的现在完成时结构，将中文“我的社区在近十年发生了许多变化”译为：Many changes have taken place in my neighbourhood in/over the past ten years.
【答案】
1. This made it fun for me to study.
2. Young people used to work in big cities, but now many have returned to their hometowns.
3. The way people spend their free time is also different.
4. Many changes have taken place in my neighbourhood in/over the past ten years.
【知识点】
英语句子仿写，固定句型运用，现在完成时
【点评】
本题考查对课文重点句型的掌握与运用，属于基础仿写题，只要熟悉对应句式结构、准确翻译即可完成，难度较低。
【难度系数】
0.3
本题为英语句子仿写题，需依据课文给出的固定句型结构，将中文内容准确转化为符合英语表达习惯的句子。解题时要对应每个仿写句的核心句型：第一题对应“make it + adj + for sb to do sth”结构，第二题对应“used to... but now...”的对比结构，第三题对应“The way sb do sth is different”结构，第四题对应“Great changes have taken place in... in/over the past... years”的现在完成时结构，确保句式匹配、语义准确。
【解析】
1. 对应原句“make it + adj + for sb to do sth”结构，将中文“这使得学习对我来说有趣了”译为：This made it fun for me to study.
2. 对应原句“used to... but now...”的对比结构，将中文“年轻人以往在大城市工作，但是如今很多人回到了家乡”译为：Young people used to work in big cities, but now many have returned to their hometowns.
3. 对应原句“The way sb do sth is different”结构，将中文“人们度过闲暇时光的方式也不一样了”译为：The way people spend their free time is also different.
4. 对应原句“Great changes have taken place in... in/over the past... years”的现在完成时结构，将中文“我的社区在近十年发生了许多变化”译为：Many changes have taken place in my neighbourhood in/over the past ten years.
【答案】
1. This made it fun for me to study.
2. Young people used to work in big cities, but now many have returned to their hometowns.
3. The way people spend their free time is also different.
4. Many changes have taken place in my neighbourhood in/over the past ten years.
【知识点】
英语句子仿写，固定句型运用，现在完成时
【点评】
本题考查对课文重点句型的掌握与运用，属于基础仿写题，只要熟悉对应句式结构、准确翻译即可完成，难度较低。
【难度系数】
0.3
[佳句拓展]
开头句
1. Life is quite different from what it was ten years ago.
2. Let me give you some examples.
中间句
3. I'm glad that more tourists come to visit my hometown.
4. These changes have not only improved our living standards but also connected us more closely with the world.
结尾句
5. Little by little, we've made much progress.
6. It's amazing how much we have achieved together.
名言警句
7. Be the change that you wish to see in the world. 欲变世界，先变其身。
8. To improve is to change; to be perfect is to change often. 求进者变，屡变者臻。
写作典范 主题:我们身边的变化
时态:一般过去时、现在完成时为主
随着社会的发展,我们的生活变得越来越好。
学校英语角本周的主题是“Changes Around Us”。
请你根据以下提示,用英语写一篇短文(不少于100词),谈谈自己的看法。
人称:第一人称 体裁:夹叙夹议
In the past few years,great changes have taken place around us.
[写作提纲]
引入话题→In the past few years,great changes have taken place around us.
主体部分→travel:book tickets online
study:do group work;take online courses
entertainment:cinemas;outdoor activities
living environment:tall buildings;more green parks
表达看法→Feel lucky and proud
[范文展示]
①In the past few years,great changes have taken place around us.
② When it comes to travelling, people now prefer to book tickets online. People now can travel to distant places quickly and conveniently. For study, students are doing more group work and taking online courses, which have become more and more popular. As for entertainment, modern cinemas offer better viewing experiences, and
开头句
1. Life is quite different from what it was ten years ago.
2. Let me give you some examples.
中间句
3. I'm glad that more tourists come to visit my hometown.
4. These changes have not only improved our living standards but also connected us more closely with the world.
结尾句
5. Little by little, we've made much progress.
6. It's amazing how much we have achieved together.
名言警句
7. Be the change that you wish to see in the world. 欲变世界，先变其身。
8. To improve is to change; to be perfect is to change often. 求进者变，屡变者臻。
写作典范 主题:我们身边的变化
时态:一般过去时、现在完成时为主
随着社会的发展,我们的生活变得越来越好。
学校英语角本周的主题是“Changes Around Us”。
请你根据以下提示,用英语写一篇短文(不少于100词),谈谈自己的看法。
人称:第一人称 体裁:夹叙夹议
In the past few years,great changes have taken place around us.
[写作提纲]
引入话题→In the past few years,great changes have taken place around us.
主体部分→travel:book tickets online
study:do group work;take online courses
entertainment:cinemas;outdoor activities
living environment:tall buildings;more green parks
表达看法→Feel lucky and proud
[范文展示]
①In the past few years,great changes have taken place around us.
② When it comes to travelling, people now prefer to book tickets online. People now can travel to distant places quickly and conveniently. For study, students are doing more group work and taking online courses, which have become more and more popular. As for entertainment, modern cinemas offer better viewing experiences, and
答案
# Changes Around Us
In the past few years, great changes have taken place around us.
Life is quite different from what it was ten years ago. Let me give you some examples. When it comes to travelling, people now prefer to book tickets online. People now can travel to distant places quickly and conveniently. For study, students are doing more group work and taking online courses, which have become more and more popular. As for entertainment, modern cinemas offer better viewing experiences, and more people now choose to take all kinds of interesting outdoor activities in their free time. Our living environment has also become much better: plenty of tall buildings have been put up, and more and more green parks are built for people to relax in. These changes have not only improved our living standards but also connected us more closely with the world.
Little by little, we've made much progress. I feel so lucky and proud to live in such a developing society. It's amazing how much we have achieved together. As the saying goes, "To improve is to change; to be perfect is to change often." We will surely create a better future with our own efforts.
In the past few years, great changes have taken place around us.
Life is quite different from what it was ten years ago. Let me give you some examples. When it comes to travelling, people now prefer to book tickets online. People now can travel to distant places quickly and conveniently. For study, students are doing more group work and taking online courses, which have become more and more popular. As for entertainment, modern cinemas offer better viewing experiences, and more people now choose to take all kinds of interesting outdoor activities in their free time. Our living environment has also become much better: plenty of tall buildings have been put up, and more and more green parks are built for people to relax in. These changes have not only improved our living standards but also connected us more closely with the world.
Little by little, we've made much progress. I feel so lucky and proud to live in such a developing society. It's amazing how much we have achieved together. As the saying goes, "To improve is to change; to be perfect is to change often." We will surely create a better future with our own efforts.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语话题写作，主题是“Changes Around Us”，要求采用第一人称、夹叙夹议的体裁，时态以一般过去时和现在完成时为主。解题思路：1. 引入话题：用给定的开头句点明过去几年身边发生巨大变化，再用过渡句引出具体事例；2. 主体部分：从旅行（在线订票）、学习（小组合作、在线课程）、娱乐（现代影院、户外活动）、居住环境（高楼、绿色公园）四个具体维度展开，结合给定的中间句体现变化的好处；3. 表达看法：用给定的结尾句总结进步，加入名言升华主题，表达自身的幸运与自豪，确保字数达标、语言流畅。
【解析】
按照写作结构分步完成：1. 开头：直接点题，使用给定的“In the past few years, great changes have taken place around us.”引出话题，再用“Life is quite different from what it was ten years ago. Let me give you some examples.”过渡到具体事例；2. 主体：分四个维度阐述变化：①旅行：说明在线订票让出行更便捷；②学习：提到小组合作和在线课程的普及；③娱乐：介绍现代影院和户外活动的增多；④居住环境：描述高楼和绿色公园的建设，同时用“These changes have not only improved our living standards but also connected us more closely with the world.”串联变化的意义；3. 结尾：用“Little by little, we've made much progress.”总结进步，加入名言“To improve is to change; to be perfect is to change often.”升华主题，最后表达自己的幸运与自豪，符合字数要求。
【答案】
# Changes Around Us
In the past few years, great changes have taken place around us.
Life is quite different from what it was ten years ago. Let me give you some examples. When it comes to travelling, people now prefer to book tickets online. People now can travel to distant places quickly and conveniently. For study, students are doing more group work and taking online courses, which have become more and more popular. As for entertainment, modern cinemas offer better viewing experiences, and more people now choose to take all kinds of interesting outdoor activities in their free time. Our living environment has also become much better: plenty of tall buildings have been put up, and more and more green parks are built for people to relax in. These changes have not only improved our living standards but also connected us more closely with the world.
Little by little, we've made much progress. I feel so lucky and proud to live in such a developing society. It's amazing how much we have achieved together. As the saying goes, "To improve is to change; to be perfect is to change often." We will surely create a better future with our own efforts.
【知识点】
英语话题写作、现在完成时运用、夹叙夹议写作
【点评】
该范文紧扣主题，结构清晰，层次分明，严格遵循要求的人称、时态和体裁，融入给定的佳句与名言，语言流畅自然，准确表达对身边变化的看法，符合英语写作的评分标准。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题为英语话题写作，主题是“Changes Around Us”，要求采用第一人称、夹叙夹议的体裁，时态以一般过去时和现在完成时为主。解题思路：1. 引入话题：用给定的开头句点明过去几年身边发生巨大变化，再用过渡句引出具体事例；2. 主体部分：从旅行（在线订票）、学习（小组合作、在线课程）、娱乐（现代影院、户外活动）、居住环境（高楼、绿色公园）四个具体维度展开，结合给定的中间句体现变化的好处；3. 表达看法：用给定的结尾句总结进步，加入名言升华主题，表达自身的幸运与自豪，确保字数达标、语言流畅。
【解析】
按照写作结构分步完成：1. 开头：直接点题，使用给定的“In the past few years, great changes have taken place around us.”引出话题，再用“Life is quite different from what it was ten years ago. Let me give you some examples.”过渡到具体事例；2. 主体：分四个维度阐述变化：①旅行：说明在线订票让出行更便捷；②学习：提到小组合作和在线课程的普及；③娱乐：介绍现代影院和户外活动的增多；④居住环境：描述高楼和绿色公园的建设，同时用“These changes have not only improved our living standards but also connected us more closely with the world.”串联变化的意义；3. 结尾：用“Little by little, we've made much progress.”总结进步，加入名言“To improve is to change; to be perfect is to change often.”升华主题，最后表达自己的幸运与自豪，符合字数要求。
【答案】
# Changes Around Us
In the past few years, great changes have taken place around us.
Life is quite different from what it was ten years ago. Let me give you some examples. When it comes to travelling, people now prefer to book tickets online. People now can travel to distant places quickly and conveniently. For study, students are doing more group work and taking online courses, which have become more and more popular. As for entertainment, modern cinemas offer better viewing experiences, and more people now choose to take all kinds of interesting outdoor activities in their free time. Our living environment has also become much better: plenty of tall buildings have been put up, and more and more green parks are built for people to relax in. These changes have not only improved our living standards but also connected us more closely with the world.
Little by little, we've made much progress. I feel so lucky and proud to live in such a developing society. It's amazing how much we have achieved together. As the saying goes, "To improve is to change; to be perfect is to change often." We will surely create a better future with our own efforts.
【知识点】
英语话题写作、现在完成时运用、夹叙夹议写作
【点评】
该范文紧扣主题，结构清晰，层次分明，严格遵循要求的人称、时态和体裁，融入给定的佳句与名言，语言流畅自然，准确表达对身边变化的看法，符合英语写作的评分标准。
【难度系数】
0.6
