Ⅷ.Writing practice.
请根据下面的表格所提供的信息,描述象先生、熊先生和猫小姐的身高和体重,并进行比较。不少于五句话。

请根据下面的表格所提供的信息,描述象先生、熊先生和猫小姐的身高和体重,并进行比较。不少于五句话。
Mr Elephant is 3.26 metres tall. He is 5000 kilograms. Mr Bear is
1.52 metres tall. He is 150 kilograms. Miss Cat is 0.34 metres tall. She is
5 kilograms. Mr Elephant is taller than Mr Bear. Mr Bear is taller than
Miss Cat. Mr Elephant is the tallest of the three. Mr Elephant is heavier
than both Mr Bear and Miss Cat together.
1.52 metres tall. He is 150 kilograms. Miss Cat is 0.34 metres tall. She is
5 kilograms. Mr Elephant is taller than Mr Bear. Mr Bear is taller than
Miss Cat. Mr Elephant is the tallest of the three. Mr Elephant is heavier
than both Mr Bear and Miss Cat together.
答案
Mr Elephant is 3.26 metres tall. He is 5000 kilograms. Mr Bear is
1.52 metres tall. He is 150 kilograms. Miss Cat is 0.34 metres tall. She is
5 kilograms. Mr Elephant is taller than Mr Bear. Mr Bear is taller than
Miss Cat. Mr Elephant is the tallest of the three. Mr Elephant is heavier
than both Mr Bear and Miss Cat together.
1.52 metres tall. He is 150 kilograms. Miss Cat is 0.34 metres tall. She is
5 kilograms. Mr Elephant is taller than Mr Bear. Mr Bear is taller than
Miss Cat. Mr Elephant is the tallest of the three. Mr Elephant is heavier
than both Mr Bear and Miss Cat together.
解析
【分析】
解题时首先第一步先从给定表格中完整提取三个角色的姓名、对应身高、对应体重的全部数值信息,先分别用简单句逐一描述每个角色的身高和体重,这部分内容就已经满足题目“不少于五句话”的基础要求;第二步按照题目要求完成对比部分,先从身高维度依次做两两比较,再引出三者的最高级结论,之后补充体重维度的对比,全程保证所有信息都来自表格,语法使用正确,逻辑通顺即可完成写作。
【解析】
1. 首先逐一介绍三个角色的基础身高、体重信息:
描述象先生:Mr Elephant is 3.26 metres tall. He is 5000 kilograms.
描述熊先生:Mr Bear is 1.52 metres tall. He is 150 kilograms.
描述猫小姐:Miss Cat is 0.34 metres tall. She is 5 kilograms.
2. 开展身高维度的对比:
先用比较级做两两对比:Mr Elephant is taller than Mr Bear. Mr Bear is taller than Miss Cat.
再引出最高级结论,说明三者中身高最高的对象:Mr Elephant is the tallest of the three.
3. 补充体重维度的对比,突出体重的差距:Mr Elephant is heavier than both Mr Bear and Miss Cat together.
整体内容完全匹配表格信息,句数远多于5句的要求,同时完成了描述和比较两个核心任务。
【答案】
Mr Elephant is 3.26 metres tall. He is 5000 kilograms. Mr Bear is 1.52 metres tall. He is 150 kilograms. Miss Cat is 0.34 metres tall. She is 5 kilograms. Mr Elephant is taller than Mr Bear. Mr Bear is taller than Miss Cat. Mr Elephant is the tallest of the three. Mr Elephant is heavier than both Mr Bear and Miss Cat together.
【知识点】
比较级用法,最高级用法,图表信息提取
【点评】
本题属于基础的英语写作题,核心考察学生从表格提取信息的能力,以及形容词比较级、最高级的正确使用,按照“先逐个介绍基础属性,再分维度对比”的逻辑书写,既不容易遗漏要点,也能轻松满足题目对句数的要求,注意描述身高体重的固定英语表达不要出错即可。
【难度系数】
0.7
解题时首先第一步先从给定表格中完整提取三个角色的姓名、对应身高、对应体重的全部数值信息,先分别用简单句逐一描述每个角色的身高和体重,这部分内容就已经满足题目“不少于五句话”的基础要求;第二步按照题目要求完成对比部分,先从身高维度依次做两两比较,再引出三者的最高级结论,之后补充体重维度的对比,全程保证所有信息都来自表格,语法使用正确,逻辑通顺即可完成写作。
【解析】
1. 首先逐一介绍三个角色的基础身高、体重信息:
描述象先生:Mr Elephant is 3.26 metres tall. He is 5000 kilograms.
描述熊先生:Mr Bear is 1.52 metres tall. He is 150 kilograms.
描述猫小姐:Miss Cat is 0.34 metres tall. She is 5 kilograms.
2. 开展身高维度的对比:
先用比较级做两两对比:Mr Elephant is taller than Mr Bear. Mr Bear is taller than Miss Cat.
再引出最高级结论,说明三者中身高最高的对象:Mr Elephant is the tallest of the three.
3. 补充体重维度的对比,突出体重的差距:Mr Elephant is heavier than both Mr Bear and Miss Cat together.
整体内容完全匹配表格信息,句数远多于5句的要求,同时完成了描述和比较两个核心任务。
【答案】
Mr Elephant is 3.26 metres tall. He is 5000 kilograms. Mr Bear is 1.52 metres tall. He is 150 kilograms. Miss Cat is 0.34 metres tall. She is 5 kilograms. Mr Elephant is taller than Mr Bear. Mr Bear is taller than Miss Cat. Mr Elephant is the tallest of the three. Mr Elephant is heavier than both Mr Bear and Miss Cat together.
【知识点】
比较级用法,最高级用法,图表信息提取
【点评】
本题属于基础的英语写作题,核心考察学生从表格提取信息的能力,以及形容词比较级、最高级的正确使用,按照“先逐个介绍基础属性,再分维度对比”的逻辑书写,既不容易遗漏要点,也能轻松满足题目对句数的要求,注意描述身高体重的固定英语表达不要出错即可。
【难度系数】
0.7
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