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七、书面表达(满分 30 分)
A. 句子翻译(每小题 2 分，满分 10 分)
71. 多亏了政府的支持，深圳在过去 40 年里发生了许多变化。
72. 毫无疑问，延安是中国人民在艰难时期斗争的象征。
73. 它们不仅是古代中国的艺术瑰宝，更是古代丝绸之路上不同文化之间交流的重要见证。
74. 如果你还没有机会读到这个精彩的系列，你现在必须去图书馆！
75. 有些人未经作者同意就制作盗版并分享是违法的。
A. 句子翻译(每小题 2 分，满分 10 分)
71. 多亏了政府的支持，深圳在过去 40 年里发生了许多变化。
Thanks to the support of the government，many changes have taken place in Shenzhen over the last 40 years.
72. 毫无疑问，延安是中国人民在艰难时期斗争的象征。
There is no doubt that Yan'an is a symbol of the Chinese people's struggle during the difficult period.
73. 它们不仅是古代中国的艺术瑰宝，更是古代丝绸之路上不同文化之间交流的重要见证。
They are not only art treasures from ancient China but also an important proof of the communication between different cultures along the ancient Silk Road.
74. 如果你还没有机会读到这个精彩的系列，你现在必须去图书馆！
If you haven't had the chance to read this fantastic series，you must go to the library now!
75. 有些人未经作者同意就制作盗版并分享是违法的。
It's against the law for some people to make pirate copies and share them without the writer's agreement.
答案
A. 句子翻译
71. Thanks to the support of the government，many changes have taken place in Shenzhen over the last 40 years.
72. There is no doubt that Yan'an is a symbol of the Chinese people's struggle during the difficult period.
73. They are not only art treasures from ancient China but also an important proof of the communication between different cultures along the ancient Silk Road.
74. If you haven't had the chance to read this fantastic series，you must go to the library now!
75. It's against the law for some people to make pirate copies and share them without the writer's agreement.
71. Thanks to the support of the government，many changes have taken place in Shenzhen over the last 40 years.
72. There is no doubt that Yan'an is a symbol of the Chinese people's struggle during the difficult period.
73. They are not only art treasures from ancient China but also an important proof of the communication between different cultures along the ancient Silk Road.
74. If you haven't had the chance to read this fantastic series，you must go to the library now!
75. It's against the law for some people to make pirate copies and share them without the writer's agreement.
解析
【分析】
做这类汉译英句子翻译题，首先要先拆解中文句意，优先定位句中的高频固定搭配和标志性结构：第一步先提取核心短语，比如“多亏了”“毫无疑问”这类有固定英文对应表达的内容，避免逐字直译产出中式英语；第二步根据句中的时间提示判断正确时态，比如“在过去40年里”这类时间标志要对应现在完成时；第三步梳理句子逻辑，选择合适的从句、并列结构或者形式主语等句式让表达符合英语语法规范；最后做完后检查拼写、单复数、主谓一致细节，确保语义和原句完全匹配。
【解析】
71. 先翻译固定短语“多亏了”为Thanks to，后接名词短语the support of the government（政府的支持）；“发生”用无被动的短语take place，时间状语over the last 40 years是现在完成时的标志，因此谓语变为have taken place，补充地点状语in Shenzhen即可得到完整句子。
72. 套用固定句型There is no doubt that...表示“毫无疑问”，that引导同位语从句；从句中“是...的象征”译为a symbol of，补充“中国人民的斗争”the Chinese people's struggle、“在艰难时期”during the difficult period的内容，组合后语义通顺。
73. 用并列结构not only...but also...对应“不仅...更是...”的逻辑，“古代中国的艺术瑰宝”译为art treasures from ancient China，“古代丝绸之路上不同文化之间交流的重要见证”译为an important proof of the communication between different cultures along the ancient Silk Road，主语They后接并列的两个表语即可。
74. 用if引导条件状语从句，从句中“还没有机会做某事”用现在完成时表达为haven't had the chance to read this fantastic series，主句用情态动词must接动词原形表达“必须去图书馆”的含义，补充时间状语now即可。
75. 用it作形式主语的常用句型It's against the law for sb to do sth避免句子头重脚轻，真正的主语“制作盗版并分享”译为make pirate copies and share them，“未经作者同意”译为without the writer's agreement，完全符合英语表达习惯。
【答案】
71. Thanks to the support of the government，many changes have taken place in Shenzhen over the last 40 years.
72. There is no doubt that Yan'an is a symbol of the Chinese people's struggle during the difficult period.
73. They are not only art treasures from ancient China but also an important proof of the communication between different cultures along the ancient Silk Road.
74. If you haven't had the chance to read this fantastic series，you must go to the library now!
75. It's against the law for some people to make pirate copies and share them without the writer's agreement.
【知识点】
常用固定短语搭配
现在完成时用法
英语主从复合句
【点评】
这组翻译题全部覆盖中学阶段核心的高频句型和短语考点，没有偏怪表达，重点考察学生对基础固定搭配的掌握、时态判断能力，以及规避中式英语的意识，平时积累常考的特殊句型可以大幅提升这类题的解题效率和正确率。
【难度系数】
0.6
做这类汉译英句子翻译题，首先要先拆解中文句意，优先定位句中的高频固定搭配和标志性结构：第一步先提取核心短语，比如“多亏了”“毫无疑问”这类有固定英文对应表达的内容，避免逐字直译产出中式英语；第二步根据句中的时间提示判断正确时态，比如“在过去40年里”这类时间标志要对应现在完成时；第三步梳理句子逻辑，选择合适的从句、并列结构或者形式主语等句式让表达符合英语语法规范；最后做完后检查拼写、单复数、主谓一致细节，确保语义和原句完全匹配。
【解析】
71. 先翻译固定短语“多亏了”为Thanks to，后接名词短语the support of the government（政府的支持）；“发生”用无被动的短语take place，时间状语over the last 40 years是现在完成时的标志，因此谓语变为have taken place，补充地点状语in Shenzhen即可得到完整句子。
72. 套用固定句型There is no doubt that...表示“毫无疑问”，that引导同位语从句；从句中“是...的象征”译为a symbol of，补充“中国人民的斗争”the Chinese people's struggle、“在艰难时期”during the difficult period的内容，组合后语义通顺。
73. 用并列结构not only...but also...对应“不仅...更是...”的逻辑，“古代中国的艺术瑰宝”译为art treasures from ancient China，“古代丝绸之路上不同文化之间交流的重要见证”译为an important proof of the communication between different cultures along the ancient Silk Road，主语They后接并列的两个表语即可。
74. 用if引导条件状语从句，从句中“还没有机会做某事”用现在完成时表达为haven't had the chance to read this fantastic series，主句用情态动词must接动词原形表达“必须去图书馆”的含义，补充时间状语now即可。
75. 用it作形式主语的常用句型It's against the law for sb to do sth避免句子头重脚轻，真正的主语“制作盗版并分享”译为make pirate copies and share them，“未经作者同意”译为without the writer's agreement，完全符合英语表达习惯。
【答案】
71. Thanks to the support of the government，many changes have taken place in Shenzhen over the last 40 years.
72. There is no doubt that Yan'an is a symbol of the Chinese people's struggle during the difficult period.
73. They are not only art treasures from ancient China but also an important proof of the communication between different cultures along the ancient Silk Road.
74. If you haven't had the chance to read this fantastic series，you must go to the library now!
75. It's against the law for some people to make pirate copies and share them without the writer's agreement.
【知识点】
常用固定短语搭配
现在完成时用法
英语主从复合句
【点评】
这组翻译题全部覆盖中学阶段核心的高频句型和短语考点，没有偏怪表达，重点考察学生对基础固定搭配的掌握、时态判断能力，以及规避中式英语的意识，平时积累常考的特殊句型可以大幅提升这类题的解题效率和正确率。
【难度系数】
0.6
B. 写作(满分 20 分)
古人云:“读万卷书，行万里路。”阅读和旅行都是学习和成长的重要方式。请以 *Reading and Travelling: Paths to Growth* (阅读与旅行:成长之路)为题，写一篇短文，谈谈你对“读万卷书”和“行万里路”的理解。
要点:1.你的阅读习惯(阅读时间、书籍类型、阅读感悟); 2.记忆深刻的一次旅行(时间、地点、活动、意义); 3.结合两者，谈谈你的看法。
注意事项:1.词数 80—100，已给出的文字不计入总词数; 2. 必须包含给出的要点，可适当发挥; 3.文中不得出现真实的校名、人名等信息。
Reading and Travelling: Paths to Growth
Just as the saying goes, “Read ten thousand books and travel ten thousand miles.”
古人云:“读万卷书，行万里路。”阅读和旅行都是学习和成长的重要方式。请以 *Reading and Travelling: Paths to Growth* (阅读与旅行:成长之路)为题，写一篇短文，谈谈你对“读万卷书”和“行万里路”的理解。
要点:1.你的阅读习惯(阅读时间、书籍类型、阅读感悟); 2.记忆深刻的一次旅行(时间、地点、活动、意义); 3.结合两者，谈谈你的看法。
注意事项:1.词数 80—100，已给出的文字不计入总词数; 2. 必须包含给出的要点，可适当发挥; 3.文中不得出现真实的校名、人名等信息。
Reading and Travelling: Paths to Growth
Just as the saying goes, “Read ten thousand books and travel ten thousand miles.”
答案
B. 写作
Reading and Travelling: Paths to Growth
Just as the saying goes，“Read ten thousand books and travel ten thousand miles。” I enjoy reading before sleep. Storybooks and science books are my favourites. They open my eyes to different worlds and ideas.
Last summer，I travelled to Beijing with my family. We visited the Great Wall. Climbing it was tiring but amazing. Seeing it in real life made the history I read in books come alive. It was an unforgettable experience.
I think both reading and travelling are important for growth. Reading gives us knowledge，and travelling helps us experience the world. Together，they help us develop in many ways.
Unit 5
Reading and Travelling: Paths to Growth
Just as the saying goes，“Read ten thousand books and travel ten thousand miles。” I enjoy reading before sleep. Storybooks and science books are my favourites. They open my eyes to different worlds and ideas.
Last summer，I travelled to Beijing with my family. We visited the Great Wall. Climbing it was tiring but amazing. Seeing it in real life made the history I read in books come alive. It was an unforgettable experience.
I think both reading and travelling are important for growth. Reading gives us knowledge，and travelling helps us experience the world. Together，they help us develop in many ways.
Unit 5
解析
【分析】
拿到这道写作题，首先第一步先圈出题干要求的三个必写核心要点，避免内容遗漏：首先第一部分要对应要点1，清晰交代自己的阅读时间、常读的书籍类型，再补充对应的阅读感悟，把阅读习惯的内容写完整；第二部分对应要点2，选择无隐私信息的公共旅行场景，依次写明旅行的时间、地点、参与的活动，再点明这次旅行的特殊意义；第三部分对应要点3，把阅读和旅行的作用结合起来，呼应“成长路径”的主题。最后写完后核对词数控制在80-100区间，确认没有出现真实校名、人名等违规信息即可。
【解析】
写作可按照三段式结构依次完成：
1. 开篇承接题干给出的已有引语，直接切入阅读习惯的介绍：说明自己习惯睡前阅读，最喜欢故事类和科普类书籍，点明这些读物能帮自己开阔眼界，了解不同的观点，完成第一个要点的全部内容。
2. 第二段介绍记忆深刻的旅行：交代去年暑假和家人去北京旅行，游览了长城，点明攀爬长城虽然累但体验很棒，亲眼见到长城让之前在书本里读到的历史变得鲜活，完成第二个要点的全部内容。
3. 最后一段升华主题，点明二者的关系：阅读能给我们输送知识，旅行能帮我们亲身体验世界，二者共同助力我们多维度成长，完成第三个要点，同时呼应作文标题。
最后通读全文，修正语法错误，调整语句流畅度，确认词数符合要求。
【答案】
Reading and Travelling: Paths to Growth
Just as the saying goes, "Read ten thousand books and travel ten thousand miles." I enjoy reading before sleep. Storybooks and science books are my favourites. They open my eyes to different worlds and ideas.
Last summer, I travelled to Beijing with my family. We visited the Great Wall. Climbing it was tiring but amazing. Seeing it in real life made the history I read in books come alive. It was an unforgettable experience.
I think both reading and travelling are important for growth. Reading gives us knowledge, and travelling helps us experience the world. Together, they help us develop in many ways.
【知识点】
提纲类英语作文写作，话题内容谋篇布局，要点信息整合
【点评】
本题是初中阶段的常规话题写作，题干给出的提示信息非常明确，不需要学生做复杂的创意拓展，只需要按照要求依次覆盖所有指定要点，保证语句通顺无明显语法错误，控制词数在规定区间内，避免出现真实个人信息，就可以拿到不错的分数，写作时不需要刻意堆砌难词，表意清晰贴合主题即可。
【难度系数】
0.6
拿到这道写作题，首先第一步先圈出题干要求的三个必写核心要点，避免内容遗漏：首先第一部分要对应要点1，清晰交代自己的阅读时间、常读的书籍类型，再补充对应的阅读感悟，把阅读习惯的内容写完整；第二部分对应要点2，选择无隐私信息的公共旅行场景，依次写明旅行的时间、地点、参与的活动，再点明这次旅行的特殊意义；第三部分对应要点3，把阅读和旅行的作用结合起来，呼应“成长路径”的主题。最后写完后核对词数控制在80-100区间，确认没有出现真实校名、人名等违规信息即可。
【解析】
写作可按照三段式结构依次完成：
1. 开篇承接题干给出的已有引语，直接切入阅读习惯的介绍：说明自己习惯睡前阅读，最喜欢故事类和科普类书籍，点明这些读物能帮自己开阔眼界，了解不同的观点，完成第一个要点的全部内容。
2. 第二段介绍记忆深刻的旅行：交代去年暑假和家人去北京旅行，游览了长城，点明攀爬长城虽然累但体验很棒，亲眼见到长城让之前在书本里读到的历史变得鲜活，完成第二个要点的全部内容。
3. 最后一段升华主题，点明二者的关系：阅读能给我们输送知识，旅行能帮我们亲身体验世界，二者共同助力我们多维度成长，完成第三个要点，同时呼应作文标题。
最后通读全文，修正语法错误，调整语句流畅度，确认词数符合要求。
【答案】
Reading and Travelling: Paths to Growth
Just as the saying goes, "Read ten thousand books and travel ten thousand miles." I enjoy reading before sleep. Storybooks and science books are my favourites. They open my eyes to different worlds and ideas.
Last summer, I travelled to Beijing with my family. We visited the Great Wall. Climbing it was tiring but amazing. Seeing it in real life made the history I read in books come alive. It was an unforgettable experience.
I think both reading and travelling are important for growth. Reading gives us knowledge, and travelling helps us experience the world. Together, they help us develop in many ways.
【知识点】
提纲类英语作文写作，话题内容谋篇布局，要点信息整合
【点评】
本题是初中阶段的常规话题写作，题干给出的提示信息非常明确，不需要学生做复杂的创意拓展，只需要按照要求依次覆盖所有指定要点，保证语句通顺无明显语法错误，控制词数在规定区间内，避免出现真实个人信息，就可以拿到不错的分数，写作时不需要刻意堆砌难词，表意清晰贴合主题即可。
【难度系数】
0.6
