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假设你是李华,上个星期你和家人一起去了三亚旅游。请你根据下面提示给你的笔友Rose写一封80~100词的电子邮件,介绍这次旅游及你的感受(邮件的开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数)。

Dear Rose,
How’s it going? Now let me tell you something about my trip.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
假设你是李华,上个星期你和家人一起去了三亚旅游。请你根据下面提示给你的笔友Rose写一封80~100词的电子邮件,介绍这次旅游及你的感受(邮件的开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Rose,
How’s it going? Now let me tell you something about my trip.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
答案
I went to Sanya with my family last week. The weather there was sunny and hot during our trip. We enjoyed a lot of fun activities. We went swimming in the blue clear sea, and we also went boating on the calm water. We tasted different kinds of delicious fresh seafood at a local restaurant too. We took quite a few great photos there. All of us had a wonderful time, and this trip is really an unforgettable experience for me.
解析
【分析】
这是一封给笔友的电子邮件写作题,需根据给定提示信息(旅行时间、地点、天气、活动)介绍三亚之旅并表达感受。解题思路:1. 确定时态为一般过去时(描述过去的旅行);2. 依次点明旅行的时间、同行者、地点、天气;3. 列举提示中的活动,适当补充细节丰富内容;4. 表达旅行感受,确保词数在80-100之间,符合邮件语气。
【解析】
结合提示信息,用一般过去时组织内容:先说明旅行的时间、同行者与地点,再描述当地天气,接着介绍参与的活动,最后表达旅行的快乐感受,使内容完整流畅,符合邮件格式和词数要求。
【答案】
I went to Sanya with my family last week. The weather there was sunny and hot during our trip. We enjoyed a lot of fun activities. We went swimming in the blue clear sea, and we also went boating on the calm water. We tasted different kinds of delicious fresh seafood at a local restaurant too. We took quite a few great photos there. All of us had a wonderful time, and this trip is really an unforgettable experience for me.
【知识点】
英语书信写作;一般过去时;词汇运用
【点评】
本文覆盖了所有题目要点,时态正确,语言流畅自然,补充了合理细节,准确表达了旅行感受,符合邮件格式和词数要求。
【难度系数】
0.5
这是一封给笔友的电子邮件写作题,需根据给定提示信息(旅行时间、地点、天气、活动)介绍三亚之旅并表达感受。解题思路:1. 确定时态为一般过去时(描述过去的旅行);2. 依次点明旅行的时间、同行者、地点、天气;3. 列举提示中的活动,适当补充细节丰富内容;4. 表达旅行感受,确保词数在80-100之间,符合邮件语气。
【解析】
结合提示信息,用一般过去时组织内容:先说明旅行的时间、同行者与地点,再描述当地天气,接着介绍参与的活动,最后表达旅行的快乐感受,使内容完整流畅,符合邮件格式和词数要求。
【答案】
I went to Sanya with my family last week. The weather there was sunny and hot during our trip. We enjoyed a lot of fun activities. We went swimming in the blue clear sea, and we also went boating on the calm water. We tasted different kinds of delicious fresh seafood at a local restaurant too. We took quite a few great photos there. All of us had a wonderful time, and this trip is really an unforgettable experience for me.
【知识点】
英语书信写作;一般过去时;词汇运用
【点评】
本文覆盖了所有题目要点,时态正确,语言流畅自然,补充了合理细节,准确表达了旅行感受,符合邮件格式和词数要求。
【难度系数】
0.5
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