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三、书面表达
假设你是李华，你的外国朋友Kate来信说她暑假想学骑自行车。请你根据以下安全
建议给她写一封信：
1. 选择安全的地方练习；
2. 戴头盔以保护头部；
3. 不要边骑车边听音乐。
参考词汇:小建议tip 头盔helmet
要求:1. 词数80左右；
2. 可适当发挥，不得逐句翻译；
3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Kate,
Glad to hear that you want to learn to ride a bike! Here are some safety tips for you.
Stay safe and have fun learning!
Yours,
Li Hua
假设你是李华，你的外国朋友Kate来信说她暑假想学骑自行车。请你根据以下安全
建议给她写一封信：
1. 选择安全的地方练习；
2. 戴头盔以保护头部；
3. 不要边骑车边听音乐。
参考词汇:小建议tip 头盔helmet
要求:1. 词数80左右；
2. 可适当发挥，不得逐句翻译；
3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Kate,
Glad to hear that you want to learn to ride a bike! Here are some safety tips for you.
First, practise in safe places like parks or
school playgrounds. Always wear a helmet to
protect your head. It's very important! Also, don't
listen to music while riding. You need to hear the
sounds around you. Ask a parent or friend to help
you at first. You should start slowly. Don't ride too
fast. Watch out for cars and people near you. Follow
these rules, and you'll learn quickly and safely.
school playgrounds. Always wear a helmet to
protect your head. It's very important! Also, don't
listen to music while riding. You need to hear the
sounds around you. Ask a parent or friend to help
you at first. You should start slowly. Don't ride too
fast. Watch out for cars and people near you. Follow
these rules, and you'll learn quickly and safely.
Stay safe and have fun learning!
Yours,
Li Hua
答案
One possible version:
Dear Kate,
Glad to hear you want to learn to ride a bike!
Here are some safety tips for you.
First, practise in safe places like parks or
school playgrounds. Always wear a helmet to
protect your head. It's very important! Also, don't
listen to music while riding. You need to hear the
sounds around you. Ask a parent or friend to help
you at first. You should start slowly. Don't ride too
fast. Watch out for cars and people near you. Follow
these rules, and you'll learn quickly and safely.
Stay safe and have fun learning!
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Kate,
Glad to hear you want to learn to ride a bike!
Here are some safety tips for you.
First, practise in safe places like parks or
school playgrounds. Always wear a helmet to
protect your head. It's very important! Also, don't
listen to music while riding. You need to hear the
sounds around you. Ask a parent or friend to help
you at first. You should start slowly. Don't ride too
fast. Watch out for cars and people near you. Follow
these rules, and you'll learn quickly and safely.
Stay safe and have fun learning!
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】
拿到这道书面表达题，首先先明确核心要求：你以李华的身份给好友Kate回信，给她暑假学骑自行车提指定的3条安全建议。首先第一步先梳理必须覆盖的所有要点：选安全场地练习、戴头盔护头、骑车时不听音乐，不能遗漏。接下来思考行文逻辑：用表示顺序的连接词把要点串起来，避免内容生硬零散，还可以适当补充符合场景的合理细节，比如举例安全场地可以是公园、学校操场，解释不听音乐的原因是要留意周边环境，还可以加初学找亲友陪同、注意避让行人和车辆这类符合常识的小内容，让内容更饱满，同时控制总词数在80左右，语气要符合给好友写信的轻松自然的感觉，不要逐句生硬翻译提示要点。
【解析】
1. 审题定位：确定文体是给朋友的建议类英文书信，核心主题是学骑自行车的安全提示，所有指定要点必须全部覆盖，词数控制在80左右，开头结尾已给出无需重写。
2. 内容填充：
① 对应第一条建议：点明首先要选公园、学校操场这类没有太多机动车的安全区域练习，符合“选择安全的地方练习”的要求；
② 对应第二条建议：提醒对方一定要佩戴头盔来保护头部，强调该做法的重要性；
③ 对应第三条建议：说明骑车的时候不要听音乐，解释原因是需要留意周围的各类声响，规避潜在危险；
④ 补充合理拓展内容：初学阶段可以请家长或者朋友陪同，起步要慢，不要骑太快，留意身边的车辆和行人，让内容更真实自然。
3. 润色串联：用First、Also这类逻辑连接词把所有内容衔接起来，调整语句保证语法正确，语气贴合好友交流的语境，核对词数符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
First, practise in safe places like parks or school playgrounds. Always wear a helmet to protect your head. It's very important! Also, don't listen to music while riding. You need to hear the sounds around you. Ask a parent or friend to help you at first. You should start slowly. Don't ride too fast. Watch out for cars and people near you. Follow these rules, and you'll learn quickly and safely.
【知识点】
英文书信写作
建议类话题表达
逻辑连接词使用
【点评】
本题属于提纲类基础应用文写作，要点指向明确，学生答题时要注意避免逐句翻译题干给出的提示，通过补充合理的细节让行文更流畅自然，同时要注意不要遗漏任何指定的安全建议，控制词数在要求范围内，整体难度不高，很适合锻炼基础英文应用文的写作逻辑。
【难度系数】
0.7
拿到这道书面表达题，首先先明确核心要求：你以李华的身份给好友Kate回信，给她暑假学骑自行车提指定的3条安全建议。首先第一步先梳理必须覆盖的所有要点：选安全场地练习、戴头盔护头、骑车时不听音乐，不能遗漏。接下来思考行文逻辑：用表示顺序的连接词把要点串起来，避免内容生硬零散，还可以适当补充符合场景的合理细节，比如举例安全场地可以是公园、学校操场，解释不听音乐的原因是要留意周边环境，还可以加初学找亲友陪同、注意避让行人和车辆这类符合常识的小内容，让内容更饱满，同时控制总词数在80左右，语气要符合给好友写信的轻松自然的感觉，不要逐句生硬翻译提示要点。
【解析】
1. 审题定位：确定文体是给朋友的建议类英文书信，核心主题是学骑自行车的安全提示，所有指定要点必须全部覆盖，词数控制在80左右，开头结尾已给出无需重写。
2. 内容填充：
① 对应第一条建议：点明首先要选公园、学校操场这类没有太多机动车的安全区域练习，符合“选择安全的地方练习”的要求；
② 对应第二条建议：提醒对方一定要佩戴头盔来保护头部，强调该做法的重要性；
③ 对应第三条建议：说明骑车的时候不要听音乐，解释原因是需要留意周围的各类声响，规避潜在危险；
④ 补充合理拓展内容：初学阶段可以请家长或者朋友陪同，起步要慢，不要骑太快，留意身边的车辆和行人，让内容更真实自然。
3. 润色串联：用First、Also这类逻辑连接词把所有内容衔接起来，调整语句保证语法正确，语气贴合好友交流的语境，核对词数符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
First, practise in safe places like parks or school playgrounds. Always wear a helmet to protect your head. It's very important! Also, don't listen to music while riding. You need to hear the sounds around you. Ask a parent or friend to help you at first. You should start slowly. Don't ride too fast. Watch out for cars and people near you. Follow these rules, and you'll learn quickly and safely.
【知识点】
英文书信写作
建议类话题表达
逻辑连接词使用
【点评】
本题属于提纲类基础应用文写作，要点指向明确，学生答题时要注意避免逐句翻译题干给出的提示，通过补充合理的细节让行文更流畅自然，同时要注意不要遗漏任何指定的安全建议，控制词数在要求范围内，整体难度不高，很适合锻炼基础英文应用文的写作逻辑。
【难度系数】
0.7
