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(2025·江苏扬州江都区月考)春天是游览扬州的最佳季节，Tom 和他的同学正在计划去扬州玩三天。假如你是 Tom，请根据下面要点提示写一篇有关这次旅行的计划和注意事项的短文。
【要点】1. Why do you plan to visit Yangzhou?
2. What's your plan for the trip to Yangzhou?
3. How do you feel?
【注意】1. 文中必须包含所有要点，可以适当发挥。
2. 词数 100 左右，开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
3. 文中请勿提及真实姓名。
Spring is coming. We are planning to visit Yangzhou.
(2025·江苏扬州江都区月考)春天是游览扬州的最佳季节，Tom 和他的同学正在计划去扬州玩三天。假如你是 Tom，请根据下面要点提示写一篇有关这次旅行的计划和注意事项的短文。
【要点】1. Why do you plan to visit Yangzhou?
2. What's your plan for the trip to Yangzhou?
3. How do you feel?
【注意】1. 文中必须包含所有要点，可以适当发挥。
2. 词数 100 左右，开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
3. 文中请勿提及真实姓名。
Spring is coming. We are planning to visit Yangzhou.
Yangzhou has changed a lot. The beautiful flowers, fresh air, clean streets and convenient transport make it perfect for a spring trip.
Here's our plan. On the first day, we'll visit museums to learn about local culture. The next day, we'll enjoy the natural beauty at the Slender West Lake.
On the last day, we'll taste delicious food and shop for gifts on Dongguan Street.
We'll check the weather, wear comfortable shoes, and bring cameras.
We'll keep the environment clean and follow public rules.
We're excited to explore Yangzhou's beauty.
答案
One possible version
Spring is coming. We are planning to visit Yangzhou.
Yangzhou has changed a lot. The beautiful flowers, fresh air, clean streets and convenient transport make it perfect for a spring trip.
Here's our plan. On the first day, we'll visit museums to learn about local culture. The next day, we'll enjoy the natural beauty at the Slender West Lake. On the last day, we'll taste delicious food and shop for gifts on Dongguan Street.
We'll check the weather, wear comfortable shoes, and bring cameras. We'll keep the environment clean and follow public rules. We're excited to explore Yangzhou's beauty.
Spring is coming. We are planning to visit Yangzhou.
Yangzhou has changed a lot. The beautiful flowers, fresh air, clean streets and convenient transport make it perfect for a spring trip.
Here's our plan. On the first day, we'll visit museums to learn about local culture. The next day, we'll enjoy the natural beauty at the Slender West Lake. On the last day, we'll taste delicious food and shop for gifts on Dongguan Street.
We'll check the weather, wear comfortable shoes, and bring cameras. We'll keep the environment clean and follow public rules. We're excited to explore Yangzhou's beauty.
解析
【分析】
拿到这道题首先明确核心要求：身份是Tom，主题为扬州三日游计划，必须覆盖三个指定要点：出游原因、三日行程安排、个人感受，同时要满足词数100左右、不提及真实信息的规则。第一步先承接给定开头，先回应第一个要点，结合扬州春日的特色说明选择去扬州旅行的理由；第二步按照三天的时间线梳理具体出行安排，选择扬州代表性的景点和活动，让内容更贴合实际；第三步自然补充出行注意事项，最后抒发对这次旅行的期待，完成第三个要点的表达，全程注意逻辑连贯，不要遗漏题干的任何要求。
【解析】
1. 承接给定开头后，首先回应第一个要点，点明扬州春日鲜花盛放、空气清新、街道整洁、交通便利的优势，清晰说明选择春天去扬州旅行的原因；
2. 按照时间顺序排布三日行程：第一天参观博物馆了解本土文化，第二天游览瘦西湖欣赏自然美景，第三天去东关街品尝美食选购伴手礼，行程安排合理且极具扬州本地特色，清晰回应第二个要点；
3. 补充查天气、穿舒适鞋、爱护环境等出行实用注意事项，最后表达对探索扬州美景的期待，回应第三个要点，全文逻辑顺畅，所有题干要求的要点全部覆盖，词数符合100左右的要求，没有出现违规的真实个人信息。
【答案】
One possible version
Spring is coming. We are planning to visit Yangzhou.
Yangzhou has changed a lot. The beautiful flowers, fresh air, clean streets and convenient transport make it perfect for a spring trip.
Here's our plan. On the first day, we'll visit museums to learn about local culture. The next day, we'll enjoy the natural beauty at the Slender West Lake. On the last day, we'll taste delicious food and shop for gifts on Dongguan Street.
We'll check the weather, wear comfortable shoes, and bring cameras. We'll keep the environment clean and follow public rules. We're excited to explore Yangzhou's beauty.
【知识点】
英语旅行话题写作
要点类作文谋篇
常用出行表达
【点评】
本篇参考范文完全覆盖题干所有指定要点，行程设计贴合扬州本地的文旅特色，内容充实不空洞，行文按照“出游原因-三日行程规划-出行提示与个人感受”的逻辑层层递进，结构清晰，词数符合题目要求，没有出现违规内容。学生练习这类旅行计划作文时，可以参考该三段式的谋篇思路，能有效避免遗漏得分要点。
【难度系数】
0.6
拿到这道题首先明确核心要求：身份是Tom，主题为扬州三日游计划，必须覆盖三个指定要点：出游原因、三日行程安排、个人感受，同时要满足词数100左右、不提及真实信息的规则。第一步先承接给定开头，先回应第一个要点，结合扬州春日的特色说明选择去扬州旅行的理由；第二步按照三天的时间线梳理具体出行安排，选择扬州代表性的景点和活动，让内容更贴合实际；第三步自然补充出行注意事项，最后抒发对这次旅行的期待，完成第三个要点的表达，全程注意逻辑连贯，不要遗漏题干的任何要求。
【解析】
1. 承接给定开头后，首先回应第一个要点，点明扬州春日鲜花盛放、空气清新、街道整洁、交通便利的优势，清晰说明选择春天去扬州旅行的原因；
2. 按照时间顺序排布三日行程：第一天参观博物馆了解本土文化，第二天游览瘦西湖欣赏自然美景，第三天去东关街品尝美食选购伴手礼，行程安排合理且极具扬州本地特色，清晰回应第二个要点；
3. 补充查天气、穿舒适鞋、爱护环境等出行实用注意事项，最后表达对探索扬州美景的期待，回应第三个要点，全文逻辑顺畅，所有题干要求的要点全部覆盖，词数符合100左右的要求，没有出现违规的真实个人信息。
【答案】
One possible version
Spring is coming. We are planning to visit Yangzhou.
Yangzhou has changed a lot. The beautiful flowers, fresh air, clean streets and convenient transport make it perfect for a spring trip.
Here's our plan. On the first day, we'll visit museums to learn about local culture. The next day, we'll enjoy the natural beauty at the Slender West Lake. On the last day, we'll taste delicious food and shop for gifts on Dongguan Street.
We'll check the weather, wear comfortable shoes, and bring cameras. We'll keep the environment clean and follow public rules. We're excited to explore Yangzhou's beauty.
【知识点】
英语旅行话题写作
要点类作文谋篇
常用出行表达
【点评】
本篇参考范文完全覆盖题干所有指定要点，行程设计贴合扬州本地的文旅特色，内容充实不空洞，行文按照“出游原因-三日行程规划-出行提示与个人感受”的逻辑层层递进，结构清晰，词数符合题目要求，没有出现违规内容。学生练习这类旅行计划作文时，可以参考该三段式的谋篇思路，能有效避免遗漏得分要点。
【难度系数】
0.6
