最近,你们学校开展了“科技与生活”主题活动,英语老师要求大家分享自己对科技的看法。请你根据以下思维导图的提示,用英文写一篇短文,介绍你最喜欢的科技产品。

注意:(1)可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息。
(2)不能照抄原文;不得在作文中出现真实校名和学生的真实姓名。
(3)语句连贯,词数80左右。作文的开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
【巧列提纲】(以下
部分仅供参考,希望同学们可以多开动脑筋、发散思维)

【实战演练】
Technology has changed our lives in many ways.
【写作评价】(评分原则与方法可参考本书最后一页)

注意:(1)可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息。
(2)不能照抄原文;不得在作文中出现真实校名和学生的真实姓名。
(3)语句连贯,词数80左右。作文的开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
【巧列提纲】(以下
【实战演练】
Technology has changed our lives in many ways.
Among all the high-tech products, my favourite is the smartphone.
Smartphones have brought huge changes to my life.
In terms of studying, I can use different kinds of learning apps like online dictionaries and language-learning apps.
They greatly help my self-study.
When it comes to entertainment, I can listen to music, watch movies, or play games anytime.
It helps me relax after a long day’s study.
As for social communication, I can keep in touch with friends and relatives far away through video calls.
In conclusion, technology has a lot of advantages. We can enjoy its benefits by using it properly.
【写作评价】(评分原则与方法可参考本书最后一页)
答案
One possible version:
Technology has changed our lives in many ways. Among all the high-tech products, my favourite is the smartphone.
Smartphones have brought huge changes to my life. In terms of studying, I can use different kinds of learning apps like online dictionaries and language-learning apps. They greatly help my self-study. When it comes to entertainment, I can listen to music, watch movies, or play games anytime. It helps me relax after a long day’s study. As for social communication, I can keep in touch with friends and relatives far away through video calls.
In conclusion, technology has a lot of advantages. We can enjoy its benefits by using it properly.
Technology has changed our lives in many ways. Among all the high-tech products, my favourite is the smartphone.
Smartphones have brought huge changes to my life. In terms of studying, I can use different kinds of learning apps like online dictionaries and language-learning apps. They greatly help my self-study. When it comes to entertainment, I can listen to music, watch movies, or play games anytime. It helps me relax after a long day’s study. As for social communication, I can keep in touch with friends and relatives far away through video calls.
In conclusion, technology has a lot of advantages. We can enjoy its benefits by using it properly.
解析
【分析】
本题要求写一篇介绍最喜欢的科技产品的英语短文,开头已给出。解题思路:1. 选择贴近学生生活的科技产品(如智能手机);2. 围绕学习、娱乐、社交等常见角度(对应思维导图提示)展开,适当拓展细节;3. 结尾总结合理使用科技的好处,注意词数80左右,避免真实信息,语句连贯。
【解析】
写作步骤:1. 承接开头句,点明最喜欢的科技产品是智能手机;2. 分三个维度阐述智能手机的作用:①学习方面:用学习APP辅助自学;②娱乐方面:利用其听音乐、看电影等放松;③社交方面:通过视频通话联系亲友;3. 结尾总结合理使用科技的益处,确保语句通顺、符合词数要求。
【答案】
Technology has changed our lives in many ways. Among all the high-tech products, my favourite is the smartphone.
Smartphones have brought huge changes to my life. In terms of studying, I can use different kinds of learning apps like online dictionaries and language-learning apps. They greatly help my self-study. When it comes to entertainment, I can listen to music, watch movies, or play games anytime. It helps me relax after a long day’s study. As for social communication, I can keep in touch with friends and relatives far away through video calls.
In conclusion, technology has a lot of advantages. We can enjoy its benefits by using it properly.
【知识点】
英语短文写作、科技话题表达、分点论述结构
【点评】
本题为贴近学生生活的英语话题写作题,考查学生的英语组织与表达能力,结构清晰易把握,围绕产品的不同优势展开即可完成,难度适中。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题要求写一篇介绍最喜欢的科技产品的英语短文,开头已给出。解题思路:1. 选择贴近学生生活的科技产品(如智能手机);2. 围绕学习、娱乐、社交等常见角度(对应思维导图提示)展开,适当拓展细节;3. 结尾总结合理使用科技的好处,注意词数80左右,避免真实信息,语句连贯。
【解析】
写作步骤:1. 承接开头句,点明最喜欢的科技产品是智能手机;2. 分三个维度阐述智能手机的作用:①学习方面:用学习APP辅助自学;②娱乐方面:利用其听音乐、看电影等放松;③社交方面:通过视频通话联系亲友;3. 结尾总结合理使用科技的益处,确保语句通顺、符合词数要求。
【答案】
Technology has changed our lives in many ways. Among all the high-tech products, my favourite is the smartphone.
Smartphones have brought huge changes to my life. In terms of studying, I can use different kinds of learning apps like online dictionaries and language-learning apps. They greatly help my self-study. When it comes to entertainment, I can listen to music, watch movies, or play games anytime. It helps me relax after a long day’s study. As for social communication, I can keep in touch with friends and relatives far away through video calls.
In conclusion, technology has a lot of advantages. We can enjoy its benefits by using it properly.
【知识点】
英语短文写作、科技话题表达、分点论述结构
【点评】
本题为贴近学生生活的英语话题写作题,考查学生的英语组织与表达能力,结构清晰易把握,围绕产品的不同优势展开即可完成,难度适中。
【难度系数】
0.6
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