My Friend and I
开篇点题 → 总述: In some ways we are the same,
but in some ways we are different.
细节介绍 → 外表: ... is as tall as me, but he is...
性格: Both of us are ... But I am more ... and
Li Lei is...
爱好: I am better at ... and he...
学习: I work as hard as ... , but he gets better
grades than me. He often helps me ...
收篇结尾 → 发表观点: I think friends should ... As long
as ..., we can be friends forever.
开篇点题 → 总述: In some ways we are the same,
but in some ways we are different.
细节介绍 → 外表: ... is as tall as me, but he is...
性格: Both of us are ... But I am more ... and
Li Lei is...
学习: I work as hard as ... , but he gets better
grades than me. He often helps me ...
收篇结尾 → 发表观点: I think friends should ... As long
as ..., we can be friends forever.
答案
# My Friend and I
My best friend is Li Lei. In some ways we are the same, but in some ways we are different.
Li Lei is as tall as me, but he is much thinner than me. Both of us are very outgoing and love to make new friends. But I am more active in all kinds of after-school activities, and Li Lei is quieter, he always prefers to read different kinds of books in his free time. I am better at playing basketball, so I often play it with other classmates after class. And he does very well in playing the piano, he takes piano lessons every Saturday. I work as hard as him, but he gets better grades than me, especially in math. He often helps me with my math homework when I meet difficult problems.
I think friends should always support and help each other. As long as we truly care about each other and share both happiness and sadness together, we can be friends forever.
My best friend is Li Lei. In some ways we are the same, but in some ways we are different.
Li Lei is as tall as me, but he is much thinner than me. Both of us are very outgoing and love to make new friends. But I am more active in all kinds of after-school activities, and Li Lei is quieter, he always prefers to read different kinds of books in his free time. I am better at playing basketball, so I often play it with other classmates after class. And he does very well in playing the piano, he takes piano lessons every Saturday. I work as hard as him, but he gets better grades than me, especially in math. He often helps me with my math homework when I meet difficult problems.
I think friends should always support and help each other. As long as we truly care about each other and share both happiness and sadness together, we can be friends forever.
解析
本题是人教版八年级上册的人物对比类话题写作,核心要求灵活运用本单元所学的as...as同级比较结构、形容词/副词比较级,按照“开篇点题-细节对比-收尾升华”的三段式结构完成写作,需要围绕提示的外表、性格、爱好、学习四个维度,清晰介绍自己和好友的异同,内容贴合校园日常,语言难度符合八年级学习要求。
类文训练
根据表格的内容,用英语写一篇短文,介绍你和你最好的朋友周晶之间的相同点和不同点。

要求:
1. 词数不少于 80;
2. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁;
3. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名。
根据表格的内容,用英语写一篇短文,介绍你和你最好的朋友周晶之间的相同点和不同点。
要求:
1. 词数不少于 80;
2. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁;
3. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名。
答案
My Best Friend and Me
My best friend is Zhou Jing. We get on very well with each other, and we have both similarities and differences.
Zhou Jing is taller and more outgoing than me. She keeps exercising every day, and she likes watching movies to relax herself when she is free. But I am a little different from her. I am interested in drawing and I spend lots of my free time drawing pictures. And I only exercise three times a week.
However, we also share a lot of things. Both of us love music and sports, and we always talk about our favorite songs and ball games together. What's more, we are both good at our lessons, and we often help each other with our study.
I really feel happy to have such a good friend.
My best friend is Zhou Jing. We get on very well with each other, and we have both similarities and differences.
Zhou Jing is taller and more outgoing than me. She keeps exercising every day, and she likes watching movies to relax herself when she is free. But I am a little different from her. I am interested in drawing and I spend lots of my free time drawing pictures. And I only exercise three times a week.
However, we also share a lot of things. Both of us love music and sports, and we always talk about our favorite songs and ball games together. What's more, we are both good at our lessons, and we often help each other with our study.
I really feel happy to have such a good friend.
解析
这是一篇介绍好友与自身异同的话题写作,写作思路如下:
1. 开篇点题:直接点明自己最好的朋友是周晶,引出下文对我们异同点的介绍。
2. 主体先阐述不同点:运用本单元所学的形容词比较级描述周晶更高、更开朗的特征,依次说明她每日锻炼、喜爱看电影的爱好,再对应介绍自己喜欢画画、每周锻炼三次的特点。
3. 之后介绍相同点:说明二人都热爱音乐和运动,且学习成绩都很优异,补充少量细节让内容更自然。
4. 结尾简单收尾,保证词数不少于80,语句符合八年级词汇语法要求,不出现真实校名姓名,流畅通顺。
1. 开篇点题:直接点明自己最好的朋友是周晶,引出下文对我们异同点的介绍。
2. 主体先阐述不同点:运用本单元所学的形容词比较级描述周晶更高、更开朗的特征,依次说明她每日锻炼、喜爱看电影的爱好,再对应介绍自己喜欢画画、每周锻炼三次的特点。
3. 之后介绍相同点:说明二人都热爱音乐和运动,且学习成绩都很优异,补充少量细节让内容更自然。
4. 结尾简单收尾,保证词数不少于80,语句符合八年级词汇语法要求,不出现真实校名姓名,流畅通顺。
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