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◆典型例题
假如你是李华,你正在美国的姑妈家度假。请根据下表信息,给你的广州同学王涛写一张80词左右的明信片。
◆写作思路
1.时态:使用现在进行时
2.人称:使用第一人称
3.结构:
◆写作模板(句式)
开头句:
How's it going? I'm visiting my aunt in America.
近来可好?我正在美国看望我的姑妈。
过渡句:
1. It's winter here now. It's cold and snowing really hard.
这里现在是冬天。天气寒冷,雪下得很大。
2. The weather here is just right for playing with snow.
这里的天气非常适合玩雪。
3. So I am skating and making a snowman with my cousins.
所以我正和我的表兄妹们一起滑冰、堆雪人。
4. And are you studying hard,or are you having fun?
你在努力学习,还是在开心地玩?
结尾句:
Please write back to me soon.
请尽快给我回信。
◆范文欣赏
Dear Wang Tao,
How's it going? I'm visiting my aunt in America.
It's winter here now. It's cold and snowing really hard. However, it's very hot in Guangzhou now,isn't it? The weather here is just right for playing with snow. So I am skating and making a snowman with my cousins. We are having a good time playing in the snow. We are really relaxed. And are you studying hard,or are you having fun?
Please write back to me soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
假如你是李华,你正在美国的姑妈家度假。请根据下表信息,给你的广州同学王涛写一张80词左右的明信片。
◆写作思路
1.时态:使用现在进行时
2.人称:使用第一人称
3.结构:
◆写作模板(句式)
开头句:
How's it going? I'm visiting my aunt in America.
近来可好?我正在美国看望我的姑妈。
过渡句:
1. It's winter here now. It's cold and snowing really hard.
这里现在是冬天。天气寒冷,雪下得很大。
2. The weather here is just right for playing with snow.
这里的天气非常适合玩雪。
3. So I am skating and making a snowman with my cousins.
所以我正和我的表兄妹们一起滑冰、堆雪人。
4. And are you studying hard,or are you having fun?
你在努力学习,还是在开心地玩?
结尾句:
Please write back to me soon.
请尽快给我回信。
◆范文欣赏
Dear Wang Tao,
How's it going? I'm visiting my aunt in America.
It's winter here now. It's cold and snowing really hard. However, it's very hot in Guangzhou now,isn't it? The weather here is just right for playing with snow. So I am skating and making a snowman with my cousins. We are having a good time playing in the snow. We are really relaxed. And are you studying hard,or are you having fun?
Please write back to me soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
答案
Dear Wang Tao,
How's it going? I'm visiting my aunt in America.
It's winter here now. It's cold and snowing really hard. However, it's very hot in Guangzhou now,isn't it? The weather here is just right for playing with snow. So I am skating and making a snowman with my cousins. We are having a good time playing in the snow. We are really relaxed. And are you studying hard,or are you having fun?
Please write back to me soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
How's it going? I'm visiting my aunt in America.
It's winter here now. It's cold and snowing really hard. However, it's very hot in Guangzhou now,isn't it? The weather here is just right for playing with snow. So I am skating and making a snowman with my cousins. We are having a good time playing in the snow. We are really relaxed. And are you studying hard,or are you having fun?
Please write back to me soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】
本题要求以李华的身份给广州同学王涛写一张80词左右的度假明信片，需使用第一人称和现在进行时。解题思路：1. 开头用问候句点明自己在美国看望姑妈的情况；2. 描述当地冬季下雪的天气，对比广州的炎热，再写和表兄妹玩雪的活动；3. 询问对方近况；4. 结尾请求回信，确保内容连贯、时态正确、符合要求。
【解析】
按照写作要求，先写开头问候句点明身份与近况；接着描述美国冬季下雪的天气，对比广州的炎热，再说明适合玩雪并写出具体活动；然后询问对方的学习或玩乐情况；最后结尾请求回信，全程使用第一人称和现在进行时，控制词数在80左右，内容连贯自然。
【答案】
Dear Wang Tao,
How's it going? I'm visiting my aunt in America.
It's winter here now. It's cold and snowing really hard. However, it's very hot in Guangzhou now,isn't it? The weather here is just right for playing with snow. So I am skating and making a snowman with my cousins. We are having a good time playing in the snow. We are really relaxed. And are you studying hard,or are you having fun?
Please write back to me soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、现在进行时、情景交际
【点评】
该范文严格遵循写作要求，时态运用准确，结构清晰，内容充实，通过对比中美天气丰富了表达，语言自然流畅，符合李华的身份，是一篇优秀的明信片写作范例。
【难度系数】
0.7
本题要求以李华的身份给广州同学王涛写一张80词左右的度假明信片，需使用第一人称和现在进行时。解题思路：1. 开头用问候句点明自己在美国看望姑妈的情况；2. 描述当地冬季下雪的天气，对比广州的炎热，再写和表兄妹玩雪的活动；3. 询问对方近况；4. 结尾请求回信，确保内容连贯、时态正确、符合要求。
【解析】
按照写作要求，先写开头问候句点明身份与近况；接着描述美国冬季下雪的天气，对比广州的炎热，再说明适合玩雪并写出具体活动；然后询问对方的学习或玩乐情况；最后结尾请求回信，全程使用第一人称和现在进行时，控制词数在80左右，内容连贯自然。
【答案】
Dear Wang Tao,
How's it going? I'm visiting my aunt in America.
It's winter here now. It's cold and snowing really hard. However, it's very hot in Guangzhou now,isn't it? The weather here is just right for playing with snow. So I am skating and making a snowman with my cousins. We are having a good time playing in the snow. We are really relaxed. And are you studying hard,or are you having fun?
Please write back to me soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、现在进行时、情景交际
【点评】
该范文严格遵循写作要求，时态运用准确，结构清晰，内容充实，通过对比中美天气丰富了表达，语言自然流畅，符合李华的身份，是一篇优秀的明信片写作范例。
【难度系数】
0.7
